Reviews For Unbreakable Bonds
Name: lunar saint (Anonymous) · Date: 26/03/11 - 07:35 pm · For: Pain
i cant wait for more i hope it is a happy ending
Name: CatyCal95 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/10 - 10:44 pm · For: Pain
oh please continue. i want to know what will happen to naru-chan and the babies?
Name: HinataGirl (Signed) · Date: 29/11/09 - 02:27 pm · For: Pain
Very good, before I became a member, I read this and I would just like to say keep up the good work, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 - 08:45 pm · For: Pain
what is going to hapn!!?? tht bandage freak should die a slow and painful death!!!! *seeths in anger* YOU BTR NOT KILL NARUTO OR HIS KITS!!!! grrrrrr!
sry, im soo by polar so i get bad* mood swings...anyway plz plz plz plz plz rite the next chapter! i hate have the agony of not noing if a chara will die or not.....*pookie*
i hav the urge of pickles and peanut butter no apparent reason...yummy!
Author's Response: Oooooh, you know what? I think I'll have to finish the last chapter soon. XD Or... at least add more to it and beta it! ...I've put it off for so long. ;____; Thank YOU for the yummy review. 8D ::hands pickles:: Sorry, I have no peanut butter...
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 - 07:13 pm · For: Hypnotic
saving him.....im burning with curiousity!
Author's Response: ...I can't tell if you're being sarcastic or not. XD You confuse me too much! Either way, thanks~
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 - 05:36 pm · For: Storage Foxes
go cry emo kid is all i hav to say about ur rambing ^_^
Author's Response: I have the strangest urge to report you... and possibly have you banned. D: You really should have more sympathy, but as those rants are months old and I have no idea what they say anymore, I'll probably just ignore it. I'm wondering why you said it in the first place. I guess you have your reasons. ...Judging by the five stars, I guess you enjoy the story and hate... my author's notes? ...that also has me wondering why you would read that, and yet not comment on the story...
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 - 04:43 pm · For: Observing
what!? where did he get tht?! naruto....
Name: KuroiBiroudou (Signed) · Date: 08/03/09 - 04:28 am · For: Pain
Ah! I hope it's a happy ending! >.< I love this story, but I can't stand tragedies...
Or Danzou.
Author's Response: Haha, I can't stand him, either X] But no worries... I don't want my first serious multi-chap to be a tragedy D: Thank you for reviewing!
Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 - 02:02 pm · For: Encounter
I'm gonna reread your story cuz it's just so good! ^^
Author's Response: Is it really that good?! o__o......=___=; Gah, I should have done better... But, eh, as long as you like it I'm happy ^^ Thank you!
Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 - 02:01 pm · For: Encounter
I'm gonna reread your story cuz it's just so good! ^^
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 31/10/08 - 11:47 am · For: Pain
Wow, This just gotten intense. I hope naruto will be okay. Same for his kids. Please don't let him or the kids die. I would not bear it*STarts crying*
Author's Response: !! ::pats:: Don't cry, don't cry, PLEASE DON'T CRY! DX DX DX ::not good with people:: ::cough:: But I'm glad you like the... intenseness...ess? :D
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 31/10/08 - 11:43 am · For: Friction
*nosebleed*
Um....nice chapter......really nice.
Take a ten from me and this trophie or how ever you spell it.
Author's Response: ::shines trophy:: I will call him shiny, and he shall be mine... mein shineh :D Thank you XD
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 31/10/08 - 11:39 am · For: Pickles and Ice-cream
Awsome!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 31/10/08 - 11:34 am · For: Tempt Me
Woah, too intense for that man. but the story is getting better.
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad that you like it! :D
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 31/10/08 - 11:28 am · For: Hypnotic
Hey, it's me again. I am sorry for not saying anything for a while. But, I like the story still.
Author's Response: No worries, as long as you're still alive :D Thank you for still reading!
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/09/08 - 06:19 am · For: A Part of You
Great one.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/09/08 - 06:17 am · For: Hate
nice. Your story is still great. Keep up the great work
Author's Response: Aw, thank you :)
Name: sakuyalove (Signed) · Date: 31/08/08 - 02:13 pm · For: Friction
No one could say you are horrible Lemon. If anyone gives this chapter a bad review they should be pelted with rotten fruit after it's been removed from an oven at 400 degrees!
And you know I'M eagerly awaiting some NaruSasu. *Love the Pocky*
Author's Response: Thank you! I really hope that no one hates me... but if there's any flamers, I'll be sure to send them to you! Ya seem to have a pretty good idea in mind XD You're probably the only one wanting the NaruSasu besides me, but then again, seems like there aren't any NaruSasu lovers here besides me. -hugs- thanks for reviewing!
Name: HPTR Fangirl (Signed) · Date: 30/08/08 - 09:00 am · For: Friction
I quote the following part, from this chapter:
"“Naruto...we’re not done yet.”
The blonde’s head snapped up. “W-what are you talking about?! Of course we’re done!” he screamed at the other.
“No, Naruto...you see...” Sasuke gestured down to his own pants. “You’ve left me with...” Pale hands moved to undo the buttons of those pants, slowly pulling down the zipper in a torturous way. Naruto suddenly wanted to see--he wanted to see how hard Sasuke was.
