Reviews For Thunder and Swirls
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 17/07/08 - 12:41 pm · For: The First Exam: Poker
I knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAYZ!!!! Whoot! GO ME!!! i loved this chapter. it was fun and good. Great job!!!
Author's Response: lol xD Got any sevens? xP Thanks for the review!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 - 11:15 am · For: The First Exam: Poker
omg yay sooo cool. AND OME IT'S SHINO WOW I DID NOT SEE THAT ONE COMEING. great you have and i mean have to keep it up.
love AikoMatsuo oxoxoox
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Author's Response: Face it, we all love Shino! Oh the irony! Shimo is the guy she hates and Shino is the guy she likes! xP Thanks for the review!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 - 10:15 am · For: The First Exam: Poker
You added the last chapter twice. It looks like Jessica has a small crush on someone. Awesome chapter and I hope that you'll update again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me! I've fixed it now! Thanks again!
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 16/07/08 - 09:22 am · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
i like this a litte background before you go in deep. good job!
Author's Response: yay me! ^o^ lol Thankies for the review!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 16/07/08 - 08:32 am · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
I WAS RIGHT YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO ME GO ME!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg that a weird family story but very coool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Love AikoMatsuo
xoxoxoxoxoxo
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Author's Response: Yeah, isn't it? lol Thanks for the review!
Name: Incarn (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 10:25 pm · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
Aha! I was right. I'm just awesome.
Though Shimo hating Nari sounds unreasonable, in story terms, not actual emotional terms (well, that too). It sounds like you just added that in to get some drama and strife for the story. As far as I know, Nari had absolutely nothing to do with Mushi and Shimo should know that.
I'm not trying to be a jerk, it just sounds really unreasonable. I'm thinking you have a good reason, though. n_n
You keep spelling the village name wrong, too... It's Konoha, not Kohana.
I'm sorry if I'm sounding to mean and blunt! Here, I'll give you a plate of cookies! -hands Kamisori a plate of cookies-
Otherwise, that's such a tragic background story! Waah! So sad... I feel sorry for both Shimo and Nari.
Author's Response: Kaminari doesn't quite understand why Shimo's pissed at her either. Ah, oops. ^_^' COOKIES!!! *munches*
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 10:04 pm · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
“Who’s are Jonin leader?” - our
"application forum filled out. There, you will turn in your forums " form, forms
"been to much for an unstable six " too
"the real me when to the Hokage’s" went
yayz for update!
Author's Response: thanks for pointing these out! ^_^
Name: xXxTiNkxXx (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 08:12 pm · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
O.o oh wow. Now I get why Shimo is such a lil bitch. Lol.
AND YOU STILL HAVE TO LET US KNOW WHO KAMINARI LIKES!!!!
Your killing me T^T. Update soon lol
Author's Response: Kaminari's crush is revealed in the next chapter! ^o^ So don't fret! The answer you seek is close!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 07:14 pm · For: The Problem With The Hiyori Clan
Awesome chapter. You only have one more chapter to go that I already have read. Know I know why Shimo hates Kaminari like that. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: That's right! I'm almost all caught up! ^_^ Thanx 4 review!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 02:27 pm · For: Enter: Kaminari Hiyori
I'm back on Yahoo. I had to go eat lunch and the power went out a few times because my parents are trying to fix the stove and they were messing with the breakers.
Author's Response: AH! I see now! K, I'll be on Yahoo in a sec.
Name: Incarn (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 01:06 pm · For: Rejected For Chunin Exam?!
Hmmm, I think I already know why Kakashi didn't give Nari a paper and the Hokage called her up...
But I'm not saying anything, because I'm pretty sure I'm right. ;D
There aren't any mistakes in this chapter! Great job. Keep up the good work!
(And Shimo sounds pretty mean and prejudiced. Er... the rest of the Hiyori clan doesn't like Nari and her parents and aunt, right?)
Author's Response: Your close on the Hiyori clan thing! But not quite there! Yay! No mistakes! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 15/07/08 - 09:23 am · For: Rejected For Chunin Exam?!
ARGH!!!!! cliffies why?! WHY!!!! it was just about to get exciting. jeez! anyway i liked it keep going ^_^
Author's Response: cliffies make the world go round! xD lol I will keep it going! Thanks for the review!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 08:46 am · For: Rejected For Chunin Exam?!
omg she has a new team !!!!!!!!!!1 please tell me this is not true!!!!!!!! you cant berke up narunari please please.!!!!!!!!!!!! :'( *Cries* please dont!!! and btw have you read my7 story the are crap!!!!!!!!!!!!
love AikoMatsuo xoxox
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Author's Response: >_> ok, I won't tell you. You'll just have to find out for yourself! I've glanced at your stories. They're not that bad, just not my cup of ramen! (ramen pwns tea Cx)
Name: xXxTiNkxXx (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 - 06:38 pm · For: Rejected For Chunin Exam?!
o0o0o0o dum-dee-dum-dum!!! How does every story always seem to have some extra HOTT boy in it? Lol. Shimo sounds kinda hott lol =3 just saying. I wonder why they were summoned there O.o
I can't wait until you update so I can see why!!!1
Author's Response: lol Shimo is japanese for frost! ^_~ You'll just have to see why they were summoned there! =^.^=
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 - 05:00 pm · For: Rejected For Chunin Exam?!
Oh joy the bastard Shino appears. I hope taht you know that comment was sarcastic. I hope that you'll get on yahoo tomorrow so we can get started on the sixth chapter. Great chapter and update again soon.
