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Reviews For Kyuuketsuki

Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 12:38 pm · For: In A Perfect World
woah! major cliffy! i wonder why they all are so shocked to see kiba! i want to know so bad! but i guess i'll have to wait like the rest...*sigh*.....i love this story! i can't to find out more of kyuubi! it has a certain style of writing that i just love! and you have them kept in character but they have their own separate personalities as well! it is one of my favorite high school fics! and what about this gang naruto was in? it seems to be building up to a very worth while of waiting climax! (that sentence seems weird to me... hope you understand it) but i can't wait to read more and hope that you update soon! laters! ~lemon

Author's Response: Oh about Kiba *evil grin* the next chaPter doesn't have Kiba in it. *shocked gasps* Indeed... next chapter you will find out... about ... what happened... the day Naru-chan was absent *mwahahaha*


Name: electrictoaster (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 12:23 pm · For: In A Perfect World
^-^
Yay. Updateness.
That reminds me, I need to update my story...

:]
I'll be looking forward to the next installment!

--Tara

Author's Response: Yay. Reviewness!!! XD YOU REALLY ARE LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER? what is wrong with you? XD LOL joking ,joking. I'm looking forward to it as well ... and i'm writing it XD


Name: Ljiljana (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 11:46 am · For: In A Perfect World
Um, are we going to see some more fighting soon? And why is Naruto calling himself a monster?
I love your Sakura!

Author's Response: Uh... I think that there will be about four chapters before the fighting starts. And well... Naruto .. teeehee... I'm not telling! LOL Yes, I make my Sakura's either really cool and supportive of Naruto .. or I bash them >:D


Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 23/12/07 - 11:39 am · For: A Quick Prologue
hehe teenage writers i dont have to deal with, teenage artists i had a lot of before i went to college ^_^ a family friend i know is constantly sketching, heh she is always on this account too! but with permission XD maybe she wil come review this too (if she can put down her tablet!) teehee just felt like rereading and reviewing ^__^ *had to much free time*

Author's Response: XD *slightly baffled* u... reread? O____O like... whoa! XD


Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 10:39 am · For: In A Perfect World
Oh my...Naruto got sunburned? Poor soul, I hate sunburns -shivers- Great chapter, can't wait to see what this whole Kiba things about ^_^ Oh and thanks for the wonderful, glorious thoughts of a certain -cough- Uchiha -giggles- Niiiiiice.

Author's Response: XD sunburns are awful aren't they? i get a sunburn when i'm more than an hour in the sun during the summer LOL i'm always pale I HATE THE SUN! *readers push her into the sun* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'M MELTING! I'M MELTING! ... I'M BURNING! AAAGH!rnerr... I'm weird today, I apologize X___X


Name: animeangelspet (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 09:19 am · For: In A Perfect World
I would have to agree with if it was a perfect world there would be no homework :D I loved this chapter especially the part where he got sunburned >:) Ooo and Kiba's here!!! Yay!!!

Author's Response: It's weird that we love Naruto yet love it that he got sunburnt LOL. That's just.. WOW. XD Yes! YES! Finally someone who is happy that Kiba's here XD Kiba's dogtastic ISN'T HE!? XD


Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 23/12/07 - 08:56 am · For: A Quick Prologue
LOOOOL !!! Naurto is sunburnt !!!! xD
Tat's great !!! Couldn't stop laughing when I read this !!!! XD Bwah ah ah ah ! Gomen ne Naru-chan but you're such a fool !!!!

Thanks for updating so quickly !!!! That's really great ! You know we can't wait too long to read your story , us , poor hooked readers !!! xD
Keep it on this wonderful job !!! See you soon ( I hope ! ) !!! *hugs*
( And ... the mystery person is .. KIBA ?! Why ?! What's going to happen ?! xD Ne ne ne ?! arf ... Now I have to wait you next update to find out .... )
* sending mental waves to encourage you to write * >__<

Author's Response: XD I know, he's such a dunce LOL I laughed too when that thought hit me XD Don't worry you'll see me soon XD I MEAN I'LL UPDATE SOON .. Maybe tomorrow? Oh wait.. I just found out that tomorrow's cristmas and I haven't finished the scarf I'm knitting for my mother.. *sigh* So maybe not tomorrow. But the 25th is a quiet day with nothing to do... so let's look forward to the 25th! >:DrnKiba has a MAJOR importance in this story. ;D You'll find out soon...SOOON.rnThank you for the mental waves. SHOCKINGLY THEY HELPED! *hugs and kisses and gropes..* (erase that last one >___<)


Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 23/12/07 - 07:29 am · For: In A Perfect World
I hate my Bio class, but we got to disect a strawberry instead of a frog. I cant wait till the next one ^_^

Author's Response: strawberry XO WAH I'M AFRAID OF STRAWBERRIES! I once had a nightmare where I was about to eat a strawberry and then it suddenly grew bigger until it was the size of my head. I got scared and started running around, screaming for mommy, while that god awful spawn of satan floated behind me yelling: "let's see how you like to be eaten!"rnrn...o_O err.. XD ANYWAY! Thank you for ... giving me a chance to slip away from writing LOL. I guess I'll have to .. go back to my Wordpad. *sigh* The troubles of being a teenage writer XD


Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 04:26 am · For: Not Like You
you're totally dangling a bag of crack over the head of an addict in withdrawal.

