Reviews For Konoha High School
Name: Wilson (Anonymous) · Date: 22/02/08 - 04:30 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hmm, gd start, though less dialogue and more action coulda been better.
And the way you do dialogue is a bit uncomfortable to read.
But yeah, overall, pretty gd. More twists would be fun too.
Name: Esther (Anonymous) · Date: 20/02/08 - 10:09 am · For: Chapter 3
I likes this one as much as the others, keep up the good work. I am looking forward to reading the other Chapters.
Name: Esther (Anonymous) · Date: 15/02/08 - 09:44 am · For: Chapter 2
*wipes tears away* OMG, THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!
Keep up the good work, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Name: Esther (Anonymous) · Date: 07/02/08 - 09:31 am · For: Chapter 1
That was really good. Though, to tell you the truth, try and take some words that you used more than once in the sentence........like this:
"On it was a big 100 on it."
Insted of saying that, maybe you can say "On it was a big 100".
But otherwise it was really good. ^.^
Name: uzamaki_fluff (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 - 11:08 am · For: Chapter 1
*blinks and tilts her head* It was okay..Not bad not good, a bit confusing with how it is written story format and when someone spoke it was in script format. Also there are a few spelling error and grammatical errors, but it was still readable and enjoyable..Keep it up!!!
and is the mystery voice Hinata?? because it is a bit obvious. and I really wanna know what Naruto was going to say to Sakura
Author's Response: I'm really sorry about that. Thanks for telling me , I'll do my best to change it okay? Gah! I didn't know there were errors, I'm really sorry!! T-T As for the voice, I guess it is a bit obvious. Yes, it was Hinata. :D As for what Naruto was gonna tell Sakura, you'll just have to wait til the next chapter. ;)rnrnP.S. Thanks for the review!