Reviews For Sharpie
Name: ChicagoIsCalling7 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 - 01:03 pm · For: Stinky Little Pen
Ooooh! That was cute! Clever and original! I've seen stories about Sasuke and Naruto finding out about fanfictions, or popsicles, or stuff like that, but not Sharpies! I liked it!
Naruto was adorable, and Sasuke was devious.
The perfect match.
Personally, I liked "Secret Weapon" better, but whatever. Like I said, this was great too.
You should have more reviews for this... I'm kinda disappointed with the TONFA community.... grrr... >.<
Author's Response: Haha, nah, I don't blame them. This isn't my best work, and I know it. I'm glad some people enjoyed it, but still. ^-^ Anyway, thank you for reading and reviewing. That hasn't happened in a while, and I've been kind of out of it, so I really appriciate it. I think Sasuke and Naruto turned out really well as characters too, even if Naruto was a teeny bit dumber than usual... again, thanks for the review!
Name: inuyashas_only_1 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/09 - 12:04 pm · For: Stinky Little Pen
HOLY CRAP! That was so...well, it was so lemony! OMG, that was a horny Sasuke at his best! I loved it-- I hate to say it because I've never been a yaoi person, but that was incredible! Please, please, please write more lemons! That may sound super pervy of me but you're AWESOME!
Author's Response: Wow. It's been so long since I've posted anything or gotten a review, so I almost didn't believe it when I got two new ones at once! ^-^' Anyway, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work- especially one of my new favorite authors! That means a lot! I'm never too sure of my lemons, so that's encouraging. It means even more that I see you're turing into a bit of a yaoi fangirl yourself. ^-^ Anyway, I'm actually writing a one-shot (I'm waiting for it to be beta-ed), but it's sort of fluffy. Maybe I'll write another lemon soon after? Hmm...
Name: fuyuko (Signed) · Date: 09/10/08 - 02:30 am · For: Stinky Little Pen
Haha. That was interesting indeed.
The idea of Sharpies is very original, I doubt I would've thought of
that.
I hope this doesn't offend you in any way, but I felt as if the ending were cut short like you just wanted the story to be finished with and over.
Otherwise, it was good.
Author's Response: No, no, that doesn't offend me. Thanks for being honest and reviewing, and I guess, as much as I hate to admit it, that right in the middle of it, during the lemon, I kind of lost my drive and that is kind of what happened. That happens sometimes but I hope you still liked it. Again, thanks for taking the time to comment. Lots of Love ^-^
Name: sakuyalove (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 - 10:11 pm · For: Stinky Little Pen
Very cute! Nice and funny semi-plot, short lemon :(, but amusing ending.
Author's Response: Thank you! I know the lemon was kinda short, sorry 'bout that, I just kinda...lost the lemony feeling right in the middle which sucked, so I cut it short. I'm glad you still liked it!
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 - 03:31 pm · For: Stinky Little Pen
LMAO XD The ending was awesome!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the end, I was worried it was too random or corny! *HUG*
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 - 03:00 pm · For: Stinky Little Pen
Heh, I love the Sharpie idea XD And I don't know about you, but I like how they smell! And I have the exact same problem as Sasuke...I buy the stupid things because, hey, they're there! And then when I get them I don't know what to do. I usually end up writing my name on everything. Too bad Sasuke didn't go through with writing his name all over Naruto. It would have been great. X]
Anyway, I had fun reading this :D Was very cute. Kudos!
Author's Response: Tee-hee, thanks! Personally, I'm like Sasuke- I hate the smell but after a while I get used to it (I guess that's kinda why he's like that ^-^). Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, and, in all honesty, I completely forgot about the whole "write 'Sasuke's Property all over Naruto" thing by the time I finished it. ^-^'