Reviews For Kyuuketsuki
Name: Mecheela (Signed) · Date: 08/11/11 - 08:46 am · For: Who I Am
I love this story really much! It's one of the only fics when Naruto is in, that I actually L O V E! :D I love the plot and how the characters are and AOOW! I just love everything'! You do a great job and I really hope that the next chap will be up! :D
Name: kiki (Anonymous) · Date: 02/09/11 - 11:12 pm · For: Who I Am
No dont quit on this story I just got really hooked:/
Name: Rahvin (Signed) · Date: 28/10/09 - 07:45 am · For: Who I Am
Write more soon! pretty please with cherries on top :)
Name: scarlett_fire (Signed) · Date: 18/08/08 - 04:22 pm · For: Who I Am
^^ YAY!!! This is sooo good!!
cant wait for the next chapter!
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 08/08/08 - 01:07 pm · For: Who I Am
Oh goodness... Sasuke is SCREWED! I loved the chapter though, great job ^_^
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 01/08/08 - 09:34 am · For: Who I Am
haha =] i love this. update more.
Name: emz_rose (Anonymous) · Date: 13/07/08 - 03:50 pm · For: Who I Am
woozers. Exciting stuff, my only negative is; where will the KakaIru come in? But I'm loving the descriptiveness and the whole plot in general. The part with Gai was funny! Hoping for an update >.
Author's Response: Well, when I first put this story up, there were a lot of pairings on the list, so I chose all that I mention, but now that has changed and KakaIru's the only one who made the cut, LOL. I was thinking of removing that as I don't concentrate on that pairing much... but now I suddenly got an idea for a KakaIru scene... I CAN'T REMOVE IT NOW! oh noez! XD But you're a KakaIru fan? Then I'll definitely mention them more, from now on. (Or I'll try not to forget them xD Because the next few chapters ... ¬.¬ ) thanks for the comment! ^.^
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 - 01:08 pm · For: Who I Am
XD
heh, you picture Sakura with puppy-dog eyes, and then Sakura riding a motercycle.. that's a mind boggler. :]
But I love how you linked Sasuke into it all, and using him as Sakuras secret weapon to try and get Naruto back.
And the way that everybody is dissapointed that Naruto went back, because although this is AU, it still links back to the way that Naruto gives almost everybody he meets that small glimmer of hope that they all need. :P
Hehe.
And it's kind of a twist how in the actual series Naruto tries to get Sasuke to come home and now it's the other way round..
And Sasori is part of the Akatsuki, which means that Sasuke might end up meeting Itachi again..
*gasp* OH MY GOSH.
Ima stop writing now else i'll never stop! Lol :]
Please update soon to stop my head from exploding with numerous scenarios? XD
Great story! Keep it up!XOXOX
Author's Response: oh. my. gad. lol. You really payed attention xD I'm incredibly flattered *fans 'self* Sasuke will DEFINITELY end up meeting his brother again... Actually, he plans to ;D And well, while at first Sasuke goes with the intention of getting Naruto out of there... once he sees the blond, he gets a little distracted ¬.¬ And did you notice that Naruto went to a party ;D Teehe, after-effects, anyone? XD *throws out hints here and there to pay back for the awesome comment xD* Great comment! Keep it up! lol. love ya 8D
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 - 04:42 am · For: Ragged And Broken
I had a feeling Kiba was going to die, as I said before in a review..
but,
he didn't die! It was close, though. :D
Well, this was exciting. I love this fanfic. I would say it's my favorite on TONFA, no doubt.
Author's Response: AAHFJAHJFGA *blushes* you flatter me enough to go braindead x___x that's dangerous! xD I can't write when I'm braindead, LOL. thankfully the next chapter's finished xD just needs to be beta-ed. Well, at first, Kiba WAS going to die. But then someone reviewed and hoped for Kiba to be okay, so I kind of did a little fanservice? xD Plus, I don't wanna kill him /snob. XD Oh dear, the braindeadness is truly a force not to be meddled with x___x
Name: scarlett_fire (Signed) · Date: 20/06/08 - 12:37 am · For: Ragged And Broken
AHHHHHHHH
omg!!! lame ending!!
please update PLEASE!
