Reviews For Child of Love and Life
Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 07/02/09 - 06:43 am · For: Chapter 1: Welcome back Seifuri
stylji stylji stylji!!! were all waiting for you to continue with this story. its one of ya best, chica!! love ya cuz, keep up the good work!!!
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 26/03/08 - 03:59 pm · For: Chapter 1: Welcome back Seifuri
i apsolutly luv dat pic of you on the front page!!!!!!!!!um der beta not be no boys checkn' u out cause u know i got to check them out!!!jp!!!!!but ur doing asome and i didnt know u played sports, go head cuz, work those weeklings to death!!!!luv ya cuz
Author's Response: thank you cousin!!! I like that pic too no no boys are checking me out so you dont have to worry ^_^rnI dont play softball, i manage it with coach Tony as my seventh period
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 19/03/08 - 04:23 pm · For: Chapter 12: A Dire Chance
seifuri is so HARD!!!!!!!!!!!! and im sary 4 pressuring u i kinda forgot 4 a sec dat we had school. school comes befor stories!!!!!!!!!! luv u and ill try not to rush u so much'
Author's Response: thanks and its okay..i don't get home until 4 or 5 now since i assist in coaching jv softball so im usually tired when i get home, but i try to update!
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 16/03/08 - 07:32 pm · For: Chapter 12: A Dire Chance
i luv this chap!!!!!!!!!!!! i knew he ment a lot 2 her!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL RIGHT, TYRNA HIDE IT...shame on him
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 16/03/08 - 07:31 pm · For: Chapter 1: Welcome back Seifuri
y wont you answer me back??i need a response.
Author's Response: I'm sorry, schools got me in a choke hold
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/08 - 06:01 pm · For: Chapter 12: A Dire Chance
OOOO MMMMMYYYYYYYY GGGGGGAAAAASHHHHH!!!! how....how....how could seifuri 4give him for doing that to his woman!!!! and someone made aysori do that???!!! so aysori does have feelings?? but i thought he admitted that he didn't like her and that she messed up all his plans!!!!!?????? aaaaaaaaaa cuzn.............U NEED TO HURRY UP AND GET TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!( no rush)
it's all because i luv you and your stories!!! and a great writer can make me feel that way. he he he he
o yea when am i gonna get a copy of that poem you wrote???^_^ u get a 10000 in rating
Author's Response: I WILL!!!!!!! promise!!! ^_^
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/08 - 05:48 pm · For: Chapter 11: Liar
.............that's......so .....sad!!!!! she so brave!!!!!!!!poor seifuri!!!!!! aysori is going to get his ass kicked!!!!!! poor poor aysori and seifuri
Author's Response: lol he sure is
Name: Lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 08:14 pm · For: Chapter 10: Grow up
NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! IS EVERY ONE OK!!!!! AND WAS THAT BASTERD TALKING BOUT SAYURI!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: keep reading! yes he was talking about Sayuri
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 08:01 pm · For: Chapter 9: Taunting
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: u shall see...hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 07:43 pm · For: Chapter 8: The Chuunin Exams
...........................................................................................................stil speech less..................................
Author's Response: Speak, damn you! SPEAK!!!
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 07:34 pm · For: Chapter 7: Fading Memories
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????? I dont understand why is she dead??????!!!!!!!!! cuz u got me pouring in tears and i can't stop 4 som reason............ i hope she's really not dead.................... positive: i like the eye coloring changing, and y does it seem like negi has no compassion 4 seifuri in this situation!!!!!!???????? i luv sayuri 2 much 4 her 2 be gone now!!!!!! and y is she DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!...........................
Author's Response: Alright I'll snitch...Sayuri is not dead. And Neji cares but Seifuri is a shinobi now, he cant treat him like a little kid anymore. He has to learn how to deal with loss and death like waking up. thanks keep reading !!!!
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 07:15 pm · For: Chapter 6: Rasendori
WOW!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know right? one word, wow!
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 06:57 pm · For: Chapter 5: Sayuri Is Missing
this is not good!!!!! u got my her crying!!!!! IS SAYURI OK!!!!! i hope shes ok, i really do, hows seifuri going to react? wel im gonna find out cause i still got a lot more to read........
Author's Response: Dont cry!!!!! Sayuri is..well i cant tell! keep reading cuzzo!!!
