Sasuke seemed in character in this chapter, I meaning not showing an ounce of concern though he is worried and how he stayed emotionless even with Zuko holding him.

And I really enjoyed Naruto’s personality on this he is the kind of guy that sticks up for his friends even they aren’t there, him lecturing Ino is very Naruto. Not only that angry Naruto is kind of cute don’ you think good gob describing him.

As for Ino, poor Ino but don’t forget Sakura worked the same way she broke her friendship with Ino because she saw Ino as rival this is just a reminder. Other than that I really like how Ino is developing.

Yea, you didn’t make Naruto have his phone magically in his hand. He forgot to charge it so of course it will be missing when he needs it the most…I wonder why I didn’t catch that.

OMG I just realized something you’re basing this story off of the second ending for Naruto shippuden. O.o that’s pretty clever. I’ve always wanted to read a fanfic based on that little ending the fact that you did it is pretty cool. ^^

This is by far the best chapter. I like Shierra is this chapter too, she sort of wraps up the whole fight scene pretty nicely doesn’t she.

 

Author's Response: Yes! I got Sasuke in character. Time for a celebration! I loved writing about Naruto in this chapter, it honestly just made me love him more. Haha, angry Naruto is definitely cute, I will have to agree with you ;D Hmm, that is true about Sakura. I should have remembered that, darn. But I'm glad you still like how Ino is developing. Haha, you're the first to comment on the phone thing. Yeah, see? All things are connected in a way, I don't make this stuff up as I go along.... most of the time. YAY! You are the first person to catch the similarity! Yeah, I saw that ending for Naruto Shippuden, and I fell in love. I thought it would make a pretty good intro arc for a high school fic, so I used it. Ah, Shierra does wrap things up rather nicely. Thanks for noticing. Thank you again for reading this. You're a very observant reader and a very insightful reviewer. Thank you a lot for all of your comments! You're amazing!

Wow good chapter Naruto getting trouble on the first day is so him, I love it. Of course Sasuke was in character considering he is a hard character. Though him being scared of Ino seems off, he’ll probably scare her off like he does with Sakura.

Careful with Ino I mean it’s nice to have the classical villain slut but give her more of a three dimension feel to her. Make her different then what everybody else has in their story. I know you can do it, you more creative than half the people on FF.Net.

Other then that I liked how you brought each character out and how they reacted with each other.

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, Naruto can't seem to go a day without getting in trouble. Yeah, after I wrote about Sasuke being afraid of Ino, I instantly knew I was wrong. But I kept it because I thought it would add some sort of humor. Bah, OOCness only makes it worse! And about Ino.... eh, I'll just wait for you to read the next couple chapters. I do give her more depth in the following chapters, so don't worry. But I'm really happy to hear that you think I'm that creative. Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked this chapter. Thanks so much for still reading and thanks a bunch for still reviewing! Your advice makes my day!

I like that Gato, he was in the beginning of Naruto series. That was clever keeping the original villain Masashi Kishimoto had put in very thought out.  I like that =) a lot. And the best part is Gato was originally a drug dealer =). Other then that I think you got most of the characters in characters. I could all the Naruto characters reaction upon getting the text. Hinata never planning on doing anything because she is quiet, Sai and Sasuke not caring, Sakura though I hate her, I think you did a good job not bashing on her. As for Shino, I think he would be one that wasn’t planning anything but we can’t have too many Sai and Sasuke now can we so I’m getting were you are going at (so it’s alright and besides you didn’t ooc him =]). Zuka I think is off but I haven’t watched the Anime in forever so who am I to judge ;). Aw~ poor Naruto but very in character of him, forgetting to charge his phone. Thinking he’ll be the next big. I was snickering at his part and thinking of all the trouble he will get himself into. I really can’t wait to see what happens when he gets to school. Any way good job for an AU story usual they are bit difficult because you are rolling with their personality but not a very stable back story I think you did a good job =)  

Author's Response: Oh, thank you for noticing Gato. You're the first one to comment on that :) I'm glad I got most of the characters in character. The text was very fun to think of, honestly. And now that I think about it, you're right about Shino. But I was going for the part of him that gets fed up with being unnoticed, so he would want to stand out in some way. I'm trying to portray Zuko as the older brother tye, and it is kinda hard... Oh, poor poor Naruto... I am so cruel to our favorite blonde. Hmm, unstable back story. I'll go back and work on that, thanks for saying something about that. Thanks for the supporting review, though! I really appreciate you reading a bunch of my stories. Thank you so much for reading this and thanks even more for reviewing! You're an awesome reader/reviewer!