oh and by the way i love kiba in your story his character is so cute and lovable ^^
Author's Response: no like the ending? aw. D: the next chapter is now at the hands of my beta. ^^ she has beta-ed my rpff, but never SasuNaru, lol. So, I hope she'll have no trouble handling this. Kiba is one of the most loveable characters in the manga/anime, no? <3 Thanks for the comment ^.^
Name: Idomu (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 - 02:50 pm · For: Ragged And Broken
I love this story its so good. You're an amazing writer. keep it going ^_^
Author's Response: Thank youuu! I shall ^^ My plan is to finish it before the summer ends ;D
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 - 07:57 pm · For: Ragged And Broken
I liked it, not as good as you can do, but hey, I'm sure you are *just tired* ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you! *kisses and hugs* yeah, that's why i hated this chapter, bcause i know i can do better ¬___¬ let's hope the next one comes soon XD
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 - 01:45 pm · For: Ragged And Broken
:0
UH OH
S'like romeo and julliet.
kind of..
XD
It's awesome so far!
I hope you update soon, looking forward to the next chapter. :]
(Y)
Author's Response: Romeo and Juliet XD Is Naruchan Juliet then? XDDDDD Thanks so much! ^^ I'll see if I can update ASAP xD
Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 18/06/08 - 11:27 am · For: Ragged And Broken
OMG. Now i can't think anyting else, just a fight between Naruto and Sasuke. Seeing their eyes in shock as they realise who is the opponent. OMG. More, more, more. And Kakashi didn't telling anything to Sasuke. I a an Itachi fan, but a bigger SasuNaru fan. And wow, Gaara and Tamari in shock that Naruto is coming back. Wow. That was a really good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, I was really worried this was going to be a disappointment. I'm glad it wasn't ^^
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 08/06/08 - 03:28 am · For: Caress Me Down
Oo, Sasuke gots owned :0
And yet you still manage to keep them in character :0 Awesome ^^
And I like how you put in the twist where Sasuke's trying to avoid Naruto for his own good,
it makes the story unpredictable and more exciting ^^
And how you keep mentioning Sasuke's 'plan' without telling us.
Evil, but genious. Lol ^^
And Kiba?! So, he knew he might die?
Hence the tearful goodbye...
WOW
Update soon, pls! ^^
(Y) Peace out! =]
Author's Response: Kyuubi PWNED Sasuke XD I did? I managed? THANK GOD! An author's worst nightmare is if her characters are OOC.. unless she planned it that way ;D Sasuke's plan is really quite predictable, if you know what he's character is like ¬_¬. Evil, >:D. Kiba knew, yes. You'll find out what happened in the next chapter... which is currently being written. I'm not sure when it will be out though. Let's hope, soon ^^
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 - 03:22 pm · For: Caress Me Down
i love this story. pure awesomeness. im SO favouriting it.
Author's Response: :D!!! Uwaaa, thanks a bunch ^^ <333
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 - 07:33 am · For: A Quick Prologue
SasuNaruSasu is great. I agree with atenademon. Even though there were some sexy moments in previous chapters, this one does it with a much more intensive flair. I think I forgot to mention that I did love this new style as well n_n
lol @ KyuuSasu. That would be an interesting pair for another story...where sasuke is only in love in naruto's alternate ego xD
Author's Response: Oh, once again I'm relieved you're not put off by the new style! *relaxes XD* KyuuSasu... hey, that'd be an awesome angsty story, where Naruchan is really getting hurt >:D *teehe, sadist* =______=
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 - 04:14 am · For: Caress Me Down
Ahh, I thought this story had been abandoned.
I'm so glad it hasn't beeeeen! :DD
Can't wait for some more. (:
Author's Response: YAY! I'm so glad to see that my dear readers still want to read more ^^ Naw, I'm a lover not an abandoner XDDDD Love ya! ;D *huggles*
Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 - 02:23 am · For: Caress Me Down
OMG. That was just too perfect. I love it. I love Kyuubi and naruto with Sasuke. And poor Kiba. I hope he will be all right.
