Reviews For Return and Rebuked
Name: kibafan17 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 - 11:14 am · For: Oh, I see
Hmmm - I like it! X3 - I think that it defiantly has potential, and as a first fic it's pretty damn good really.
Just needs a bit of yaoi IMO (Mwahahahaha!)
Oh and in the first chapter, it's not "begun" it's "began" - Just to let you know =D
Kibafan17 =^.^=
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/08 - 10:08 am · For: Oh, I see
^__^ this story is making me smile, i hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Wow thanks, next chapter should be up in a few hours.
Name: naru_chan_fan (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/08 - 09:17 am · For: Four years later
great story!!