Reviews For Child of Love and Life
Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 - 04:56 pm · For: Chapter 8: The Chuunin Exams
Interesting, I think he's going a bit far with the pouting but that's just me.
Author's Response: Thanx! dont worry about Seifuri. Now that h's a little older everyone is a lot less lenient on him and he's just starting to realize he can no longer have his way all the time. That's all. He's still a kid ^_^ He'll grow out of it.
Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 - 04:21 pm · For: Chapter 2: Team Sasuke and Team Sakura
I'm glad there's a new story, the other one was awesome!
Author's Response: tHANK YOU!!!!! Everyone wanted a sequel so I made it! ^_^ Enjoy!
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 - 09:08 am · For: Chapter 1: Welcome back Seifuri
fine but what aboutthe guys in dresses they creep me out am i allowed to kill them?
Author's Response: oh yeah(lol, pun off yur name^_^) you can kill em!
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 - 08:33 am · For: Chapter 2: Team Sasuke and Team Sakura
*claps* you have to enbarras everyone in the story dont you. and finally someone spells Hyuuga right. although you might want consider fusing the names althoug that would decrease the inportance of the other so i dont like being formal *punches someone dressed in a suit talking superiorly* sorry well please continue
Author's Response: it kool. ur krazy ^_^ i will be continuing. leave those guys with the suits alone. LOL
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 01/02/08 - 08:24 am · For: Chapter 1: Welcome back Seifuri
very good.
nice use of flashback.
but can you explain this part tom me-
Sasuke called to him somewhere off in the distance.
"Hey! Sensei!
"Sasuke-Kun!"
The two ten year olds ran over the rolling fields of grass until
they reached a very impatient appearing Sasuke, glowering down at them.
"Your late, student."
first sasuke calls seifuri sensei, then student its confusing me yeah i know sefuri out ranks him but still.
i liked this a lot and dont get down if you dont get as many reviews as previous stories and chapters school has everyone distracted.
i like the pictures for 'Crimson Tears'
which reminds me, you should find or make pictures of seiyuri and sefuri and the other kids if u can.
Author's Response: i didnt know sasuke callede seifuri sensei...well ill fix it!