Reviews For Rejected
Name: Monjaru (Signed) · Date: 23/09/08 - 04:46 pm · For: Chapter 1
You know, I don't think Vix was trying to be hurtful with his corrections. I think he was just pointing out a few things you missed because fixing that could improve the story.
I'm afraid to say that I too am a bit of a nitpicker and probably would have done something similar had he not beat me to it. o.o; It is generally accepted that stories with proper spelling and grammar will be taken more seriously than one without.
So try to be a bit more accepting of correction when it's constructive. Because I can understand that if it's just a pure flame where someone plainly states that you suck or they hate your work, I'd probably go off on them myself, but I think Vixkill was just trying to be helpful. :)
Nice story, by the way. NaruHina is my favorite of the pairings in Naruto. ^^
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 - 07:39 am · For: Chapter 2
"the site of Naruto" sight
"Your really" You're
"at Hinata's suprised," surprise
"lookad at Naruto." looked
Author's Response: seriously dued, i'm sorry that I am unable to avaoid making a few mistakes. Just read the god forsaken story, and if you don't like it, don't comment.
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 - 07:15 am · For: Chapter 1
"quiet" quite
"time They" they
"Don't through" throw
"hoe" ho - quite OC for hinata to say, no matter how she feels. then again, many would think naruto would never slip into this kind of state anyway.
"that your the best" you're - you are
"Your right," You're
"i can''t" can't
"Ichiruka's" Ichiraku
Name: ren uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 - 01:55 pm · For: Chapter 1
yes haha i got it sorted its me ryako-asakora the one that requested the story and i have a proposition for you i want you to be part of a story since you can add multiple authors i am asking the most popular and personal favorate authors of mine to help me with this story its basically us being transported into the naruto world i have asked frosty and tige321 so if you could help me i would be so greatfull caoi from jashinist soul reaper and shinobi ren uchiha/raiko asakora
Name: darkxratha (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 - 08:05 pm · For: Chapter 2
more keiko more! or i will be forced to kill yooh ._. 10 from me!
Name: Hollywood (Anonymous) · Date: 29/03/08 - 01:43 pm · For: Chapter 1
I really luv it!! Really good!!!
Name: mk (Anonymous) · Date: 28/03/08 - 08:28 pm · For: Chapter 1
do u have a fanfiction.com user and if so what is it?
Author's Response: no, I don't.
Name: kirsten (Anonymous) · Date: 26/03/08 - 05:42 am · For: Chapter 1
OMG make more pleas
Name: kirsten (Anonymous) · Date: 26/03/08 - 05:42 am · For: Chapter 1
OMG make more pleas
Name: ryan-asakora (Anonymous) · Date: 22/03/08 - 02:57 pm · For: Chapter 1
oh and also can u do me a favour i can hardly get on to tonfa its confusing can u kinda explain ^_^'''
Author's Response: It's pretty simple for me. If you do manage to get on, try using a different skin. Somtimes one skin has more glitches than another.
Name: i like bacon (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 - 02:56 pm · For: Chapter 1
hmmm i have to say that was a nice spin you put on the beginning of this story
Name: ryan-asakora (Anonymous) · Date: 22/03/08 - 01:44 pm · For: Chapter 1
wow u actually liked the idea i am touched not only that it is great you realy pulled it off better than i could imagined i am deffinatly putting this story in my favorates i soon as i get on TONFA which is way complicated i can only hope i can be a good a writer as you yours truthfully ryan asakora