Reviews For Thunder and Swirls
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 16/07/09 - 08:15 pm · For: Enter: Kaminari Hiyori
wow...my friend suggested tht i read this story... i love him for it! totally awesome and funny chapter!
Write On!
Author's Response: lol, thanks. I didn't think my story would ever be suggested.
Name: Kikyaru360 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/09 - 11:52 am · For: Squad 7's Sensei Is...
Once again, Kaminari has made me laugh. I shall read more soon! Looking forward to it.
Author's Response: lol awesome. Thanks for the review!
Name: Kikyaru360 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/09 - 04:25 pm · For: Enter: Kaminari Hiyori
Kaminari defintitely sounds like a character I would like! I've always wondered why I hardly ever see any blue haired people in Naruto with a few exceptions, but anyway I can't wait to read more. By the way I nearly fell out of my seat in laughter at the nude Sasuke part.
Author's Response: lol, I'm happy my story had that effect on you! :] There should be more blue haired people in Naruto! We have pink, blond, black, silver, white, red, brown, dark purple...but like no blue or green! But I won't complain too much, Naruto is awesome even without blue haired people. ^_^ Thanks for the review!
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 - 11:47 am · For: Gathered Here Today
“Not even a year after your death, she is raped by none other then Itachi Uchiha.”
LOL. no please.
"It’s becomes a son that she will name, Shuichi. Shortly before Shuichi is born, Lee proposes to Jessica, who of course says, “yes.”
Oh hell no. Did you just package the biggest Mary-Sue bomb into one big paragraph then basically tell Jessica to lay off her little rape fantasy by reassuring us that a persons choice can alter that future?
Well I sure hope that's what you meant.
I don't want this some angels granting her random powers capable of destroying Orochimaru. It's not my fic but...damn... Sad face for real.
The rest was very sweet and touching and the way you described everyone's feelings for nari's death was great.
Author's Response: Sorry, but this IS Jessica Kamiya. There was a reason why Kaminari felt a pang of jealousy towards her and the need to surpass her when she was alive. Kaminari is to Jessica as Naruto as to Sasuke. Plus, Jessica and Shuichi are not my characters. When I write, I try to keep characters in character as much as possible. Including OCs. Thanks for reviewing and whether you like it or not, you shall now be known to me as "my fan." :3 Also, thanks for being honest.
Name: inuzuka king (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 10:08 pm · For: Gathered Here Today
its gay how she died though... gerat strory loved it all the way through.
Author's Response: Double the love. ;3
Name: inuzuka king (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 - 10:06 pm · For: Gathered Here Today
its gay how she died though... gerat strory loved it all the way through.
Author's Response: Sometimes the greatest heros...get the lamest death. -.-' Thanks! And thanks for the review!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 - 06:08 pm · For: Gathered Here Today
WHY!?!?!?!?!
NO!!!
Why did you kill her!?!
*sniffle*
It was an unexpected great ending.... but WHY!?
Author's Response: ^_^' Remember there will be a sequel! So don't be too sad about it! Thanks for the review!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 - 11:59 am · For: Gathered Here Today
I can't wait for the sequel either. I see you took some of my stuff from my other story for the sequel but it's alright. Keep up the good work for the sequel.
Author's Response: Back in the day when you gave me Jessica's information you included this. :3 Surprised I remembered? I will try my best with the sequel and I've been concidering your idea more and more. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Carmello_Thief (Signed) · Date: 03/05/09 - 10:46 am · For: Gathered Here Today
WAAAAAH! It just had to end :( too bad we didn't get to see Shino's reaction. Oh well...I can hardly wait for the sequel!
Author's Response: lol thanks!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 20/04/09 - 05:30 pm · For: Sakura’s Tears, and Kaminari’s Downward Spiral
Well.... that's weird.
"'Congratulations, you're dead!!!'"
hehe... I gotta say... that's freggin' hilarious!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: lol I'm happy you liked that! Thanks for the review!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 18/04/09 - 04:11 pm · For: Sakura’s Tears, and Kaminari’s Downward Spiral
You had better not have killed yourself. I actually have an idea on how you can come back. You could be brought back to the village and Jessica has a jutsu she can use but it takes a lot of chakra to use it. It's called Heaven's Ressurection Jutsu and using that jutsu causes the angel's wings to come out of her body but she can bring anyone back to life.
Author's Response: lol, please don't kill me. ^_^' (no pun intended) I've actually have a way for Kaminari to come back to life and the last chapter has already been written! But this requires the sequal to be made. Heaven's Rssurection Jutsu sounds awesome, but I don't think I'm going to use it. I am however going to (kinda) use a move of yours from your Yu Yu Hakusho fic. Which move? You'll just have to wait and find out! ^_~
Name: akshatsinghal (Signed) · Date: 04/04/09 - 01:04 am · For: Enter: Kaminari Hiyori
this story is awesome
please continue it
Author's Response: Thank you. It's not that I don't want to continue it...I've just got a super bad case of writer's block. Whatever I write to the next chapter is never good enough so then I erase it and hit another block. *Sigh* Hopefully, I'll get over this soon and update. Thanks for the amount of patience.