Author's Response: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOK WHAT YOU'VE JUST WRITTEN!!!! S-H-I-N-O TT_TT How could you! Shino is my favorite character of all time! He is not a basterd!! Shimo IS however! **sits in the corner clinging to Shino plushie** (lol, i know what you ment! xD Shino and Shimo's names are very similar. Isn't that Ironic?)
Name: game_over316 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 - 01:06 pm · For: Enter: Kaminari Hiyori
Whooohoo! What would yo doo for a klondike bar!? Sorry about that but i cant wait until the story reaches the chunnin exams! Cant wait! I cnt wait til she says who she likes! I know but dont want to spill the beans! Keep writing!
Author's Response: I'd continue to write this story for a Klondike bar! ;D It seems that everyone is waiting for the Chunin Exams to start! ^_^
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 14/07/08 - 10:56 am · For: Don't Piss Off The Cherry Tree!
omg omg please get to the chunin exams that will be like arsum eppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yer i think of writing like a hobby to but not that im very good at it XP it really crap compart to you
Love AikoMatsuo
xoxoxo
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Author's Response: It can't be that bad. Trust me, -_- I've written my fair share of crap when I was new at fanfiction. Even now I still make mistakes! So don't feel bad! ^_^
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 - 06:44 pm · For: Don't Piss Off The Cherry Tree!
what's a "Klondike bar"?
good story
Author's Response: A Klondike bar is a square icecream bar covered in a layer of chocolate! ^_^ There's a comercial for Klondike bars. Its jingle is "What would you do, for a Klondike bar?" I just thought it would be funny. ^_^ Thanks for the review!
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 13/07/08 - 02:33 pm · For: Don't Piss Off The Cherry Tree!
i loved this! OMG A Suicidal Rock!!! lol. that was fun. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: lol there's a suicidal on in every group! Squirals, rocks, etc. xD lol jk. Thanks for the review!
Name: kuramasgurl018 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 - 02:23 pm · For: Don't Piss Off The Cherry Tree!
Awesome chapter. I love how those three sound ninjas got chased down by a giant unicorn. That's so cool. What are you planning for my character's family? Keeping them alive or killing them off? Update soon.
Author's Response: 0.o I don't plan on killing them off...I really don't. Might need them for the sequel I plan on making! :D Thanks for the review!
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 - 06:52 pm · For: Catching up on the Times
"Kaminari couldn’t help but fell that " - feel
and shouldn't naruto say something when she switches their dogs? 'thanks' or 'i could have handled it!' *pout* or stunned at her sudden outburst ?
anyway, congrats on updating really quickly!
Author's Response: Oops! Didn't see that one either! Thanks for pointing it out! lol Naruto knows not to say anything when there's an extremely pissed Kaminari in the area! xD Thanks for the review/help!
Name: xXxTiNkxXx (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 - 06:00 pm · For: Catching up on the Times
YAY!! IM BACK FROM VACATION!!! Dude I was dying there cuz my uncle doesn't have a computer so I couldn't update *sobs* and then I come back to my house, sit on my computer aaaaaand......WTF!?!?! WHO DOES KAMINARI LIKE!?!? *cries* You evil cliffhanging making person....I must find out or its going to bother me!! >,< anywayz, great chapters!!
Author's Response: I hope you had fun on your vaction! The almighty answer to who Kaminari like will be revealed in two chapters! (i think) Let's see if you can use the clues I've put out throught the story to guess who the lucky guy is! (hint: reread chapter 8: Mysterious Boy, for the biggest clue! An 's'!) Thanks for the review!
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 - 12:35 am · For: Catching up on the Times
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what going to happen!!!! AND I AM NOT A GRASSHOPPER i may be grass and a hopper but not a grasshoppper there's a big differnce!!! XP hay keep it up please every time i see a new a diition im like EPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!1
it's that good seriously have you ever considerd being a writer????
Love AikoMatsuo
xoxoxooxoxoxoxox
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Author's Response: *hides behind computer chair* (random person: -_- "oh yeah, like that's going to help you" Kamisori: *chucks computer chair at random person, knocking him out* "I win!" ^_~) lol I have concidered becoming a writer, but I don't think its what I would want to do the rest of my life. As a hobby, yes. Career, nah. I do want to work with computers though; maybe become a graphic designer! ^_~ Thanks for the review!
Name: Incarn (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 - 09:05 pm · For: Catching up on the Times
AHA! I HAVE FOUND A MISTAKE. I know I shouldn't get all excited about it, but I was beginning to feel left out of being your unofficial lazy bum of a beta reader!
...It was only one mistake, though. You're really improving. -thumbs up!-
“I remember when you two would run around in nothing but your dippers.”
It's diapers. I don't blame you, the English language is weird. Intricately weird. But I guess that goes along with our culture, just like the Japanese have varying levels of politeness for one word.
Man, I wish my dog would do what I say when I speak all authoritive-like. I guess I'm just not cut out to be an alpha. -sigh-
And I wonder... Did Jessica come back for the Chuunin Exams? There has to be a reason...
Author's Response: What's the point in writing if you do not plan to better yourself? Thanks for catching that mistake! Never noticed that one! You ask to many questions! xP Thanks for the review and help!
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 11/07/08 - 01:41 pm · For: Catching up on the Times
Great chap! a little less tense than other chaps. can't wait for what's next!!
Author's Response: I can't have all the chapters being so tense that you can feel your splean tieing itself in a knot! lol But thanks for having faith in me! Thanx 4 review!