Name:Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 - 10:55 am · For: I :: Then I woke up
yes. he wants to know it. Really want to know XD.
Name:i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 13/08/08 - 10:56 am · For: I :: Then I woke up
I really like the idea and the summary was good- that's what made me click on your story in the first place- but you're right about the grammar. I think you should have someone beta it and repost it- it would make reading it easier and I think the story would be even better.