Reviews For Lover In Training
Name: cosipotente (Signed) · Date: 10/04/12 - 01:31 am · For: Chapter 01
:D Hopefully, you can tell by the username that you know who this is ha ha.
Anyway, I think I already told you I stumbled upon this story over at aff.net and that I had really liked it. So, here is me actually leaving a comment stating that.
Name: me-chan (Anonymous) · Date: 05/12/11 - 04:26 pm · For: Chapter 04
The reason firefox spell checker is yelling against ludacris is because Ludacris is the rapper, ludicrous is the word meaning absurd or crazy. just fyi. Also, love the fic. great build-up of tension, and I love that you manage to actually keep Gaara somewhat in-character. He's extremely difficult to write, because he's so un-human. You're keeping him mostly in character, but also making him more relatable. I like that. Very well done! I do think Naruto would have taken longer to figure it out... he's extremely dense when it comes to relationships.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 22/07/09 - 10:49 am · For: Chapter 01
im glad i mad u hapy...this was actually the reason i wanted to join the site...to giv revs to my stories and this is by far the top fav to me
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 - 04:18 pm · For: Chapter 05
*lol tht last lin
"...you wanna see what else I learned from watching porn?"
very amusing and very cute....i love ur story and hope u write mor stories!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Hehe, I love making Gaara say random things like that. ^^
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 - 04:17 pm · For: Chapter 04
the battle thing pretty good...i lik tht Gaara is going after wat he wants! go GaarNaru
Author's Response: Thanks! The battle was really hard for me to write actually, lol, but I'm glad you liked it! And yes, go GaarNaru! Best pairing ever, IMO. :DDD
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 - 04:16 pm · For: Chapter 03
hmm....Gaara is in love..*sighs happly* and the kiss was nice...good fluff ^^
Author's Response: Thank you, hun! You're making me so happy, hehe. ^^
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 - 04:14 pm · For: Chapter 02
hehehe Gaara is so cute and amusing wen it comes to love, and such...it makes me smile
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I try to make Gaara as amusing as possible because I love his character so much. ^^
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 21/07/09 - 04:13 pm · For: Chapter 01
love this story i totally added this one as the first fav of my account!
Author's Response: Aww, really?! That makes me so happy!! I haven't written in forever, and I'd almost forgotten about this site, but now thanks to you I might have to start writing again! Thank you so much, you have no idea how much that means to me! :DD
Name: xthextellxtalexmassacrex (Anonymous) · Date: 15/05/08 - 06:07 pm · For: Chapter 05
hahaha i like the porn part and it was a really good story! you could probably write more but that was really good i liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't want to drag it out too long, so I decided to let it go at that. Besides, I need to work on my other stories too. =]rnrnThank you for your review! Sorry it took me so long to get to it.
Name: kibafan17 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 - 04:34 pm · For: Chapter 05
OMG! I just read this now!!! I can't believe that I never saw the last chapter!!!! I wondered why I had never seen it!! I thought you may have just abandoned it!!!
It was rather smexy though! And I love the reference to the original title! That was rather good! X3
Was there anything bad about this chapter? Yes. Gaara got no action1!!! Gaara needs action!! AHHHH asdkjfadkjfa
Lol!
Anyway - I'm going to sleep now - even though I am uber awake because of all the Red Bull I have drunk! Mwah!
Excellent-e! =^.^=
Author's Response: I could never abandon this story! It was my baby! But I'm glad you finally saw this haha.And thank you! I knew I had to fit it in there somewhere and make a reference to the first chapter, cause really, it seemed almost unnecessary to me. So yes, thank you! *tackles*
Well, what do you think happened after the chapter ended? *grin* Oh yes, that's right, our dearest Gaara got PLENTY of action. ^_^ So don't worry about him, haha.
Ooooh Red Bull. *grin* Personally, I prefer Monster, but really, any kind of energy drink is fantasmic. ^_^ MWAH! And thank you again! Hehe.