Is ItaSasu going to be an important pairing? Disturbing as it is, I'll admit that uchincest is really hot xD

Author's Response: XD Not really important LOL But it did have an impact on Sasuke... that has a slight importance in this story LOL. And yeees, uchihacest is actually one of my fave pairings LOL. It is SCORCHING HOT XD The next chapter is in the works and should be ready in about an... hour? Maybe less ;D


Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 - 06:38 pm · For: Not Like You
Ominous...I like it ^_^ Great chapter!

Author's Response: Ominous? I HIT THE JACKPOT! rofl. THANK U! *sends virtual pics of a wet sasuke WITHOUT the swimtrunks* XD


Name: electrictoaster (Anonymous) · Date: 22/12/07 - 05:57 pm · For: Not Like You
Yay!
You're back!
:]
I

Author's Response: x_X *needs to recover from being so happy* LOL You like me... you REALLY like me XD ... I'm quoting movies again.. gAH need to write my own stuff now LOL ... hmmm... next chappie has naruchan... sakurachan... teehee AND A MYSTERY PERSON lol


Name: Dragon (Anonymous) · Date: 22/12/07 - 04:05 pm · For: Not Like You
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: WAH! *blushes* I will ;D


Name: narubaby (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 - 03:17 pm · For: Not Like You
omg gettign really good update

Author's Response: omg thank you and i will XD


Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 22/12/07 - 02:15 pm · For: A Quick Prologue
Kyaaaaah !!! I love your fic !!! Really !!!! And ... Just this morning I was thinking about it and wondering when you would update !
My ! I must have special powers !!! xD

Thanks for sharing such a great story with us !!! xD
Can't wait to see what will happen next ... ( Don't de too dark pleaaase !!! XD )

I LOVED the flirt between our two bishounen ! So cuuute !!! *Q*

Anyway , this site is driving me crazy ! I'm hooked to all your marvelous fics and I have to check 2 or 3 times a day to see if there are any updates ! xD
Poor me ...

Thanks again !! Keep it on !!!!!

Author's Response: Yes! I felt something probing inside my mind, giving me a push towards the laptop! now i know it was u! XD THANK YOU, much love from me to you ;D


Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 22/12/07 - 01:36 pm · For: Not Like You
hehehe i love it! itachi is so mean... well i cant wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank u, neither can i! XD


Name: animeangelspet (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 - 12:59 pm · For: Not Like You
Awww poor Sasu-chan!!! Itachi is so mean ;-; Awww well we all know who will make it all better!!!

Author's Response: SHHHH! Not everyone is as smart as we are! LOL XD


Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 - 12:07 pm · For: Not Like You
Finally! Do you know how much I waited for this chapter? *crosses her arms and pouts* And I'm so sad that it was short *sniff sniff* but great in the same time. You really got my attention, heheh. Very interesting chapter, I'm very curious what will this threat consist in. Update soon or I'll find you and force you to continue it xD *kisses*

Author's Response: XD yeah. it's still short LOL SORRY! i'm gonna TRY to update tomorrow ;D bcause i have nothing to do tomorrow xd *hugs and kisses*


Name: Zuki (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 - 01:18 am · For: To See You
...Wow! I think you're amazing, and have the characters down just right.
My only complaint is that the chapters are so short. ^^

Author's Response: Wah, u flatter me :D about the shortnessness well... i'm working on that :) i'm planning on two more chapters that are this short and then i plan on fusing sasuke's and naruto's pov-s. so the chapters will be like... changing from one pov to the other. why am i doing this? bcause i figured it would be easier considering the Kyuuketsuki are about to get involved... and the story is about to get a bit darker. so... longer chapters will come soon ;D


Name: xXdarkpuppetvoOdOOXx (Anonymous) · Date: 06/12/07 - 06:31 pm · For: To See You
write more please itsis the bomb diggity.^-^

Author's Response: xD i WILL i promise ;D... im having a school crisis atm, so i'm not sure if i'll be able to update until .. maybe next saturday? but of course, ideas may struck me like lightning and then there will be no stopping me from writing more ! lol


Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 - 04:16 pm · For: To See You
haha that was funny! naruto really is a dunce! thank you for making such an enjoyable story! i really look forward to reading more of this fic! thanks again! ~lemon

Author's Response: you are thanking me? you are the dunce LOL i should bow down and kiss your feet for reviewing! and I would! if i knew u. LOL. anyway, naruto is a bit ..eh... slow and naive. and considering what i have planned for him... kukukuku


Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 04/12/07 - 01:05 pm · For: To See You
Yay a swimming pool! I was just at one, heh I am swimmer tooo, Update soon, I wanna see more of sasuke in swimming trunks!

Author's Response: XD more of sasuke in swimming trunks? hmm... now i gotta find away for that to happen LOL. ...i think i have an idea *grins* thank you for that!


Name: Tara (Anonymous) · Date: 04/12/07 - 12:03 pm · For: To See You
Hahaha.
I wasn't disappointed either.
Heh.

Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Wah, you're all too awesome XD I'm gonna start writing the next chapter right now! LOL I want to get more praises and compliments. *grins*


Name: Desperado Sweetie (Anonymous) · Date: 04/12/07 - 09:51 am · For: To See You
Haha...I love the flirting going on.

This is really good. I am so looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: Thank you, SasuNaru flirting is the best LOL


Name: Dragon (Anonymous) · Date: 04/12/07 - 06:36 am · For: To See You
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Author's Response: W00t! I'll do my best, *wink*


Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 - 06:35 am · For: To See You
Hahaha...Uchiha Sasuke is the worlds number one BASTARD!!!!! I love your writing style, it is entertaining without being pointless, great job!

Author's Response: That he is.. xD But let's hope he has a good reason for leaving our Naruto all horny like that. LOL Thank you! =)


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