Reviews For Kyuuketsuki
Name: darkxratha (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/08 - 05:04 pm · For: Whatever It Takes
this is fuckin a good story!! when kiba hugged him and told him that he love him..... around that part i almost crie TT-TT anyway please finish writing quickly!! i wanna know what happens or.... or... or.... or i'll kill peanut the dog!! and my rating is 10 if it were outta 1000 thats what my rating would be..... this story is way tooo good!
Author's Response: NOOOOOOO! PEANUT DOG! D: I'll get right on it! XD I am back in Naruto XD I got sick of it for a little while, got crazy with HPfandoms and can you believe it, I am writing a realpersonfanfiction of the wonderful DBSK/Tohoshinki!?!?! XDDD Yeah. That's what I've been up to for the past 6 months -___- So sorry, for leaving you hanging like that D: I'll try to make up for it ^^
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 03/03/08 - 09:32 pm · For: Whatever It Takes
Not bad.....not bad at all. I hope that Sasuke dosen't do anything bad for himself. But, this is good. hope you update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! D: Ah, yes. I'll do my best to get back in the fic XDD I kind of remember the storyline and what I had planned for the guys. But all the exact scenes, I have forgotten, so. Need to think... hard XD But the next chapter should be coming soon. (And I'm not lying this time XD)
Name: Kiriyo (Anonymous) · Date: 09/02/08 - 11:06 am · For: A Quick Prologue
I REALLY like your fic! and I'm REALLY desperate to know what happens next! so please update when you can!
P.S. Will we see any gang fights in the future? *hopefully*
Name: Amaya Hikari (Anonymous) · Date: 06/02/08 - 01:03 pm · For: Whatever It Takes
lol I think I would too! And Naruto, you better do EVERYTHING you can to get Sasuke!
Awesome chapter! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE ASAP!!!!
Ja ne!
Amaya
Author's Response: OMG. I have been out of Naruchan for so looong D: Ah, I wonder if anyone wants to read the story XDD I'll try to update... today... tomorrow... this week. Agh, I can't believe I went on such a hiatus. Thanks for reviewing! Reviews are what made me come back ;D
Name: misa chan (Anonymous) · Date: 07/01/08 - 01:34 am · For: Whatever It Takes
what??? is that all?? u such an evil!!!
come on write more!!!
Author's Response: XD.. uh... school is taking up mah time. BUT . the next chapter is planned out. all i need to do is finish that last... delicious scene /drools... and thats it LOL
Name: electrictoaster (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 - 05:40 pm · For: Whatever It Takes
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Awesomeness
Author's Response: Weee! Thanks! I'm trying and failing to finish the next chapter LOL Sleepy -____-
Name: cookie (Anonymous) · Date: 30/12/07 - 10:28 pm · For: Whatever It Takes
hey there, i read your fic and it was so cool! i hope that you will update soon and wondering if you have an ff.net account and any fic there that i read... =) keep up the good work
Author's Response: Well... I do have a ff.net account. LOL. But I don't think you've read any of my stories there XD There's a crappy SasuOC (YES, HET) And an even more crappier ItaSasu oneshot.. and a short, pointless crack-legend I wrote for a friend as a christmas present... XD the stories that are there are low quality LOL... and well.. quite shittier than this one maybe XD But! I will put them here soon I think. Maybe when I finish that SasuOC lol. BUT. Thank you for reviewing! You are wonderful! And I won't give you any virtual cookies because... how can a cookie eat a cookie? xD okay, that was random. *slaps herself* THANK YOU!!!!! I will do my best to update soon ;D
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 - 07:32 pm · For: Whatever It Takes
Niiice...I got my answers w00t! I can't wait to see what Sasuke's plan is. Great job ^_^
Author's Response: Uwaaa... thank u! I have slight problems with the next chapter XD THE PRESSURE OF WRITING A GOOD SCENE ABOUT FRICTION AND GRINDING AND DELICIOUS ERECTIONS is.. having it's effects on my writing abilities...BUT I WILL DO EVERYTHING I CAN ;D
Name: animeangelspet (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 - 01:27 pm · For: Whatever It Takes
Wow things are certainly heating up!!! Wow there's GaaraxLee too!!! YAYAY lol. I think this is my favorite chapter...I love how you mentioned things but didn't put too much. Anyway I'll be waiting for the next chappie!!!
