Reviews For For the love of SasuNara
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 - 07:36 am · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
wow nice smutt =]
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 03/05/08 - 07:03 am · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
HAY great keep it up.
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 02/05/08 - 10:08 pm · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
god damn so would i yikes that was good
Author's Response: Thank u very much
Name: darkxratha (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 - 03:36 pm · For: All becuse of ramen?
niceness..
Name: darkxratha (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 - 03:26 pm · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
finish the frikkin story!!!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 10/03/08 - 06:15 pm · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
your story isn't bad but you've got some of your spelling and terminology wrong.....
first off, people don't greet each other with "moshi moshi" - that's only for phone conversations. If you're talking to someone face-to-face, you'd either say "konnichiwa", "ohayo", "osu", "konbawa" etc or something to that effect.
Also, the spelling is "ohayo" not "ohiyo". you also have some minor spelling mistakes (English).
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: T_T sorry bout that , I kinda knew the Moshi Moshi thing just I was in a rush and could not look up who to spell the others
Name: Shmoobunny182 (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 - 03:55 pm · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
hehe
Author's Response: ummm >_> thanks?
Name: Suzie (Anonymous) · Date: 16/02/08 - 09:23 pm · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
yah! i love it! i wanna meet slutty lee though! great job keep it up XD
Author's Response: arigato suzie-baarnrnHe will be coming up next chapter
Name: mystymisa (Anonymous) · Date: 13/02/08 - 06:00 pm · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
owww!! u made konohamaru his brother!! so sweet!! hey! hey write more!! i will read it foe sure!! ganbate!!
Author's Response: Thanks for liking my story, It was easy for me to make kono his brother cause they are so much alike. I will try to update as soon as possible. ^__^
Name: naru_chan_fan (Anonymous) · Date: 13/02/08 - 05:10 pm · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
kona friends name should be Tiashi
Ukena
Author's Response: Thanz I really need that, I'm going to tell you a secret, that's going to be his boyfreind
Name: yaoimyantidrug (Anonymous) · Date: 13/02/08 - 03:04 pm · For: I Hate You, I Love You: Konoha High
Oooo I Like It Please Continue!
Author's Response: aregato yaoimyantidrug-kun, rest asured I will keep on writing. please check my other story all because of ramen
Name: SilverSoulShadow (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 - 08:48 pm · For: All becuse of ramen?
Naruto is....a little pitiful in this... Ah well.
Name: SilverSoulShadow (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 - 08:45 pm · For: All becuse of ramen?
aww....that's just mean.... -pouts for Naru-kun- STILL FUNNY!!!
Name: charlotte (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/08 - 03:29 pm · For: All becuse of ramen?
That was weird.. and totally out of the blue..
like going to work.. and buying a blue toaster with wings so you can make some real fly bacon. o.O
& that was the shortest sex session ever! Guiness Book of Records, 09 :P
but apart from that twas very cool XD
i give it a 9! :]
Name: firefang13 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 - 03:49 pm · For: All becuse of ramen?
poor narutoT_T
Author's Response: he might get some sasu next time or will he. I hope you liked it, it was my first time writing a fan fic to be put online, so i was kind of nervous.I'll most likely have chapter two up by 11/27/07.
Name: Lunanekosuna (Anonymous) · Date: 20/11/07 - 02:09 pm · For: All becuse of ramen?
Nooooo naru get no sasu ass poor naru*pout* good story i like
Author's Response: thanks for the good review. I'll have chapter 2 up by 11/27/07. and i will keep an eye out for you fan-fic. rnlots of luv,rncubuu love 99
Name: Lunanekosuna (Anonymous) · Date: 20/11/07 - 02:09 pm · For: All becuse of ramen?
Nooooo naru get no sasu ass poor naru*pout* good story i like
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