Name: dreamerswaking (Anonymous) · Date: 07/02/08 - 04:27 pm · For: Chapter 04
Hello! I really like your story.And I really want to read the last chapter. Unfortunately the web page doesn't want to display chapter 5.
I was hoping you could send me the final chapter through email.
My email address is:
dreamerswaking @ gmail . com
Just remove the spaces.
Long live GaarNaru!!!!!!
Please write many more stories as good as this one.
Author's Response: Ah yeah, I'll definitely do that.rnAnd thank you so much for your review. =DrnI promise to write many more stories even better than this one. ^_^
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 - 01:53 am · For: Chapter 05
I've been sitting here for over half an hour trying to figure out how to discribe this story,
And I've yet to think of a word. Amazing wont cut it, nor will wonderful or any other word that means basicly the same thing..
This was the best way to end this, I think.
Anyway, I'm sad to see the end of this story! It's one of my faves on TONFA, easy. :]
Author's Response: Wow. You have no idea how much that means to me, to hear [or rather, see] someone say that.
Especially since it's you, too. In all the years I've been writing, you're DEFINITELY one of my favorite reviewers ever. Seriously. Thank you so much. :)
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 - 05:16 pm · For: Chapter 05
Haha, that was GREAT! So cute and sweet, I loved the whole thing, start to finish. Excellent work ^_^
Author's Response: I'm happy you loved it! You've been so nice, thank you! ^_^
Name: Beqs (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 - 12:29 pm · For: Chapter 05
OMG!!!!!!!
AMAZING!
love it love it love it love itlove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Luff forever
Beqs
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!
I'm so glad you loved it! =D
*hugs*
Name: Hitori-kun (Anonymous) · Date: 11/01/08 - 02:47 pm · For: Chapter 04
Oh. My. Not-god.
I love it!! :):)
Author's Response: Thank you! =D That means a lot, because this story is like my child, almost. I'm glad you love it. =) Thank you.
Name: Beqs (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 - 12:47 pm · For: Chapter 04
All I can say is : >< Ooooooooo!!!!
Author's Response: Haha thank you. ^_^
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 - 07:46 pm · For: Chapter 04
Aww! Naru-Chan got Gaara...err...Gaara got Naruto! Which ever it is, great chapter.
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you. And he hasn't gotten him yet! =D
Name: sian (Anonymous) · Date: 26/12/07 - 03:02 pm · For: Chapter 04
wwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww so good!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you, thank you. =D
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 25/12/07 - 11:41 pm · For: Chapter 04
Ekkkkkkkk, *dies* I LOVE THIS STORYYYYY. :] It's love, love loveee! And, next chapter is going to be the last? Well, take as long as you can to update.. 'Cause, then... The story wont be finished so quickly.
But then again, if you update as soon as you can, then I get to read it quicker...
Oh dear, I'm so confused!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you! I'm so ecstatic to hear that you love this story, haha. It's like my baby! And next chapter will probably be the last, as sad as it is. I may write an epilogue, but probably not. And how about I take a decent amount of time to update? Not TOO soon, but not too late, either? That way I can simmer the last chapter to perfection, which will hopefully make the fact that it's ending a bit less....sad. :)
Name: kibafan17 (Signed) · Date: 25/12/07 - 03:02 pm · For: Chapter 04
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Wow! OMG for a minute there I thought that Naruto was going to actually break it off with Gaara! I nearly jumped into this fan-fiction to shake him into realisation! Wow... just... wow!
Now I have to say that I'm excited for, and expecting, lots more kissing! Mwah! *wipes small amount of blood from nose* I'm so hyper 'cos its Christmas and all that... AHHHHHHHHH! It's too much! XD
Kibafan17 =^.^= xx
*GLOMPS* =D
Author's Response: Ehhhh? You can jump into fan-fictions? O_O That must be a useful power, haha. But did you seriously think that Gaara would let Naruto break it off? Na-uh.Hehe welllll I don't think you'll be disappointed with your, ah, expectations. =D And I'm uber glad that you're so hyper and whatnot. A'cuz I mean, c'mon. What could possibly be better than Christmas and GaaraxNaruto? Nothing, I say! Hehe. ^_^
*GLOMPS BACK!* ^_^
Name: Beqs (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 - 10:05 am · For: Chapter 03
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!
