Reviews For His Cursed Birthday
Name: wilkes (Anonymous) · Date: 29/11/07 - 03:57 pm · For: Intruder
next chapter PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Name: wilkes (Anonymous) · Date: 26/11/07 - 03:57 pm · For: Just a Dream
plzzzzzzzzz do chapter 5
Author's Response: yes, im half way through, sorry about the delay. my bro, the idiot took my usb with the chapter on it and left it at school, so i cant finished it this weekend.
Name: KakashixHatake (Anonymous) · Date: 26/11/07 - 07:48 am · For: Heirlooms & exposure
I love your story! its one of the best ones i have read on this site. keep writing
Its wierd cus i was wrighting a storie before i read yours and naruto recieves the fourth's kunai also
Author's Response: thanks. that means alot. wow, very weird but cool eh?
Name: Hinagirl326 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 - 04:15 pm · For: Heirlooms & exposure
oh.My.GOD!!!! this is so flippin awsome!! and sasuke's an idiot. hehehe. hope you continue soon =^-^=
Author's Response: thanks for the review :)
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 22/11/07 - 06:57 am · For: Heirlooms & exposure
Ahhh...so wonderful! Well, not that it surprised me...still. These chapters get better and better, keep it up ^_^
Author's Response: thank you! thats all i have to say :)
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 - 11:34 am · For: Intruder
It wasn't that bad, really I think that it plays an important role. You could say that it's like a linking chapter. To make the next one easier to write. Don't worry, this has happened to me too. I try to write something but it doesn't turn out the way I want. So you could either keep writing until you're satisfied or give up and wait for inspiration. I'm having similar problems in the moment too. But I hope that you'll get motivated to update soon again (:
Author's Response: yeah, it might not have been that bad, but it was bad, though thanks for your support, you made me feel alot better, coz i thought it was extremely crap. thanks for the tip as i have been taking it into consideration and thanks for the review :)
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 - 05:55 am · For: Intruder
It was really good, I enjoyed it a lot. My only suggestion is to watch the stupid mistakes (you know the ones that are hard to see) I make them a lot as well, I know how annoying they can be to try and fix. Other then that I thought it was well written. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: i know what you mean about those stupid mistakes. i think i like need a beta reader, coz once i have read the chapter my eye just skips over the little mistakes that degrade the chapter. anyway, thanks for the tip and review :)
Name: Noleta (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 - 05:17 am · For: Intruder
I luv til story so much and it actually makes me tear up.
Author's Response: thanks, im glad it makes you feel that way...sort of, LOL :)
Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: 16/11/07 - 05:12 am · For: Just a Dream
I like it allot. I plan to read everthing on this site. It's all good aside from a few. This fic is kick a** though. Hope you get allot of fan appreciation.
Author's Response: thanks for the review. i too hope i get alot of fan aprreciation. LOL :)
Name: Hinagirl326 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 - 04:18 am · For: Losing Control
OMG!!! this is so awsome! i hope you continue soon. =^-^=
Author's Response: thanks for the support and the review (:
Name: NarutoX$$$ (Anonymous) · Date: 09/11/07 - 06:57 pm · For: Losing Control
That is so sad I could hardly stop myself from crying but at the same time i.................................LUVED IT! PLZ KEEP WRITING!
Author's Response: right now im trying to write the next chapter. im only a quarter way through. sadly. rnanyway, thanks for the review (:
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 - 08:10 pm · For: Losing Control
That was great ^_^ Poor Naruto-Kun...I almost cried when I read this story. I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: aww, i almost made you cry, maybe next time i can get a few tears, yeah? L0L. i would have to write a very sad chappy though. anyway, thanks for the review!! (:
Name: Sam (Anonymous) · Date: 07/11/07 - 07:12 pm · For: Losing Control
Oh this is so good. please update soon. it makes me sad that everyone punishes naruto
Author's Response: thanks for the review! yeah i know what you mean....poor naruto-kun
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 - 10:32 am · For: Losing Control
Once again a very good chapter. Sakura kinda deserved what she got cause she is always so mean to Naruto. It's not enough that the villagers are treating him bad but she's doing it too. And then Sasuke to the rescue! I liked it that he wasn't a bastard there cause otherwise he would have gotten some of Naruto's rage too. Now I really can't wait to read the next chapter cause Sasuke is gonna stalk Naruto, right? Cause that's the only way he'll find out what's wrong with him or he's gonna do something else? I dunno cause you're the writer so UPDATE SOON! P.S. Hey you didn't think that I wasn't going to review right? I think that this review is the longest I have ever written and it's for you! Btw if you want check out my stories. I think that you might like 'Save Me' and 'Missing' (:
Author's Response: thanks for the review. its cool that this would be your longest review, and it being for my story. that makes me very optimistic. well, i hope i can post up the next chapter soon, though i doubt... gimme a couple of days.rnp.s I intend on reading your stories (:
Name: Cherished (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 - 01:07 am · For: Just a Dream
OH! SADNESS!!!!! T_T Poor Naruto-kun!!!!
Author's Response: i know. i am being cruel aren't i? thanks for the review (:
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 - 11:33 pm · For: Just a Dream
It was very good and it's easy to read. I like your style, simple yet meaningful. Go on like this and update soon.
Author's Response: With each review i get happier and happier. im sort of anxious, i wanna know what people think. i'm working on the next chapter, though i doubt i will post it anytime soon. thanks for reviwing (:
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 01/11/07 - 07:42 pm · For: Just a Dream
Gah...poor Naruto-Kun, he is so illtreated! I love your story though, great job. I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: thanks for the review, it really means alot...i didn't know whether people would like this or not, and im extremely glad that someone has reviewed!rn