Reviews For Full Moons
Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 - 09:49 am · For: Full Moons
Haha, I don't think I can top that reveiw; anyway, I just read "Rant" and I realized I'd read one of your stories before but I couldn't remeber which one. So I went back to check and I couldn't beleive I didn't leave a reveiw for this! I remeber reading this story and thinking "OH MY GOD THAT WAS GREAT!"
She's write, you did a great job writing it. I wish I could portray a charecter's personality without actually having to switch POVs (which is why my stories usually end up in third person). You did a great job.
It was a great story...which is why I can't beleive you only have 2 reveiws! Those lazy ass readers should write how awesomely adorable this story was!
Again, I loved it. Brilliant.
Author's Response: Aww *hugs* Thank you so much! rnrnYa, I have an account on FF.net, and this is the story that got the most reviews. I posted it on here thinking that other people might like it too, but even the view count was low. WAHHH! lol, I'm over it now. :P rnrnYou are such an amazing reviewer too! Thanks again!
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 12/05/08 - 02:02 pm · For: Full Moons
Lol Sasuke was a little more flambouant than usual, but it still suited him very well! This was a great one shot, I love stories that shift from bffs to lovers. A lot of first person fics come off oddly and the writer tends to switch between characters' POV's. You did a fantastic job keeping the same POV and you didn't write out anyone's thoughts but Naruto's which left a great quality about the way Sasuke's character was uncovered through dialogue and action.
Excellent paragraphing, spelling, grammar and use of white space too. <3
Author's Response: Wow. I think that might have been the best review i've ever recieved. Thank you so much! ^_^