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Reviews For Second Chance

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 19/04/08 - 02:41 pm · For: Solution
yay! i love it! please continue!


Name: C.Y.I.D.I.Y? (Anonymous) · Date: 14/04/08 - 06:09 pm · For: Solution
Awesome story, please keep updating!


Name: C.Y.I.D.I.Y? (Anonymous) · Date: 14/04/08 - 06:08 pm · For: Solution
Awesome story, please keep updating!


Name: pocky (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/08 - 05:14 am · For: Solution
i read your first story && the sequal today. and i have to say that i LOOOOVE your story! update soon!


Name: angelhitomie (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/08 - 10:06 am · For: Solution
I like your story very much. You have a great style.
I am interested how Sasuke reacts to became pregnant.
hope the next chapter appears soon.


Name: BlueWolf (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 - 09:47 pm · For: Loss
So the Baby was like a half human half demon fox hybrid? Interesting.... Didn't see that one coming.

then again I didn't see sex change uchiha thing coming either lol.

can you clarify some of the vocabulary you are using such "lemon" and "MPreg" i've never heard anyone use those word before.

keep up the good work! can't wait to find out what happens next

Author's Response: Hey, thank for reading!
Lemon is an anime and FanFiction term for a sex scene, a lime would just be making out or the impression that sex will take place. MPreg is male pregnancy, it is popular around some yaoi FanFic circles. These terms are used as warning so people can avoid fics they would not like on principle.
You don't have to believe everything you read, but it can still be interesting to read, ne?
Tereshi


Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 - 06:17 am · For: Solution
YAY FOR BABY UZUCHIHAS. ;D
=]
ZOMG. you could have little bibs for them.. and they'd both say "Daddys Girl/ Boy" XD
Getting carried away and off subject lol x Love it. [= ox


Name: xlovexshikamarux (Anonymous) · Date: 30/03/08 - 03:45 pm · For: Solution
i know it was serious and all, but sasuke getting a sex change and having babies?.........i cracked up laughing!!! sorry for that, but anyways, still awsome. keep up the good work! ;)


Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 - 01:43 pm · For: Solution

Hehe I likeee i likee =D

Its coming along reeeeeealy well!

Cant wait to see sasuke's reaction to the pregnant thing lol

Xx..xX



Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 - 06:49 pm · For: Solution
I must say...That scene with Naruto, Jiraiya, and Tsunade was simply adorable. I can just picture Naruto now! Jumping around and screaming with joy! ^^ and a pregnant Sasuke...CUTE!

Hiroshi! Yes, I am VERY glad that you put him back in! I fell in love with him during 'Second Chance'! And now that he's back...YAY! Hmmm...Hiroshi and Sakura...*thinks* Could it be...?

Tereshi-sama! Don't make me worry like that! I almost cried when you didn't update! I was worried! *pouts* But I'm happy now that I realize that you're okay! Can't wait to read more! *loves* ♥

~lemon


Name: mike jones (Anonymous) · Date: 27/03/08 - 12:34 pm · For: Solution
RIP Sakura's spot as a good character. Sasuke is slowly nudging her out of Naruto's life. First the miscarriage, now she can't have babies, then Sasuke can have babies. Please keep the SakuraxNaruto going, even if just a little, please dont ditch her


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 27/03/08 - 06:19 am · For: Solution

One correction:
" I told the council you wanted to bury your daughter a Whirlpool because it was the ancestral home of your mother." Should that be 'at'?

Naruto mumbling "because he's not a girl" was so cute ^^

Jariya's random appearance is a nice touch. Naruto's reaction to the idea of Sasuke bearing children is priceless. Again you write his character excellently. I'm excited to find out what the 'mother' thinks indeed...muahaha Sasuke has no idea...*rings hands evily* It'll be interesting having Hiroshi back and in an important role.

I don't remember now, was Hiroshi is real name or his ANBU name?

Anywho, I've paid the review whore :P jks jks

luv ya Tereshi-chan!



Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 - 02:27 pm · For: Loss
I'm happy that the sequel is out...but such a sad beginning! T^T I'm sure the Sakura haters will love you, but it is very sad! I'm officially obsessed with this series. ^^ I love how thought out it is! It really is one of the best plotted stories I've ever read.

I'm really looking forward to reading about pregnant Sasuke. So, I'll look forward to next Sunday then! To me, it's a very good beginning to 'Second Chance'! So keep at it! ♥

~lemon

Author's Response: You've become obsessed with my story and I'm obsessed with your reviews. You didn't review on Sunday and I thought, 'Oh, no. What happened to lemon?' But then I saw my email today and said, 'Is that my lemon? Yay! It is lemon!!'
Sorry for the begining being sad but the more I thought about it, the more I decided Sakura couldn't have Naruto's first baby. (And those Sakura-hater girls do scare me sometimes ;P)
Hope the story lives up to expectations,
-Tereshi


Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 16/03/08 - 01:11 pm · For: Loss
yay its gonna be an Mpreg woot you are the best haha i liked it

although i dont like how it went straight into her losing the baby but all in all it was great i sooooo cant wait till the next 1 ^_^

Author's Response: My first draft went straight to the MPreg. So this is an improvement, trust me. We get more fun this way and not many people here wanted to hear much about Sakura in the first place.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!


Name: Nathan (Anonymous) · Date: 16/03/08 - 08:58 am · For: Loss
Wow - this was a shock :-O
Cant wait for more chapters ... my head spinns from the tons possible outcomes of this story :-D
Please keep me updated (A)
sus5@azet.sk

Author's Response: Can't wait to hear from you next week. I'll add you to the email list right now.
Tereshi


Name: mikejonesagain (Anonymous) · Date: 16/03/08 - 08:54 am · For: Loss
man im so happy this series will stay alive. best fanfic ever! This one already has more suspense than the other one. Looking promising and I cant wait to find out about Hiroshi

Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!
Sorry to leve you in suspense about Hiroshi in "Last Chance," but as you can see I needed him here.


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 16/03/08 - 05:03 am · For: Loss

Awn poor baby... :'(

Sasuke comforting Sakura really illustrates how complicated their little family is.

I wish the chapter could have been longer, but at least there's something. I've been waiting for this ^_^ After a while I was worried that I wouldn't be informed because it'd be a new story, but then I remembered that I favourited you as an author so I get an email for anything you write :D



Author's Response: I'm so happy I'm one of your favorite authors!
Writing about the baby made me sad too, poor Naruto. But you know how I'm afraid of the Sakura-haters and I did promise you MPreg.
I'll have to use my favorite line: "It's all for the plot."
Look forward to your review when I post next week,
-Tereshi


Name: sheechiibii (Signed) · Date: 16/03/08 - 04:51 am · For: Loss

YAY!!!!

I was totaly looking forward to the sequil =]

And i know its harsh but im really glad sakura lost the baby. hehe

Xx..xX



Author's Response: It's okay, I knew somebody would be.
I'm glad you're reading again and that you liked the opener.
Tereshi ;P


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