Author's Response: Yep, I think GaaraLee is just way too cute to not put in XD And you'll get a closer look on that pair later, I promise ;D THANK YOU FOR THE R&R. love u for that :)
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 - 09:13 am · For: Whatever It Takes
KYAAAA!!! yay! another update! i just love how you update so fast! it makes me all warm and fuzzy inside when I see that you have updated! and yay! longer chapters! this story really has me on the edge of my seat now! what is this kyuubi they keep talking about!? and i loved kiba's and naruto's little reunion! most of the parts had me giggling like mad! ^-^ and wats gonna happen to kiba-kun?! guess i'll have to keep reading! and i can't wait to see more of the sasunaru in this fic *snickers* just you wait sasu-chan! naru-chan will get you! *enter evil laugh* and sasuke will definitely save you kakashi! dont worry! like lee always says the power of youth will prevail! *salutes* and i positively cant wait to read another chapter! i give you my full support! jaa ne for now! ~lemon
Author's Response: Uwa! Your support is needed! XD I need all the support I can get to make the next 'incident' as hot as possible LOL. Don't want some boring, mushy crap. hell no! WE CARE ABOUT THE SMUT. THE SMUT, PEOPLE. Or as it is called in this site: WE CARE ABOUT THE LEMON! XD Oh and... Kiba... teeeheeeee. Like I said. He's MAJORLY important. Youth will prevail! .. In the end XD
Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 - 04:46 am · For: Whatever It Takes
Awesome chapter! Finally something longer, when I saw the story at most recent my mind went like "God please don't let it be short!" and surprisingly it wasn't, yay! But still... the more the better, so I don't mind if you'll write a longer than this xD.
I wuv reading, it it's more, it satisfies me xD(that doesn't sound too good, oh well... my mind goes perverted again
Oh em gee! We must prepare ourselves for the attack of our oh-so-little Naru-chan! Molest him Naruto, don't let that sexy boy slip out of your hands, I look forward for your erections, erm... I mean actions! xD
Aww and Sasuske reconsiders the option which Itachi left, just for the sake of kakashi, it's good to see that he is not trhat selfish and that he cares about the other people's lives!
Oh, ok, so I won't ask you what are you planning to do with Kiba, even if it was pretty obvious that he is in trouble or something bad will happen to him, but I will stay silent and wait for the next chapters to confirm the truth xD And again, awesome chapter!
I hate my computer, it sucks and doesn't let me finsih with reviews when I write them T_T
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! And yes... erections coming in the next chapter. I'm not going to say Erections, Coming soon. Because that would be such an obvious pun. XD BUT. Yes, I felt that since Kakashi is Sasu's step-father and all, he must have some feelings for the man. And well... I needed someone for Itachi to threathen so XD YES ,Kiba is in trouble ... mwahahaha. But I'll tell you this. No one can guess how simple the answer might be XD To what will happen to Kiba of course xD BUT, The Misfortunes Of Kiba shall be in .. let's see ... *muses* chapter 9 or 10 I'm sure :) And that will be the main event that will lure Naruto into doing what he never wanted to do again. MWAHAHAHA. XD
Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 26/12/07 - 04:42 am · For: Whatever It Takes
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaah !!! I love your story more every time I read a new chapter ! And I love your fast updates !!! xD
And in the end , I love you for writing such a good story and shring it with us *bow in frotn of you and then hug you as strong as I can*
I can't wait to see what will happen next !! >___< ( to be honnest , can't wait to see what will happen between Naru & Sasu !! XD )
Oh ! And the chat between Kiba & Naruto was just GREAT !!!! >_____<
Keep it on !!!!! *kisses*
( I'm still sending you my mental waves !! xD )
Author's Response: YOUR MENTAL WAVES ARE WORKING! XD I'm working on the next chapter now LOL. Thank you so much! I honestly didn't think people would like this story so much LOL. Considering I have a lousy vocabulary and I have a tendency to repeat the simple words like: He grinned and he laughed and then he smiled and then he blahblahblah XD And well.,. just... I worship you for worshipping me! LOL Not that I think I'm that great or anything... maybe I am. OKAY I'M STOPPING NOW. XD Just. THANK YOU! lol
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 - 12:10 am · For: Whatever It Takes
I have the feeling Kiba is going to die. :l Lmao.