“Sas...”
“You’ve left me with a problem that I can’t handle on my own. You’re going to help me, aren’t you? Especially since I already let you get off. You can’t possibly leave me like this--can you?” The man said slowly, still taking his time with his pants.
Naruto gulped down the sudden lump in his throat as he watched Sasuke pull his swelling cock out, the tip dripping with pre-cum and leaking onto his black boxers as it was pumped slowly. A thumb swept quickly over the head to wipe away the salty liquid, using it as a sort of precautionary lube in case plain saliva didn’t work. A low moan came from Sasuke as he stroked himself.
“Well, Naruto...are you going to help me?”
The blonde couldn’t take his eyes off of Sasuke’s hand as it moved up and down, slicking up the hard flesh that he would love more than anything to be gliding in a out of him, slapping against him in a heated manner. The thoughts made his dick start to harder again."
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As Quagmire, (from Family Guy series) would say, this chapter is "Hotty-ty Hot Hot Hot!!" God you're the expert when it comes to write hot, passionate, rough sex scenes, and you still manage to write this hot chapter while keeping both Time-skip version Sasuke and Naruto in character. I'm so jealous of you.
On question whether this story should have an happy or sad ending, I hope that this one has a happy ending for both Naruto and Sasuke, and their children.
BTW, you get 10/10 for the chapter,
Author's Response: Oh, you make me so embarrassed with all that praise! But I try, so it really makes me smile to know that you enjoy it. It's really hard to keep them in character...and it doesn't always work. I'm STILL not satisfied, but it's kinda hard not to make Naruto a little too girlie, especially when he's pregnant XD So yes, it's a struggle, but I'm glad it was satisfactory for you :] I'll try to make a happy ending, and so far it's working out, but the end is being so difficult and strained that I don't think I'll be able to make it without some sort of angst...but hey, I'll keep it to a minimum -sweatdrop- Thanks so much! I really appreciate it :3
Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 - 10:24 am · For: Friction
Oy. Perverted as always. But u know that we like it so, never mind XD. If u want some SauNaru you should have asked me. You know i just terrified my friend when i showed him my Yaoi Doujinshi maps.( more than 3 gigabytes) . Oh. And i hate school too. Gambatte with it. I want to "see" the little brats XD.
Author's Response: Mwuahahaha. Yesh, I love being perverted >:3 It's one of my strong suits. You're lucky, I have almost no access to any doujinshi D: I try and try my little heart out to find sites with downloads, but I can never find any! Makes me mad, but I survive. -shrugs- It's not any worse than school at least. I think the only reason I bother to go anymore is 'cuz of my friends...what other reason is there? Well anyway, thanks for reviewing once more! X3
Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 - 06:18 pm · For: Pickles and Ice-cream
I send you my love!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: -bottles up love- Thank you! ^^ I'll have it up very soon! -love- ~lemon
Name: game_over316 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 - 03:08 pm · For: Pickles and Ice-cream
pleasepdate. I want the next chapter! hee hee. This chapter was good. What made you think it was bad? Well it is true what they say about wonderful authors, they never like their own work. Well update soon!
Author's Response: Heheh, the writing was bad? It was short? It was OOC? EVERYTHING! @.@ But as long as you liked it, I'm happy ^^ I'll update it soon! -hugs- Thank you! ~lemon
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 - 08:01 pm · For: Pickles and Ice-cream
AHH DONT DANGLE IT IN FRONT OF ME!
nice chapter! so sasuke is trying to live with naruto now?
Author's Response: Hm...I guess, if you wanna put it that way. But it could also been seen as him 'taking care of his merchandise' ^^ And...-dangles anyway and laughs hysterically- xD -love- ~lemon
Name: IDK (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 - 12:30 am · For: A Part of You
1) i think Naruto's name is spelled 'Uzumaki' not 'Uzamaki'...but im not that sure anymore...
2) is Kyuubi EVER going to speak in this??
3) WOW!! sasuke's over protective/possessive as always huh??? lol
Author's Response: Aha, sorry, small typo I guess. I sometimes forget to look over the chapters because I'm too dang excited to get them out there ^^;;; I'm sure Kyuubi will talk soon...or has he already? I don't remember...@.@ But, I enjoy your enthusiasm! Thanks for the review! ~lemon
Name: IDK (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 - 11:44 pm · For: Shatter
why are all the people who have rivals turn gay???
anyway, i keep on forgetting to review, sorry!!!
who ever the uke in gaara's and lee's relationship should do the baby thingy too...
is it just me or is everyone turning gay in the village of leaf????
at this point, there WILL be no future generation for the poor village, lol.
thank ya for the great story!!
Author's Response: Ah, you're right! -laughs- Everyone is gay, aren't they? Well, I'll have some Het couples in here soon, so don't worry ^^ And as long as you're enjoying the story, I don't mind if you forget to review once in a while. You reviewed once, so that makes me extremely happy! So, thank you! And I'll take that into consideration...but Gaara and a baby? -laughs again- I can't see it! I think he'd go crazy! But anyway, thank so much for reviewing! -love- ~lemon