Reviews For Thunder and Swirls
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 29/12/08 - 10:03 am · For: Tsunade: The Legendary Sanin!
Awesome chapter. What happened to Jessica? Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: lol you shall see!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 25/12/08 - 12:32 pm · For: Hiyorime, Sharingan, and Shomeime
amazing keep it up.
soz only short 1 today, reall vusy.
love Aiko
Author's Response: Short an sweet. :D Thanks for the review!!
Name: Fruits_Punch_Samurai (Signed) · Date: 24/12/08 - 06:15 pm · For: Hiyorime, Sharingan, and Shomeime
Itachi! And Kisame!
How I missed them
:)
so happy holidays first off
secondly, hurray for updating
!
oh man, intense
a new blood line, a fight scene and near explosions!
It blew my mind.
and Gai sensei and the Pervy Sage were in it too!
but poor Sasuke :(
Ahh, for a second I was worried that Jessica's kekkei genkai was going to be like uber powerful and she was going to beat Itachi
but you made it realistic again by having it hurt her as well
THANK YOU FOR MAKING AN AWESOME STORY!
:D
10/10
Author's Response: Remember, the way I think is this: Kaminari, Jessica, and all of the Konoha 12 are Genins still. They really wouldn't have much of a chance against two S-rank criminals. :3 Thanks for the review!!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/08 - 03:55 pm · For: Hiyorime, Sharingan, and Shomeime
Awesome chapter. Keep up the good work. You've finally shown some of Jessica's information.
Author's Response: Yay! Double Review!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/08 - 03:54 pm · For: Hiyorime, Sharingan, and Shomeime
Awesome chapter. Keep up the good work. You've finally shown some of Jessica's information.
Author's Response: Yup, Yup! Thanks For The Review!!
Name: Fruits_Punch_Samurai (Signed) · Date: 16/12/08 - 07:20 pm · For: Wake Up and Smell the Roses
so I send this review for the 3rd time
please please work
*crosses fingers*
I liked it
I don't really like sad parts though.
:(
but the writing was good
there's got to be more action soon since Kisame and Itachi are coming back
*giggle*
overall good chapter
MORE FLUFF!
review people!!!
>:U
or I'll eat your soul
10/10
no, your writing has not gone downhill
oneshot please XD
update soon
the mob awaits!
Author's Response: lol I think I got a review from you once already for this chapter. :3 No worries though. Sall good. xD
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 16/12/08 - 10:39 am · For: Wake Up and Smell the Roses
OMG HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN IVE MISSED SO MUCH o_o OMG HOW COULD I. I'M SO SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but what you have writen is 10000%%%% amazing, you really really have to keep it up please.
love Aiko
xoxoxoxo
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Author's Response: lol! I'm happy to have you back! I MISSSED YOU! xD Thanks for the awesome reveiw!!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 15/12/08 - 12:52 pm · For: Wake Up and Smell the Roses
This is getting good. Can't wait unil the next chapter. I wonder what's going on.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Name: Fruits_Punch_Samurai (Signed) · Date: 09/12/08 - 07:15 am · For: Enter: Kaminari Hiyori
NARUTOXOC!
I request a comedic NarutoxOC!
pwetty pwease?
:D
Author's Response: lol funny NarutoxOC it is then. :3
Name: Fruits_Punch_Samurai (Signed) · Date: 08/12/08 - 12:52 pm · For: Dance of the Thunder in the Mist
MIGHT GUY :D
-sparkles-
I love him !!
great chapter!!
The perfect blend of comedy and action
I'm glad that you made it realistic
a lot of people would have had their OC destroying Kisame and Itachi
and we all know that isn't happening
so i thank you for making a fantastic, believable story
I THINK I KNOW!!!
Kaminari is the thunder
and Naruto is the swirls?
what do I win!!!
DO I GET TO SPIN THE BIG WHEEL?
ahh I'm losing it these days :D
GREAT CHAPTER!
10/10
update soon
or I might or might not just form an angry mob with pitchforks and fire
>:D
Author's Response: lol gotta love Might Guy, not matter how creepy he is. xD Yeah, Kaminari winning is a no-no. If Kakashi can't take them out, then yeah, Kaminari has no chance. That's the way I see it anyways. >__> Awe! Did I make the question too easy, or am I that obvious? Cuz that's dead on. lol let me think of a prize, since your the first to answer and get it right. :D O___O; uh...p-please don't come after me. Seriously, if I go, so does the story...so HA! xD lol
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/08 - 12:51 pm · For: Dance of the Thunder in the Mist
Good chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Good luck on writing it.