Ekkk, I love this. LOVEEE IT! :D And I can't wait for some more Anddd, yeah. That's about it. :D!!
I like the longer chapters, it makes me all happy. :D
Author's Response: ...I'm going to ignore the part about Kiba dying. I don't want to tell any spoilers XD YES NO MORE SHORT CHAPTERS. *crowd cheers* LOL thank you!!! me like u even more now =D
Name: emmz (Anonymous) · Date: 25/12/07 - 09:54 pm · For: Whatever It Takes
whoop! Go Kiba!!! And wtf is the emo Sasuke gonna do this time... poor Kakashi! Waiting for that next update and congrats on a wonderful chapter that made me laugh.
Author's Response: waaa.. it made you laugh! GREAT. I had fun writing the conversation between Kiba and naru-chan XD And I never got out of ideas of what they should talk about so that made this chapter easy to write. THANK YOU (I WUV U)
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 25/12/07 - 06:29 pm · For: Whatever It Takes
*woot* naru-chan's going to take action at last xD
can't wait for your next chappie!
Author's Response: Yes! It's time for Naru-chan to take erections -... err... I mean >___< oh damnit. I'm too bubbly to respond to a review without saying something dirty. THANK YOU AND KEEP MAKING ME HAPPY XD
Name: Ally_Monrue (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 - 08:04 pm · For: In A Perfect World
Naruto used to be a man-whore, didn't he?
Author's Response: WRONG! Where the hell did you get that idea? XD NO, Naru-chan was not a man-whore >__<
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 11:17 pm · For: Reset My Memory
Ooooh, and the plot thickens! I really can't wait for the next chapter!! Update as soon as you get the chance.
Author's Response: I'll update ASAP I promise ;D First I need to convince my mother I have been good this year, so she would give me my damn present!!! >XO
Name: animeangelspet (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 10:46 pm · For: Reset My Memory
Another awesome chapter!!! Aww Sasu-chan was worried about Naru-chan!! Feel bad about the whole gang thing though. I can't wait until chapter where Kiba comes in some more!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, you all demand Kiba. XD His great entrance isn't over yet. It continues in the next chapter LOL. He'll have a little man-to-man chat with Naru and... well... let's just say. Sasuke will have a hard time staying away from the blonde XD I'M IN A SPOILING MOOD. MWAHAHAHAHA!
Name: Sakuranzu (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 08:39 pm · For: Reset My Memory
wow 3 updates in one day! *glomps*
And so the plot thickens...what does itachi know? :O
lol update soon *chyu~*
Author's Response: *kissu kissu!* I am great aren't I *smug grin* LOL. Itachi indeed. Nobody ever knows what he's up to >___< But in the next chapter.. his plan ... will be revealed.. a bit. XD
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 07:43 pm · For: Reset My Memory
Okay so I didn't find out anything about Kiba, but by God that was still very interesting! I liked this chapter a lot, it had inner struggle and depression which is always a good start to a very interesting situation. Can't wait for more ^_^
Author's Response: NEVER FEAR! Kiba will be in the next chapter ;D THANK YOU... I will update soon ^^
Name: electrictoaster (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 06:23 pm · For: Reset My Memory
You're so fast at updating!!!
But that, of course, is not a bad thing.
When the words come, they come like a river, I know how that is. :]
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: LOL. I'm actually slow at updating. Today is just one of those days XD Words coming like a river ;D Thank you and I will try to continue this fast updating :D
Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 06:12 pm · For: Reset My Memory
We are such insomniacs, lol, it's 4 A.M here too, in Romania and my bed calls me but I'm like "Hell with bed, I want to write and read" xD but I'm not tired, I think the tiredness loosen up at about 3:30 or so.
What a wonderful idea (I have a very sick mind too, I even scare myself sometimes) It's strange how the deficit of sleep increases the level of pervyness, I sound like a teacher here u_u, a perverted one xD.