Author's Response: Uwaa, I love YOU for giving me such a nice review! Ah. Kiba. *cough* ...*runsaway*...*popsbacktogiveonelasthugandthen... -poof-*
Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 07/06/08 - 01:32 am · For: Caress Me Down
*inhales, exhales* Do....you...know... how much I missed your writing? *bricks you many times* :O How could you do this to me? T_T I really thought that you left and forgot about the story, I was even thinking about putting a curse on your head *cough* :))
Buuuut... you're here with a brand new fantastic chapter! I've got to say, it really feels different from the other chapters, the others (for me) felt like....playful, sweet but this one....it seemed serious and... lustful o.O, that *cough* hot *cough* scene made it this way and I like this new style of writing ^^ It really gets your attention and makes you want more and oh boy... it got mine from long ago :D:D
I hope you'll update soon, don't ever leave the story in such a cliffy, think about me :D:D and write the chapter soon *sounds like a fan* :D:D why not... I'm reading it , faving it and reviewing it everytime so *cough* look at the Kyuuketsuki fan! *points at herself* :> :> :D
And oh yes!!! I love also SasuNaruSasu, I don't care who tops, I just want that beautiful lemonish stuff between them *loves that pairing* :D:D
Good job with this coming back, it compensates the fact that you left us in a break for six months :O :D:D I'm looking forward to read your new chapters!!! Ok? :D:D Gambatte! ^^ Do your best...again :D
Author's Response: Wow. XD Naw, I told everyone in my profile that I was gonna go on a hiatus D: If there's one thing certain, it's I never abandon a story ^^ I always finish it... even if the ending turns into crap, because I dont wanna write it LOL I'll still finish it. Curse? Oh, dear. XDD I'm so relieved you liked it. XDD Because the playful, sweet will slowly fade, now that Kiba is in the hospital and ... ahem. I did say that something will happen to Kiba, that will make Naruto do what he never wanted to do again. mwahahah >:D I'll try to update soon, but the thing is, I want each chapter to be about this length and I have two other stories that need updating D: But I don't think there's going to be another long hiatus, now that I'm back into SasuNaru ;D LOL, fan. Ah, I love you so much right now. I'll become your fan! I'll r&r some of your works, they sound interesting ^^ beautiful lemonish stuff, indeed. lol. MY COMEBACK WAS SUCCESFUL ! =___=; , I feel like one of those 80s popstars, trying to make themselves loveable again. XDDD I'll always do my best. *winkwinknudgenudge*
Name: electrictoaster (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 - 07:28 pm · For: A Quick Prologue
Yay! I'm so so so glad you're back!!!!!!!!!!!
I've missed your writing.
Author's Response: Uwaaa, <3333 I've missed YOU XD
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 - 07:26 pm · For: Caress Me Down
Wow that was NICE! I liked it a lot and I'm glad you're back ^_^
Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! And I'm glad I'm back too! XD How could I ever think of living without Naruchan D:
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 - 04:10 pm · For: Caress Me Down
lol who would wish you gone? I can't quite put my finger on it, but this chapter is definitely different from the others.
It's still great though! Poor Sasuke is practically raped and then Naruto runs away xD. His erectile disfunction was really cute of course...It seems unrealistic that he got them to go away so easily...but I'm just judging from other fics...since I don't have a dick I wouldn't know.
Maybe the biggest difference is that in previous chapters it had a sasunaru vibe, but this one is clearly narusasu.
Author's Response: Ah, so the difference isn't as unnoticable, as I thought it would be ¬_¬rnHah, yes. It IS unrealistic. But the thing is. He's an Uchiha. And Uchihas can't have erections in the middle of school, that's a big no-no XD So, I had to give him some kind of mentalpower. LOLrnHah. You see. The thing with the narusasu vibe. I'm actually a fan of... SasuNaruSasu. O____O I like animalistic Naruchan D: XD But in this story, Naruto's the uke alright. I think this chapter wasnt NaruSasu... it was... >:D KyuuSasu XDDDDDDDD Since it was Kyuubi who did all the hard work, honestly the poor thing never gets any credit. lol. Anyway. THANKS FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT ;D Love ya ^^
Name: darkxratha (Signed) · Date: 06/06/08 - 04:05 pm · For: Caress Me Down
Omfg. I've been waiting forever for this! Thank Kami you finally put it up! Gosh! >.< Now I know I'll have to wait for another 'forever' to read the next chapter! Maybe you'll take pty on me and write in in half of forever?
Author's Response: LOL, I don't think there will be another forever XDD The thing is, I got sick of Naruto for a while. And I started writing a realpersonfanfiction, which is doing great ^^ But then I happened to watch an old Narutoepisode on Jetix and boom, I am once again crazy over SasuNaru XD
Name: MishaTenko (Signed) · Date: 01/04/08 - 03:43 pm · For: Reset My Memory
Ah, man i cant wait see know what happens next. Your stories realy good. I give you a rating of 10
Author's Response: Weeee! Thank you! *sends you kisses and hugs you to near death* <33333