Author's Response: Thanks, I will need a good helping of luck to pull off the next couple of chapters the way I've planned them! ^_^'
Name: Fruits_Punch_Samurai (Signed) · Date: 02/12/08 - 09:26 am · For: The Will of Flame Burns in Our Hearts
:(
that episode never fails to make me cry
now I'm crying again
beautiful though
the last couple chapters were really great
especially since I had no internet for the longest time
and I was like yay lots to read!
it's good to be back
:)
I missed your story tons!
there's lots more to come right??
there must, there must!!
go for 100 chapters!
:D
10/10 as always
-Erikaa
Author's Response: Ah, I see. No internet sucks. lol I don't know about 100 chapters, but I'm 94% sure that I'm going to be making a sequel, so yay!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/08 - 12:55 pm · For: The Will of Flame Burns in Our Hearts
Hey friend. I hope that you get on yahoo soon so we can finish the chapter. It was short but I'm glad that you updated. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah I know. I'll be on yahoo in about a minute! Hang tight! =]
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 19/11/08 - 04:32 pm · For: Incredibly Lucky People
Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see the next one. It was funny watching Jessica tease Kaminair in the end like that.
Author's Response: lol thanks, glad you think so!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 02/11/08 - 02:31 am · For: Impossible Battle: Ragtag Trio Can't Win!
OMG AMAZING!!! yesh i would like a bit more of Nari save's the day, but still amazing.
loveAiko
p.s i dont have to kill you!!!
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Author's Response: Can't have Nari going Mary-sue on us, can we? xD Thanks for the review! p.s.- I'm happy you don't have to kill me. <3
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 01/11/08 - 12:44 pm · For: Impossible Battle: Ragtag Trio Can't Win!
I'm glad that you finally updated. Can't wait for the next chapter. When are you going to reveal anymore info on Jessica? Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I swear, it wasn't my fault! TT_TT lol I will reveal more info on Jessica...eh...some...time...^_^U eheh, I like to toy with ideas so I'm on 100% sure, but I will reveal more on Jessica! Thanks for the review!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 16/10/08 - 09:15 am · For: Kasumi and Samui
yay i dont have to kill you , but i will do if there no more!!! MAWHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAH! lol. loved it Aiko oxox
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Author's Response: O_O *backs away* Kill? ^_^' uh you don't have to worry about the story ending yet. There's more to go yet and I'm thinking of making a sequal! :]
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 16/10/08 - 03:19 am · For: Kasumi and Samui
Sisters of the Poison Wind? Sounds awesome, but personally I think that Sisters of the Silver Mist sounds a tad better.
Nice filler! But I'm confused as to who won the fight. Was it a draw?
Author's Response: lol you have know idea how long I stared at my screan and when "should I make it Silver Mist, or Poison Wind?" I will reveal who, if anyone, won later. Thanks for the review!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 15/10/08 - 05:08 pm · For: Kasumi and Samui
You posted this chapter four times. You need to get on and fix it. Great chapter and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. Computer was being dumb. But I have fixed it! Thanks for the review and I'll tty tommorrow!
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 24/09/08 - 01:57 pm · For: Iced Hearts: It Has Everything to do With You!
That was just intense...keep this up!!!! I'm loving it!!! XD
Author's Response: lol Iz happy you feel that way! It makes me feel special! o^.^o Thanks for the review!
Name: Incarn (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 - 02:17 pm · For: Iced Hearts: It Has Everything to do With You!
Oooohhh.... Nari and Shimo both owned each other. Bwahaha!
And, I'll beta you later - I have a paper and a report to write, with a model to go along with the report.
Author's Response: Okie dokie! Good luck on the paper, model and report! :]
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 - 08:01 am · For: Iced Hearts: It Has Everything to do With You!
i hope you are feeling better!!! and OH. MY. GOD. if Nari dies i'll kill you :@ XP that was the best chapter ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!eppp
keep it up
love aiko
xoxoxo
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Author's Response: Ahhhh!!! Don't kill me! lol jk don't worry about it. ;)
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/08 - 06:38 am · For: Iced Hearts: It Has Everything to do With You!
Yet another awesome chapter. Keep up the good work. I wonder who won. I bet it was a tie. Hope you update soon and I hope you feel better soon.
Author's Response: lol mehbeh, but then again, mehbeh not. ;) You shall see!
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 - 10:22 pm · For: Iced Hearts: It Has Everything to do With You!
yayz! short but good.
the strange links person might be a spambot. i saw another review like it elsewhere. just ignore it, unless we're supposed to report it?
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me. I'm not sure if we're suppose to report it or not. >__>;
Name: Fruits_Punch_Samurai (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 - 07:53 pm · For: Iced Hearts: It Has Everything to do With You!
I meant ninja clothing
I have glasses for a reason
maybe I should wear the dang things
:D
Author's Response: lol xD That could be helpful.