Awesome story, I am definitely interested in seeing what happens next.
I think you should continue writing. And yuki is that deidera(can't really spell),a relative of deidera,or your own character with simalaritys to deidera?
Un! This is great!
Its the same story I added to my favorites on fanfiction :)
So awesome... I didnt even know this site existed (hehe...)
Take your time updating?
like it a lot hope u update soon
Definently Sasu/Naru. It'll sound odd if it were any other couple.
I LOVE THIS STORY! Shame it's only two chapters, though. Update soon!
*is now addicted to this storry* wow this is more addicting than coffee it was very good i loved it. hmm as for pairing ideas: as long as it isnt yuri i dont care but these are the characters i like in the show: gaara,kakashi,sai, lee*drules*, shikamaru,i really only like sasuke if he's paired with naruto*yaoi or non i dont care*, hmm you could probly get in a kiss with orochimaru but thats probly all unless your super creative(which i think you are from this master peice), maybe plossibly kabuto, god you could probly do domething with jiraya cuase he so perverted. you should decide your self though its your story do what ever you want with it.
*is now addicted to this storry* wow this is more addicting than coffee it was very good i loved it. hmm as for pairing ideas: as long as it isnt yuri i dont care but these are the characters i like in the show: gaara,kakashi,sai, lee*drules*, shikamaru,i really only like sasuke if he's paired with naruto*yaoi or non i dont care*, hmm you could probly get in a kiss with orochimaru but thats probly all unless your super creative(which i think you are from this master peice), maybe plossibly kabuto, god you could probly do domething with jiraya cuase he so perverted. you should decide your self though its your story do what ever you want with it.
Good idea, but what's with the numbers after some of the words?
Author's Response: Thats an error with my word porcessor, it isn't very compatable with anything else and has a habbit of doing that. He's hard to train
naruhina yuri xD
Author's Response: That is almost deffinatly a no, not for this story. Maybe in another.