Reviews For The Other Side
Name: Rogue (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 - 02:55 pm · For: Chapter 1
Very Very cute. Although, Might I suggest some things?
I'd be cool if you used 'blockquotes' Their usually in this format
'words here'
It would organize everything so much better and thing about paragraph length. There are some things which can be put together to look much better.
Other than that, keep going bud!
Name: IDK (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 - 12:09 pm · For: Chapter 2
YAY!!! Kyuubi's in it!!!! Awesome story!!! More please!!! o>_
Name: DRAGONKINGHT (Signed) · Date: 23/06/08 - 05:51 am · For: Chapter 2
love to see sasuke arted like a girl *O* but love your story.
Name: Akura (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 - 06:03 pm · For: Chapter 2
OMG, I totally love this story un! You should really continue it~ It's so awsome! Can't wait for the next chapter un! ^^
Name: KKEYA2008 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 - 12:30 pm · For: Chapter 2
Awesome story!!!
Simply can't wait for the next chapter ^.^
Name: Shmoobunny182 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 - 10:18 am · For: Chapter 2
awesome fic. can't wait to read more
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 - 10:08 am · For: Chapter 2
UPDATE ASAP.
X3
really! T'is awesome so far! :]
AWW AT SASUKE XD
Lols :]
You should definately continue, I for one love it! Lols ;]
Update soon!
Bye!
x
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 - 01:57 pm · For: Chapter 1
Whoa, sounds awesome so far!
Definately an awesome start.
I'm reveiwing, so continue to write, please! Lol ^^
I'll review for every chapter. ;] Lol.
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 - 04:16 am · For: Chapter 1
Lol its great that you wrote that 'kiss' in xD I like your style, poetic and kinda angsty. Please do write more soon. n_n
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 - 01:50 am · For: Chapter 1
Very interesting,
I'd like to read more of this! :D Update as soon as you get a chance (:
Name: scarlett_fire (Signed) · Date: 08/06/08 - 10:00 pm · For: Chapter 1
i like it, its a typical high school fic but you write it very well. i think you should keep going! But add some drama or smut in soon or its gonna get too generic!
Name: DRAGONKINGHT (Signed) · Date: 08/06/08 - 09:18 pm · For: Chapter 1
love to read more