COOL!! This is just as great as your pirates story! And man chapter 5 was the best damn fight scene ever! Naruto is forever my favorite! Thank you for writing this! :)
(ps. Bringing Zuko in was awesome! lol ATLA is still one of the best shows ever!)

Author's Response: Whoo! I'm super glad that you decided to read this story as well! And to hear that you think it's as good as Pirates of the Mist is a real confidence booster. And I'm glad that the fight scene was written well, considering I have issues with writing fights. Naruto is purely awesome, and I have to write him as such. And Zuko is incredible, and I love him in Avatar! I love Avatar in general! Thanks for choosing to read this story as well, and thanks a bunch for reviewing it! You're an awesome fan!

YAY! I loved this chapter :D I loved your last sentence too, great way to end that. And don't worry about taking up so many chapters for one day; if it's interesting then it shouldn't matter. And it's definitely interesting :D I loved how Sakura stomped on the guy and even asked if Hinata wanted to do something too. And I loved your line with Lee cheering about the power of youth defeating evil; it's very Lee-like XD
I can't wait to see what else you have planned for this story! ^_^

Author's Response: Hurray! I'm excited that you loved this chapter. I smiled when I wrote that last sentence, just because it seemed so fitting. I'm glad you think that I didn't take up too much time for one day. It was the first day of high school, so I figured it would take up some time. But I'm happy to hear that my story is so interesting to you. Yup, Sakura is definitely the type to step on someone. And I just had to put in a line about Lee and the power of youth! I can't write about him and not put a reference like that ;D I'll try to update soon. Thanks for your support by reading and reviewing this story!

Overall good story. I normally don't read highschool fanfics (i dont know why...i guess the idea doesn't really intrigue me..) but this one ties character relations and personalities together very well. You took the same personalities from the anime/manga, and then added you're own flare to them. Now that you have gotten rid of the bully, i have yet to wonder what new challenges you will throw at them (though hopefully not the biggest challenge...algebra!) I smiled when I read that you included Sirious and Zuko, mainly because it was like you read my mind. (I love those two characters so much in their book and show. Thank you though for not following their exact personalities. I think overall you did a nice job coming up with new names. (mainly because i think it is almost impossible to come up with original names...) One last comment, thank you so much for having one main character like school. (Power to the Nerds!) All things considered you did a great job on this story, considering it takes place in an unfamiliar territory. Keep up the great work! =)

Author's Response: Wow, considering you don't normally read high school fics, I am truly honored that you chose to read mine. And I'm super flattered that it actually caught your eye! As for challenges, I have 179 more days to throw at them, so we'll just have to see. Although, that algebra thing might be a good idea ;) Sirius and Zuko are so amazing, I just had to include them! But since I think it would be hard to follow their personalities, I changed them around a bit. I have so much trouble with names. I'm just not that creative when it comes to making new names. Also, I just HAD to put in a character who likes school. I consider myself a nerd, so I needed someone like that in this story. Thanks so much for the positive review. And thanks a bunch for all the support you show my stories! You're awesome! Thanks again for reading and reviewing :D

Is this story Naruto, Harry Potter, or Avatar. Very unoriginal on the names and description of Sirius and Zuko...good start though! I'll definately read more!

Author's Response: No, it's Naruto. I'm sorry! I'm terrible with names! But the idea is mine, which should count for something, right? I hope you enjoy reading this story anyways! Thanks for the review!

HAHAHA omg I loved this chapter! Ok, first...the title. LOVE. And second...the names, hehe...I'm pretty sure Nuka is the name of one of the lions in Lion King 2 XD and isn't Zabini the last name of someone in Harry Potter (is it REALLY REALLY weird that I'm able to make these connections?? god, i'm a freak). And of course, Sokka XD

Ok, anyway. My jaw literally dropped when I read what Naruto said when he first got to the school. omg, he is just ASKING for trouble, haha

"Because you're my forver girl"...wow, haha. Nice.

Please keep this going (especially since you decided to leave it on a cliffhanger XP); I loved reading this

Author's Response: Girl, I told you! I'm terrible at making names! Yes, Nuka is the name of Kovu's brother in Lion King 2. Zabini is Blaise Zabini, Draco Malfoy's best friend. Wow...I need to be more creative... No, it's not weird that you can make connections. It only means that I'm not being discreet enough... Haha, glad you liked my interpretation of Naruto. I love writing him. It just makes me smile :) Muahahahahaha for cliffhangers! But don't worry; I'll try to update as soon as possible.