Reviews For Pretty Boy meets Gothic Boy
Name: nina (Anonymous) · Date: 11/10/13 - 12:00 am · For: Chapter 6
Thank yo for the lovely tale. Hope to read the continuation soon thank you!
Name: nina (Anonymous) · Date: 10/10/13 - 11:46 pm · For: Chapter 5
It was great story development. Dont be so hard on yourself and dont apologize. You are doing us afavor by keeping us wanting more and giving us..your fans your talent. Please update. I would like it to continue.
Name: nina (Anonymous) · Date: 10/10/13 - 09:36 pm · For: Chapter 4
Really really amazing!!!! Thank you please update soon !!!
Name: nina (Anonymous) · Date: 10/10/13 - 08:30 pm · For: Chapter 3
Omg!!!!!! I love it!!!! I hope you and your sis are better. You know those shit nuggets are stubborn sometimes but you gotta love them! Please update and get your arm better too. Thank you for your stories.
Name: nina (Anonymous) · Date: 10/10/13 - 06:19 pm · For: Chapter 2
I love it. So tragic, so suspenseful. I really connected with the characters great job. You are talented, please update.
Name: nina (Anonymous) · Date: 10/10/13 - 06:07 pm · For: Chapter 1
Very intiguing please. Please. Update
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 22/01/12 - 12:06 am · For: Chapter 6
Good.stuff.i.want.more!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 11/07/10 - 05:30 pm · For: Chapter 5
Hm...I like this chapter Gaara seems himself; the moody hormoned teen. If you're really wondering how children stand the abuse; watch Oprah or Dr. Phil... mah; still good job
Author's Response: Hehe. Thank you. I wanted Gaara to be his usual as you put it "moody hormoned teen"self. I see that, that really suits him just fine. And, am not really much of television, but, I'll take your word for it and watch either Oprah, or Dr. Phil. Thank you for being a wonderful reviewer. I appreciate it. rn-Ivy.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 07/07/10 - 12:26 am · For: Chapter 4
Well...this was a not the chapter I was hoping for, I'm afraid...It was very confusing to understand some of the actions; very ..choppy I guess you can say. It just wasn't good like the others....I can't really discribe more of what wasn't good right now; big headache from little brother who is going to die's loud music AT MIDNIGHT! ugh@@....
Author's Response: Yes, I know. Is my mistake. I wasn't really feeling the story as much I use too. But, next chapter will be much better. Hopefully. I can only hope it does. And sorry about the headache. And, I have a lot of mistakes, I know. Thank you for letting me know and for being a reviewer. :D I really appreciate it. Next chapter will be out soon, maybe by next week. Once again, thank you for reviewing, I appreciate your honesty and everything. :D rn-Ivy.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/07/10 - 11:52 pm · For: Chapter 3
Im really a good kid... puncuation is I'm
. I know is not, ...I believe you meant his...
There were more puncuation errors just so you know. I do notice there's a lot of swearing; I don't mind swearing just....not to the exent to having it like in every other sentence.....you understand right?
I do like that Itachi is being nice to Gaara and all but, the flash back...that was pretty heavy. It's good, but damn...that reminds me too much of my character Jasmine~sheesh... =) it's like scary...the abuse anyway.
Moving on, I like the chapter, in whole; I find the pretty boy attitude annoying but, I find those kind of people very annoying so no harm no fowl. Keep writing, you're doing fine in my book.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/07/10 - 08:27 pm · For: Chapter 3
Im really a good kid... puncuation is I'm
. I know is not, ...I believe you meant his...
There were more puncuation errors just so you know. I do notice there's a lot of swearing; I don't mind swearing just....not to the exent to having it like in every other sentence.....you understand right?
I do like that Itachi is being nice to Gaara and all but, the flash back...that was pretty heavy. It's good, but damn...that reminds me too much of my character Jasmine~sheesh... =) it's like scary...the abuse anyway.
Moving on, I like the chapter, in whole; I find the pretty boy attitude annoying but, I find those kind of people very annoying so no harm no fowl. Keep writing, you're doing fine in my book.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/07/10 - 08:11 pm · For: Chapter 2
the only friend he has are. ---instead of a period use a ; it allows the sentence to continue as needed but, doesn't seem like a run on one...
He opens it and rates it---- it's not rates; it's raids..
I still must say, I like this story. I'm not sadistic....well a little but, the story is interesting. Abuse is everywhere now of days and by now it's starting to be dealt with. So I say keep writing I like where the pretty boy and goth boy are going!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/07/10 - 06:48 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hmm...I like this story. Plain and simple; I feel I can very well believe this story is actually someone's life. It's that good.
Drama queen kid with an elder brother; a common but, unique. I like this story because it makes me think of my time with my dad in a groceries. Don't ask why, it just does. Sibling fighting; the whole nine yards amuse me so keep up the good work.
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 - 01:42 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hay. Great story keep it up. amzing. X
Name: scarlett_fire (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 - 09:21 pm · For: Chapter 1
wow... cuss fight. oh and lunchables rock xD, the cracker, turkey, cheese is my favorite ^^ love the story