Reviews For Kyuuketsuki
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 - 03:36 am · For: To See You
omg I loved that ending. If you hadn't already said there wasn't any lemons, I'd say you're cruel haha. Poor Naru-chan xD.
Author's Response: XD LOL No worries, the kissing and groping will start soon, rofl
Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 - 01:45 am · For: To See You
Oh NO, hell NO! NOT disappointed at all, that was an awesome chapter, I liked and loved everything at it. This 'small' encounter between them really had been *cough* interesting... I'm looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up with the reeeally greeeat work! *hugs*
Author's Response: Waaaa.. I'm blushing again. xD Thank you so much! Yes, it was interesting wasn't it. lol. *hugs back*
Name: animeangelspet (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 - 10:00 pm · For: To See You
Oooohhhh someone sooooo wants Naru-chan!!!! Nice chappie I liked this one too! It was funny how Naruto just stood there...I woulda probably done the same thing honestly. Hmm wonder what Naruto will do now >:) Lol good luck on your next chappie!
Author's Response: XD Naru-chan will run to Sakura of course LOL And then they'll girltalk and chat and paint each other's nails... err.. wait a sec. That's not right XD Nevermind that. The next chapter however is in Sasuke's POV And we'll find out HIS THOUGHTS about the half-naked Naru-chan XD
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 - 09:51 pm · For: To See You
Eek. I love this story already. 'Kay, maybe not love... But it's amazing. It's interesting, and I can't wait to read some more!
Update as soon as you get a chance. [:
Author's Response: Why don't you love it? O_O Just kidding XD Thank you so much for reviewing. EVery review makes me want to write more ;D
Name: Tara (Anonymous) · Date: 02/12/07 - 01:19 pm · For: Tired Of Waiting
Gah! I keep on checking in to see if the next chapter is in.
I can't wait for it!
Haha.
:]
Author's Response: I'm having a little trouble with finding the time to finish it, but I'm doing my best! xD
Name: Otahri (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 - 05:32 am · For: A Quick Prologue
I would say…a rather long prologue, but hey, I am not complaining! I must say that this is extremely interesting although it is, again, using the theme of being involved in gangs. I do not know, but when I first clicked into your fic here, I was rather sceptical about it. I remember thinking, “Oh dear…not another one of these gang-kind of fic?”, but I was not disappointed at all. It could have been your style of writing. I am not sure, really, but there is something here that attracts me. I cannot say that it excites; of course, there is the mystery as to what is the relationship between Naruto and Gaara, and Kabuto and stuffs like that, but it was not that kind of thing that captured my attention. Perhaps it was your cynical way of putting the dialogues – I especially liked the interaction between your characters. Instead of talking, they sounded, to me, like they were shooting pistols at each other. Especially Neji and Naruto’s:
‘You are supposed to be on my side!’
‘I never said I was.’
‘Bastard.’
‘Oh, so now I am a bastard as well?’
Geez…can’t be helped at all. But I guess that is what got me. And perhaps…another thing that got to me was…your fic was not mushy. And I salute that. Keep it up; it would be fun to see how long can this baby of yours keep me entertained.
*grins* Forgive the language. What I actually meant was, do keep up the good work. Good luck!
Author's Response: Now you've got me all nervous XD rnrnWell I knew that putting up a gang-fic was kind of dangerous since it wasn't original or anything. And the relationship between Naruto and Gaara, and Kabuto 'and stuff like that' is mentioned here, yes. But they will have little importance in this story. rnrnAnd about the mushy stuff well... I'll do my best to keep the mushy and sappy stuff out of this fice since they don't go with SasuNaru quite well. The romance will be based on lust mostly and subtle loving if you know what I mean XD So... But really you know how to make me nervous... I'm afraid to put the next chapter up LOL. But no worries! It will be here soon ;D
Name: animeangelspet (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 - 10:23 pm · For: Tired Of Waiting
Oooo I loved this chapter!! I actually liked this one more than the first! And maybe theres gonna be some sasunaru soon huh *hint hint* Lol anyway update soon!
Author's Response: You did? Awe, I'm blushing XD And you're right about the SasuNaru it's coming sooooon. (And yes I said it not they ROFL)
Name: Desperado Sweetie (Anonymous) · Date: 01/12/07 - 10:12 pm · For: Tired Of Waiting
I like Sasuke's pov. It was nice to see what was going on inbetween the gaps of Naruto's pov.
Does Naruto stay with Iruka in this story and if so, does Kakashi know that? Oh well, I will just have to wait and find out.
I look forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Arigatou! Honto ni arigatou! Well... about the Iruka thing... XD I hate giving spoilers, but no. Naru-chan doesn't live with him. Buuuut he is very close to the man ;D
Name: Dragon (Anonymous) · Date: 01/12/07 - 08:52 pm · For: Tired Of Waiting
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! Half of the next chapter is done and here's a little teaser: Sasuke gets to see Naruto a little more uncovered than the blonde would like XD
Name: Tara (Anonymous) · Date: 01/12/07 - 05:32 pm · For: A Quick Prologue
Hahaha. When it said a quick prolouge I was thinking like...four paragraphs or something.
Hahahha.
Way good though. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: XD Naw, I like long prolouges Lol. Thank you for reviewing! The next chapter is currently being put together XD
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 - 05:25 pm · For: Tired Of Waiting
Ahh. I love this story! :DD
Very well written.
Good job! Haha. [: Can't wait to read some moreee.
Author's Response: A big thank you! Lots of love from me to you! XD
Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 - 02:23 pm · For: A Quick Prologue
Good chapter, it explained some things and you really got my attention. I want to see what will happen next. Update soon please, and gah! Curses, you mentioned that you'll update slowly. Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Waaa, thank you! :) I'll do my best in updating XD The next chapter is in the works, but I'm too tired to finish it tonight. Gomen, gomen. x)
Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 - 11:46 am · For: A Quick Prologue
Wow, this is a very good story I, sincerely liked it very much, and also I hope that you'll update soon.
Author's Response: I'm finishing the next chapter as we speak . :) but I gotta warn you. It might not be as good as you hope. Filler, nooooooooooo! XD
Name: animeangelspet (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 - 10:26 am · For: A Quick Prologue
Wow I love how you started out this story and I especially love the picture you showed in the summery :) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thank you! and i love that picture too! it belongs to a user on deviantart: Sekra. Check her out, I love her work x)
Name: Desperado Sweetie (Anonymous) · Date: 30/11/07 - 09:42 pm · For: A Quick Prologue
Oh this is so exciting for being just the first chapter.
I am looking forward to learning more about Naruto's and Kabuto's relationship was in the past. And was Naruto the leader of the Kyuuketsuki or is Gaara?
So much to look forward to. Really good story.
Author's Response: Well... don't want to say any spoilers but... no Naru-chan wasn't the leader XD... thank you for reviewing! I'll have the next chapter up very soon, today hopefully ;D
Name: evildarklore (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 - 09:29 pm · For: A Quick Prologue
omg! i love it! keep it going onegai!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much! i sure will! x)