Reviews For Don't Push Me Away
Name: Tari (Signed) · Date: 08/06/08 - 02:41 am · For: Don't Push Me Away
Heya! Bet you've forgotten all about me, huh? XD
I love this, it's really good! I actually kinda of wih this had really happened....T_T....stupid Sasuke...
The only thing I would say is the same as the other person who's reviewed this - maybe go into a little more detail? Sasuke's so mesed up and angsty I don't think he would make a snap decision to go back like that. Otherwise, it's great!
BTW, I've posted the fist chapter of my new story in case you missed it - thought I'd better tell you, seeing as you keep threatening me with pointy objects and all XD
Ja ne!
Name: ForyourLove (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 - 07:54 pm · For: Don't Push Me Away
Awwr, this was kinda cute. Emo Sasuke.
Not bad for a first try :D Could use more detail...like work through the breakdown, drag out all the emotions and give more reasons to his sudden outburst cause it kinda just felt like it was all out of no where and caught people by surprise.
Maybe make a second chapter with him returning, doesn't have to be a songfic chapter if you don't want it to be ^^ Thats just a thought.
If you write something else please tell me I'd love to read it and see how you develop your writing style, or if you want a beta I'd be glad to help!
Later!