Reviews For Chi weilding Ninja
Name: Iago (Signed) · Date: 09/10/09 - 02:48 pm · For: New World New Adventure
Hey, welcome back to the site and good luck on your further stories! :) Don't feel too pressed to finish age-old fics either, it's only normal to have started several plotlines per each finished one. The important thing is to keep writing. Man, I should take my own advice on that...
Name: Iago (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 - 01:43 pm · For: New Chuunin Team Emerges?
Sorry, I can't really see what the author wants from reviews so this is probably not going to be very useful. :(
Judging by the comments, reviews don't cause changes in the text but instead a need to explain why not, and I by default dislike the "story will only continue if I get reviews" approach. More so, even, when the reviews get responses like this. I do appreciate that the reviews get replies, though, it's an indication that they get read. :)
I thought the summary's character lineup was misleading at least so far, but it might be I'm just missing stuff because I don't know Dragonball Z. I think it would be a good idea to just get practice at writing stuff at this point, and spellcheck and polish up to get more readers who will give the story itself a shot. I found the heavy weight on dialogue over description off-putting, personally - I can't get a hold of the story itself. But then I'm spoiled. ;)
Author's Response: I'm not sure if I respondd to this or not. It's been a while since I been on this site but I'm back. This story was written when i first truly took a shot at fanfiction around 2006. Then I was a total newb who only desire was to write a story with total uberness because in my mind, I thought it was cool and if I thought it was cool then so did everyone else ya know? I realized that trying to force people to review is a no go so yeah no go for that. But now after years later (and taking my first year in college), I've upgraded to bigger and better writing. I still do a lot of fanfics but I'm not entirely sure if I wanted to continue this. Originally I had no real plot for this at all just come and bash, Vegeta, Goku and OC fall in love with three girls and badda bing, so I'm not even sure if I want to continue this anymore. So yeah, thanks for the information though. Ja Ne
Name: shadowdragon (Signed) · Date: 03/03/08 - 03:17 pm · For: New World New Adventure
silent witness has a point. personally, i do like description on the places and character interaction.
if you ever want some one to proof read something, my door is open. you already know my e-mail (not like you ever did respond to the e-mail where you wanted to give a request for my fic or anything *glares* RESPOND!!!!! or not if you don't wan't me to put your request in there, but it is sooo annoying when peaple take WEEKS to respond to a darn e-mail thats asking a favor for something...grrr sorry 'bout that, plz forgive me?)
Author's Response: Well I never got your reply to my message so yeah
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 - 06:47 pm · For: New World New Adventure
Well, you obviously need to post the other chapters for me to review them. I'm not a telepath :p
Well, let's see... I think it would be a good idea for you to spend more time describing what everything looks like than just just describing character interaction. Give us some clue what the world looks like, and what's going on around the heroes. It will make the fic seem more realistic.
Author's Response: Well yeah. I didn't want to spend too much time on that since they won't be there for a while. I will of course be doing that once we get to other parts of the Naruto 'verse
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 - 08:53 pm · For: New Chuunin Team Emerges?
Well, i suppose this was going to happen soon or later...
Naruto is often compared to Dragon Ball, for better or worse. I can't make a judgment call right now, but I can offer some advice.
Have a friend proof your fics before you post them so that you can catch grammar and spelling errors. Plus, at a couple instances it looked like you changed ideas mid sentence, making things a bit awkward.
One lad note: please don't hold your reader's hostage like that. It's not a good way to get people to review your fics.
Author's Response: Well yeah. You should have know just by the title, which I may or may not change. In retrospect, I made these two chapters like last year may. That was when I first started making fanfics. I was rushing and wanted to get my ideas out quick. Don't worry though, these next feature of chapters will have much better dialouge, with better grammer and all. Plus more context within each chapter. So stay tuned for the next chapter.
Name: shadowdragon (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 - 02:29 pm · For: New Chuunin Team Emerges?
I will help you get to 20!
this is so awesome! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks I hope I get those reviews soon so I can get these other chapters up. I am itching to post them. Jeez this itching just won't stop.
Name: shadowdragon (Signed) · Date: 23/02/08 - 04:03 pm · For: New World New Adventure
OOOOH! i don' know much about DBZ, but this is interesting! Update soon!
Author's Response: I have 5 more chapters ready to be uploaded. I just want people to review this before I add another chapter. And no the next 5 chapters are not the last ones either.