Reviews For Memory
Name: emz_rose (Anonymous) · Date: 11/01/08 - 11:36 pm · For: Part One: Iruka
Oh my god, I love this... and the spelling and grammar's fine so I wouldn't worry about it if I were you. Seriously, I love this and I think it's great (if a bit sad). Loved how you did the flashback and showed Iruka mourning. Will be looking out for the next chapter which I hope will be posted as soon as possible. Again, great read- I can't wait to read more!
Name: AnneLea (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 - 12:33 pm · For: Part One: Iruka
Looks good enough without the beta, but if you really think you need one, I'm here for you! I check my e-mail once every day or two so don't worry about it taking forever to be returned. Anyway, as for the story, very good!
Author's Response: I mostly need one 'cause sometimes my ideas get stupid on me and someone needs to go and say: "Listen stupid, that part with the squirrels is completely stupid AND pointless."rnAnd Word doesn't always catch my grammar stupids...rnrnThank you!! ^^
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 - 02:57 pm · For: Part One: Iruka
Sweetie, I love you. *snuggle*
Author's Response: AHHHHH! THE AFFECTION! IT BURNS!!!! -struggles to get away-