More! Give-a me more! Want more! Feed me more!!! *opens mouth*
Your ever-loving fan
Beqs
Author's Response: Haha, thank you, thank you. =D
I'm working on the next part now, so hopefully it'll be up soon. ^_^
Name: kibafan17 (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 - 02:24 am · For: Chapter 03
Th-er-e is...no... way to describe...
HOW GIDDY I AM BECAUSE OF THAT KISSING!!!! AHHHHHH!!! *blood gushes from nose*
It was superbly written! I thought it was even better than some of the harder yaoi on here! *wipes drool from face* *or even thinks of Gaara doing so* mwah!
I am now officially 10 minutes late for college - but I don't care! I may even have to read it again! Hahahahaha kukukuku
Kibafan17 =^.^= xx
Oh and yey for the dedication!! I'm going to be sooo hyper because of this today! *huggle*
Author's Response: WAH I'm glad you thought so! Cause I made it extra good just for you. =D Well, and for Gaara too, haha.And zomg thank youuuuuuuu. You're one of THE coolest people one here, without a doubt. =D
Hyper is good!! Hehe. *glomps*
Anywho! Thank you very much. You are teh shiz. ^_^
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 - 01:19 am · For: Chapter 03
I'm sad now. I want to read more, lmao. I'm greedy. XDD Why was Naruto acting all weird? :O
Haha, everyone loves an adorable idiot like Naruto who is almost always oblivious to what's going on. You can't blame Gaara! :]
I'm not sure why this isn't on my favorites yett. I mean, I always come here to see if it's updated. It would be easier just to add it to favorites. I'll go do that now!
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm gonna be sad when this story ends. I love it.
Author's Response: Psh, you're allowed to be greedy cause it means this is actually good. XD And you'll find out why Naruto was acting weird later. XPrnYou really can't blame Gaara! I mean, Naruto is just so cute! :)rnAh thank you! I just literally squealed and shook my head like a fangirl cause you said you're adding this to your favorites. My day is now made because of you. =DrnThere's probably only going to maybe be 2-3 chapters left, maybe an epilogue. But yeah, THANK YOU SO MUCH! ^_^_^_^_^
Name: Baka_Onegai_Aishiteru (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 - 08:16 pm · For: Chapter 03
Aww...Gaara is so precious, in a scary-serious-I can kill you- sorta way. Wonderful chapter, I love how you are keeping this so slow without being boring, great job!
Author's Response: Haha yes, Gaara does kind of come off that way, doesn't he? And thank you so much! It's hard to keep a story going slow and have it not be boring, so I'm glad you think that. Thank you! =D
Name: kibafan17 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 - 06:50 am · For: Chapter 02
WOW!! Welcome to my favorites! I nearly missed it because you changed its name! And to tell you the truth I think this chapter far exceeds the last one - and even that one was damn good!
Please update faster than you did this time though! I was waiting forever for this to be updated and now that they're about to kiss I'm in fits trying not to get too giddy! XD - Wow I'm sad... -_-
Oh well! Excellent story! Keep up the fabulous work! I am looking forward to the next update :P
Kibafan17 =^.^= xx
Author's Response: Wow. You officially just made my day. No, my week. Thank youuuuuuuuuu. I'm so glad you didn't miss it, haha.I had a bit of trouble with the last chapter cause you know, it was a spur of the moment idea. Buuuut now that I'm actually thinking of what's gonna happen next, I'm getting more ideas than a pro wrestler gets bashes. =D
I will make sure I update faster, definitely. It was that pesky ol' writer's block, I swear it! Evil buttmunch, it is.
Anyways! Thank you so much, and I'll definitely be updating soon. ^_^_^