So be it you'll be my Sasuke and I'll be your Naruto, *snickers* we shall rule the world of Kishimoto xD
Author's Response: OMG. YESH! FINALLY! I HAVE MY OWN NARUTO! *cuddles* OOoh. You're from Romania. Wow. That's where Dracula's from LOL. xD I'm tired tho. But I must not sleep!!! I need to finish the scarf. .. But I have about.. Oh I don't know only 1/2 of it done. >____< *HOLD ME!* xD
Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 05:58 pm · For: Reset My Memory
Oh no!! You just can't keep Sasuke away from Naruto T_T this will be the end of the world! Nooo! *faints*
I liked this chapter,it's very great, wow Sasuke being interrogated and *gasp* what if Itachi knows about him and Naruto?
I guess (from the reading) that the brotherly relationship between Sasuke and Itachi reached a really high level of intimateness, am I right?
Rereading the first I realize that it is funny, what Sasuke really thinks about Naruto. Locked himself in the school or drowning :)) Yeah, Sasuke has imagination after all xD heheh, Naruto is still red from the the sunburn xD cute!
Oh and regarding your answer from the previous review, I want to get tanned as Naruto so I would be able to get a Sasuke for myself *grins* I want a Sasuke, muhaha! And don't worry I'm very clingy myself, I piss of many people with my hugs xD
Anyway, please update soon, I want to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Do you actually think that Sasuke can resist our Naru-chan's charms? LOL 'Specially after that advice that Kiba will give Naruto. *grin* I just gave a tiny teeny spoiler for you. REJOICE. Ahem... A high level.. if by that you mean a drunk Itachi took advantage of the WONDERFUL YOUTH of one Sasuke, than you are right! And what a wonderful, brotherly love it must have been... err.. i mean what terrible, indecent behaviour XD HEY! I'll be you're Sasuke if you'll be my Naruto *suggestive grin* I CAN'T BELIEVE I'm using this site to hook up with people. I'm way too naughty.. XD Sorry, if I'm too weird XD It's 4am here in Estonia and I have a scarf to knit >____< I'm on the edge of breaking down. BUT NEVER FEAR, MY DEAR. I will survive! (And no, I'm not singing that song, LOL)
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 05:55 pm · For: Reset My Memory
omg! you update fast dont you! and it just makes me love you and your stories more! O.O what did itachi do to him! i think i have a pretty goos guess about it though....and wat about kiba! >.< i must know! its just so suspenseful and i need to know! but i am grateful that u put this chapter in! it cleared a lot of things up for me! and with me ya have to do that a lot..but i love this fic and i hope you continue with it soon! (and ya im on here a lot so you'll probable hear from me first...) loves it so! perfect ten as always! ~lemon
Author's Response: I'm melting because of you! XD My insides are all mushy and gooey Lol. KIBA Of course. HE ... that very important he... will be in the next chapter ;D NO WORRIES. It's schoolbreak. And I've got all the time I need .. to write the next chapter... which has a lot of Kiba in it.. XD
Name: atenademon (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 - 02:17 pm · For: In A Perfect World
Yay! *does the happy dance* you updated so early! Now I don't have to find you anymore xD
Anyway, great chapter! Hahah, Naruto got a sunburnt while daydreaming, kukuku, who knows who was he dreaming about, maybe about one certain raven?
Yeah, sunburnts are nasty and horrible! I'm like so white that everytime I go to the beach or pool I get red instantly and that sucks because I never get a tan that fits my likings *sob*
Really just really! I'm a Sakura hater but the way you made her in this chapter... made me not hate her so much. I hate Sakura's which are all over Sasuke always blabbering about how she'll make Sasuke hers blah blah.
Really, you just made her perfect here!
Oh noes, a cliffy! What will happen next, how does Kiba know them? And what part does Kiba takes in this story? I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter/s to find out. 5 stars as always xD
Author's Response: Heh. I don't want a tan, I like being pale like Sasuke so maybe I'll attract a Naruto of my own someday XD And Sakura.. well. I hate her in the anime, because all she thinks about is Sasuke >___< So I made her be more supportive of Naruto than usual. Of course in the manga, Sakura is slowly turning into a girl I might actually like LOL. But still, in the beginning I loathed her XD Ahh, yes. Kiba. A very important piece of a puzzle. LOL. Trying to sound intelligent here. Obviously not working X____X THANK U FOR THE REVIEW AND THE STARS. I have fallen in love with you XD *SMOTHERS U WITH KISSES* Warning: I'm clingy ROFL