Reviews For It Was Only a Kiss. . .
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 - 09:04 pm · For: It Was Only a Kiss. . .
It was a pun, and not a very good one at that. A bass is also a type of fish...
Author's Response: I see. . . lol sorry. ^^rnrn- Yumi
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 16/09/08 - 10:47 pm · For: It Was Only a Kiss. . .
Whoa... Naruto can play a fish? No way!
... I kid, I kid...
You need to get a beta for this, doll. It could be really good... but there are a lot of mistakes...
Author's Response: . . . a fish? I don't get it. I read through it again (and had my roommate read through it too), and I don't see it. . . Oh well ^^;; It was simply a really rushed idea. Though I don't usually like to do this, I'm posting my one-shots so that I can rack up stories. I want to be one of the top 10 most prolific authors, and I realized that sometimes I'm too critical of my own work to post it, so I tried this one. . . apparently I suck when I just give up. X3rnrn- Yumi