Reviews For I Want him!
Name: cat12345 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/11 - 08:01 pm · For: Iruka Arrives
plz wrire more
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 10/03/08 - 09:45 pm · For: Iruka Arrives
This is good. Hope you got more. Or at least update it.
Name: narubaby (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 - 01:37 pm · For: Iruka Arrives
lol nice naruto soo freakin stupid i love it
Name: s1886x (Anonymous) · Date: 01/03/08 - 08:24 pm · For: Iruka Arrives
still a great plot, just ease up on the 'author's notes'. used sparingly they're helpful, but litter the story with them and it sounds choppy.
Name: s1886x (Anonymous) · Date: 01/03/08 - 08:16 pm · For: First Day in the Palace
really a very fun story. great setup and fitting to all of the characters. what can i say, it works! the only thing is that you may want to work on how you allude to the penis (it's slightly lame at some points). but the story itself is great! i'm a little confused as to what's up with the dream sequences. was it 2 dreams, or did sasuke dream the first then really do it, or did he wake up in his dream then wake up for real, what? anyway, keep it up! i'm a newly-realized yaoi fan and i have taken a liking to your story. hoping for more!
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 01/03/08 - 02:09 pm · For: Iruka Arrives
i want a kakashi and iruka smex scene that would be GREAT haha with kakashi as da seme of course
Name: sakuyalove (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 - 11:16 am · For: Iruka Arrives
*Trying to be helpful, not mean*
This story could use a little more body. At this points it's kind of choppy. The A/Ns are breaking up the story and making it kind of hard to read, you may want to wait and put them at the end.
If you add in more discriptions I'm sure this could be a good story. Maybe you might want to find a beta to work with, or maybe you're happy with the way it is right now. In that case just ignore me. ;)
-Tereshi
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 - 09:27 am · For: Iruka Arrives
hay good i like that fact that you put kakshi and Iruka together. plz plz plz write more. X
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 18/02/08 - 06:17 am · For: First Day in the Palace
hehe thats so cute! I love the little an's they make me giggle.
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 11/02/08 - 01:32 pm · For: Sex Dreams
wow! you just boggled my mind. that was great. keep up the good work.
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 02/02/08 - 02:08 pm · For: Target acquired!
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! that was amazing. keep writing. oh and could you do me a favor and check out my story Darkness and Light. thanks ^_^
Name: DRAGONKINGHT (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 07:03 pm · For: THe Bored Prince
love to read more
Name: yaoimyantidrug (Anonymous) · Date: 27/01/08 - 02:16 pm · For: THe Bored Prince
Awesome Blosom! I Love This Prologue!
Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 27/01/08 - 12:45 am · For: THe Bored Prince
Kyaaaah ! I wanna read more !!!!! xD Sounds great !!!!!
Name: yvorazz3986 (Anonymous) · Date: 26/01/08 - 03:40 pm · For: THe Bored Prince
Oh heck yes! this is starting out great. i think that you should update this.