heh i actucally ended up reading it threw... be proud it's like lateish. and i woke up early and i'm paying attention to other stuff. so i probably get any of that into my head but whatever. i read it i'm proud of myself and of course you too. and yeah did you know you can find urs on the -titles, then the w, then it's the fourth on the list-? it's odd... not really but still.

Author's Response: You're tired. It's difficult to understand what you are even talking about. I'm proud of you as well, finishing a whole fanfiction. God knows I never do. I added the first chapter of my latest fanfiction, so be happy. I never said I'd add the part you were at though. Sucker.

I'd like to see where you take this, please continue.
just one thing;
“Gaara-sama?” Naruto asked. Gaara looked back at them. “I think...that there is a person over there.”
Is it Gaara speaking? you need an enter mark before him, otherwise it looks like naruto is still speaking, and it's like, how did he know that just from gaara looking back at him?