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 26/02/09 - 06:27 pm · For: OMG! It's Naruto and Sasuke's Love Child!
Haha!!
Yay!!
Hurry up!!
This is really, really good!!!
Kaminari is awesome!
Author's Response: ^_^ I'm happy you think so! I try updating as soon as I can. Insparation as been running thin and a lot of stuff has been happing. Thanks for the reviews!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 - 05:30 pm · For: Enter: Kaminari Hiyori
Razor-san!!!
This is really, really good!!!
haha
I saw your Truth-or-Dare with the K-K's!!
It was rad!! I loved it!
^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! lol Me and K-gurl need to start writing that again...my fault it hasn't been updated in a while. -_-' I haven't had much insparation as of late and haven't been on the internet much.
Name: spacekowb0y (Signed) · Date: 13/02/09 - 06:22 pm · For: OMG! It's Naruto and Sasuke's Love Child!
glad im not the only one who is busy as hell lately. good chapter glad you had time to write it.
Author's Response: Yeah I know. I haven't even started the next chapter yet. -_-'
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 04/02/09 - 04:52 pm · For: OMG! It's Naruto and Sasuke's Love Child!
I wish she had kicked that guy's butt. He deserved it. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yeah, I would have too. Thanks for the review!
Name: inuzuka king (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 - 09:24 pm · For: Hiyorime, Sharingan, and Shomeime
i love this...thank you..dont stop...plz
Author's Response: Hey thanks! I'm happy you think so! I'll continue this until it is finish! *spoiler* And the sequal. ^_~
Name: Fruits_Punch_Samurai (Signed) · Date: 22/01/09 - 02:25 pm · For: Shino vs. Shikamaru vs. Kaminari
*eyetwitch*
WHEN DID YOU UPDATE TWENTY MILLION TIMES!?
>:U
Ahh, this cheered me up
I've been in sadist mode all day today
and now I'm hungry on top of that
*sigh* the world is a cruel place.
OMG THERE WAS A HINT OF FLUFF!!!
:D
I am pleased.
no smoldering looks from Shino then :(
It's all about the smoldering looks these days!
And they fought!
I thought Shikamaru would win for sure.
And then the bugs in her hair!
I died right there just so you know
the pocky in my mouth revived me
it's a miracle!
:O
update again soon!!
if you have exams now good luck!
:)
10/10
Author's Response: Shino and Shikamaru are the geniuses of Naruto's class! (at least I think so. Ever see Shino fight? Very calculating) Plus Shikamaru wasn't too motivated. >_>;
Name: spacekowb0y (Signed) · Date: 22/01/09 - 02:46 am · For: Shino vs. Shikamaru vs. Kaminari
zomg people still play air hockey?
Author's Response: Yes! People still do play air hockey! It's one of my favorite non-video games! xD
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/09 - 01:53 pm · For: Shino vs. Shikamaru vs. Kaminari
I'm glad that you updated. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 - 07:35 am · For: Mission: Return to the Land of Water
I had no idea you updated. Keep up the good work. I hope the mission goes okay.
Author's Response: Hmm...really? You're usually the first person to notice.
Name: spacekowb0y (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 - 05:57 pm · For: Why We Knock Before We Enter
lol@kuramasgirl.
This chappy was stupendous! I wub the detail you put into conversations! -takes notes- The whole making out thing was great. I lubb it. AND HOW COME SHE CAN'T GO DAMMIT?! -grr- ;]
10/10
Author's Response: lol You shall find out in the next chapter! ^_~ This is one of the few twists I planned for this story! xD
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 - 05:46 pm · For: Why We Knock Before We Enter
OMG! I was not expeting that. Keep up the good work. I was blushign big time when I read that line you put and I was deeply surprised. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: lol and this, children, is why We Knock Before We Enter! Cx lol
Name: Fruits_Punch_Samurai (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 - 09:54 am · For: Tsunade: The Legendary Sanin!
Discrimination
XD
loved it
Hurry things aregetting happy and butterflies
*starry background*
I can't remember what comes next
so I'll be left in the dark
T___T
at least Kaminari was healed
Tsunade is like a god
:O
but hey there was that hint of romance again
where has it been all this time?!
:D
kidding, kidding.
10/10
UPDATE SOON CAUSE I DON'T LIKE BEING LEFT IN THE DARK
someone hand me a night light or something
Author's Response: lol I never got this far on animespiral! xD lol night light, funneh. Thanks for the reveiw!
Name: spacekowb0y (Signed) · Date: 29/12/08 - 12:58 pm · For: Tsunade: The Legendary Sanin!
The answer is yes? Yay! We are getting married! Whens the wedding?
Nah jkjk. lmao
I loved this chapter. I can't really give criticism on this one! The character interaction was great and most of it was pretty funny. I didn't expect you to get it out so quickly. (I started reading when you had chapter 38)
My fav fanfic all around.
Author's Response: lol I was in a depression for like...chapters 30-39. ^_^' I've returned to my normal self now, so things should be getting better!! ^o^ lol Does January 5th work out for you? ^_~ lol jk. Thanks for the review!!