Reviews For We Could Watch It Fly And Just Keep Lookin On
Name: Dawn (Anonymous) · Date: 21/03/08 - 08:02 pm · For: Enter: Suzume Urame
did you get the name from hallelujah by paramore?
Name: Vxikill (Anonymous) · Date: 10/03/08 - 03:22 am · For: Kakashi: Sharingan Warrior!
good story (i'm an oc fan, so yay!)
but you could use a beta-er; there's some spelling issues and bits where things are skipped over so someone who hasn't seen Naruto would get reasonably lost.
a few other conflicts, but over all i like your story and want to see where it goes.
Name: darkprincess666 (Anonymous) · Date: 22/02/08 - 07:58 pm · For: Enter: Suzume Urame
this is a amazing story so far it's difebitly better than mine
;D
Name: skye1011 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/02/08 - 11:23 am · For: Kakashi: Sharingan Warrior!
good knt wait 4 more