Reviews For War of the Akatsuki
Name: Suki_Hime (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 11:47 pm · For: Chapter 1: Naruto's Return
Not too bad, I Like where its gong.
And also, put a bit more descriptive and emotive language in there.
Its good, please continue
Name: hunter axe (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 12:18 pm · For: Chapter 1: Naruto's Return
I thought this was an excellent first chapter. I think sakura turn tomatoe red! I think you should have centralized more on naruto's return. You a big bang! Ha made a deidara funny, but other than that I thought it was cool.
Later
Hunter
Author's Response: Um okay, Thanks for the review but one thing if you see this response then can you tell me what a deidara funny is. Thats the first time I heard that. Thanks