Reviews For Break Up And Make Up
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 01/08/08 - 04:24 pm · For: Chapter 1
This was good, and the lemon was good too. Just a bit of advise, don't refer to the prostate as a 'G-spot' 'cause only women have 'G-spot'. You can say "bunddle of nerves", or "love/pleasure button" instead. Also you can just say groin, without muscle because honestly 'groin muscle' doesn't make any sense to me. Apart from that it was good and I enjoyed the story. Keep writing :)
Name: IDK (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 - 01:53 pm · For: Chapter 1
so thats why sasuke's name can be arranged to spell 'uke ass'. LOL. got that from google!! Love ur story!