Hay great keep it up, i would right more but i have been away for 2 wekk in france and have more storys to read.
love Aiko
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Wow, I liked it; it's hard to find a straight Sasuke, you have no idea how frustrating it is to have to dig through SasuNaru's!!! I loved the part where Sasuke suddenly shoves her on the bed when Orochimaru walks in lol, that sent shivers up my spine!
The only two things I personally liked less was that Natsuki changes her personality so suddenly and that Sasuke kept her in his room the WHOLE TIME! Come on... He needs his space lol, :D. I think you should seperate them for a while so that he doesn't get overly attached to her: I mean, he is a little one-track-minded and his thirst for revenge should be more important than a pretty girl. If he wanted to take her, he would have right? But he didn't, prob coz he doesn't want to be compared to his heartless brother. At least, if their seperated, he can see how long he can manage without her service.
But putting my personal Sasuke-ish opinions aside, it was a very good read, well written, and I can't wait for your next chapter! Update soon plz!
Author's Response: WAHHH YOU HAS FOUND ME ALL OVER!!!!! -giggles and waves- I wont type my long ass reply here too...it would just take up the whole page hehe!! THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO ENJOY MY STORY!!! :D
bunbun i think thar just soo cute, so we finally get to now what the braslets are for, i wanno know more please it soo goood, keep it up.
love Aiko
xoxoxoxoxo
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Author's Response: -giggles- Thank you :D ehe I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll update as soon as I finish the next chapter. Happy Saturday!!! :D
bunbun i think thar just soo cute, so we finally get to now what the braslets are for, i wanno know more please it soo goood, keep it up.
love Aiko
xoxoxoxoxo
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So cute, so creepy and problematic,
ha ha I made fun of Sasuke XD
I love this! Its great, well written and put together and boy it sends shivers up my spine! Kabuto now scares! I hope your not ending it yet cause its really really good!
Oh and Orochimaru scares me more now to XD
Author's Response: -giggles- making fun of Sasuke is fun though!! :) I'm glad you like it :D -blushes- heheh & Kabuto has always been a little freaky to me...and Orochimaru -shivers and hides- He scared the hell outta me!!!!!! heheh I plan on continuing as long as NAtsuki doesn't get herself killed haha :D rnThanks again~~ :)
hay wow you have i mean HAVE to keep this up or ill die. it like OMG!! never! and what's with this girl your leaving to many question, pease anwer them !!!
love AikoMatsuo xoxoxox
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Author's Response: Hehe, thanks!! I am planning on writing more to this hehe :) I'm glad you like it!!! hehe