Reviews For Never Is A Promise Your Heart Makes
Name: fuyuko (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 - 03:20 pm · For: Chapter 1
Aww. That was really touching. T.T
Poor Naruto; he'll bring Sasuke back eventually!!
I liked your usage of language, too. It's been a while since I read something that actually "flows" nicely. Good job!!
Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 - 01:31 pm · For: Chapter 1
That was sweet. There's nothing else for me too say. All in all it wasn't that smutty, but I think it works better with the story.
I loved the last line, "So he did what he always did. He held on tighter." That is pure brilliance.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know it wasn't that smutty compared to other stories out there but I'm too shy to write an all-out lemon.^_^ I'm glad you liked it!
Name: IDK (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 - 11:15 am · For: Chapter 1
so sad... TT.TT
i like it!!!
gud job!
yaaay! first review!!!
very erotic, yes! ^^
keep writing! =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! It was my first time writing smut so I'm glad you liked it!