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 06:36 pm · For: Chapter 4: Sasuke's Challenge
y does it seem like sasuke like seifuri more than his own SON? o yea i love Kira 2 death hes way different then sasuke
Author's Response: Sasuke doesn't like Seifuri more, he just has very high expectations for Kira and Kira is unmotivated. I had to make Kira different. You see how in love he is with Mangekyo
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 06:22 pm · For: Chapter 3: Sayuris Competition
i LUV THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! SAYURi is the BEST i luv her attitude it so kool!!!!!! she is such a mixture of tamari and shikamaru i luv IT!!!!!!! and y is she studing up under sakura, y not sunade, im not mad persay or nathn, just shocked, not a bad shocked..........aaaaaaaa........u know what i mean..........ooooooooooo yea how could i 4 get!!!!!!!! Seifuri's hair is long!!!!!! he must look super cute now!! and why does he tink Sayuri is mean? enough wit my questions i got 2 read MORE!!!!!^_^
P.S UR SO ASOME!!!!!!he he he
Author's Response: Thanks! Poor Sayuri is in for a rude awakening though! Shes studying under Sakura because Tsunade is too busy assisting Naruto. Seifuri is sexy!!! He gone be pullin when he gets grown!
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 05:59 pm · For: Chapter 2: Team Sasuke and Team Sakura
a what?! sasuke has a son? by who? seifuri is such a perv, he didnt even here that that girl was his cusin......... does seifuri really like sayuri? u should really draw a picture of all ur characters and post them up on ur page so every would know what they look like and so they'll know how asome ur drawing is....but so far it's good
Author's Response: yup! By Sakura of course! You don't think I'd leave Sakura with no action do you??? Seifuri doesn't understand the whole cousin thing yet! I know i wanna draw them but i don't have a scanner so i cant send them! Thanks for the compliments!
Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 24/02/08 - 04:44 pm · For: Chapter 1: Welcome back Seifuri
love it
Author's Response: thanks cuzzo!!!
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 - 07:42 am · For: Chapter 6: Rasendori
keep in mind that the rasengan &chidori are different elements and take more chakra than sefuri can actually use , and also it would have an entirely different name, but still good and theres a sentence said by sefuri that would make a good title for an episode "This time is for real! No more Illusions!"
Author's Response: Let me explain to you that i know all about the element stuff. But since this is a fictional story, I thought It'd be fun to mix things up. rnLOL! that does make a good title! LMAO
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 - 06:11 am · For: Chapter 4: Sasuke's Challenge
Well the new Konoha genration seems to b even stronger than the old one. Most of the students couldnt even focus their chakra let alone perform a jutsu
and i dont know if your comparing a pole to a log or talking about something else but Naruto was strapped to a log
Author's Response: hmmmm...I'll go back and check that outrnAnd yeah...these new kids are crazy
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 - 06:02 am · For: Chapter 3: Sayuris Competition
Theres only one thing i really notice when it say "even better" at the beginning it should be better or much better or something like that if use the context you r now then your implying that it was already good or better.- sorry my teacher is wearing off on me.
i dint want to say anything until i was sure but Saferi is messed up hitting on his cousin. He's messed up for a lot of reasons, but he doesnt seem to be very creative.
Author's Response: hahahahaha...awww, thats cold. Tell your teacher to leave you alone. Seifuri doesn't really realize the whole family's don't like families thing no matter how much the adults try to explain. I used to be like that. I liked my cousin for the longest until I actually realized we were, well, you know- cousins. Now we're best friends
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 - 05:52 am · For: Chapter 2: Team Sasuke and Team Sakura
yo stll grmmar errors but way better than me but "Nejani" come on the name doesnt roll of the tounge at all, ehh but whatever its your story sorry for that anyways i knew it was tentens since you mentioned the bun then i put all the features together and knew for sure, but then you said Neji which was the immediate clue or cousins. But you got me with that Kiraisune kid i could have sworn it was shikas although the name didnt match. unless somehow Sasuke and Shikamaru got together and somehow concieved, or Sasuke did Ino and then she went to Shika or something of that sort i dont want type all the possibilites-
Congrats you got a very long comment!!!
Author's Response: EWWWW! no way! LOL. Sasuke is gay to me though. (not in the story of course) The name Nejani , and pronunciation of the name is pretty easy and common here where I live. Besides my name is similar. Rastylssji is my real name. (Ra-style-jee)
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 16/02/08 - 05:39 am · For: Chapter 1: Welcome back Seifuri
sorry i havnt read my com...wait i fogot to add this to my favs...sorry i havnt done it in a long time i forgot by the way *reads comment below* yeah it is kinda sad
Author's Response: It's okay! as long as your still reading. I thought school had got you
Name: Red Ninja Vixen (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 - 12:08 am · For: Chapter 11: Liar
go me!!!!!!
Author's Response: thats just sad.......
Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 - 09:28 pm · For: Chapter 10: Grow up
Way to go Sayuri. Your a really good writer! you need to update soon! I'll be waiting! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It was good character development to go into Nejanis personality too
Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 - 09:27 pm · For: Chapter 9: Taunting
Wow...poor Seifrui. He saved his teamates, that was nice but what happens to him??
Author's Response: Read the next chapter to find out! its great hahahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahah!