Reviews For Irrelevancy
Name: i_heart_notebooks123 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/09 - 07:28 pm · For: Irrelevancy
Oh my God... I'm shedding tears as I write this... if my little brother walks in he's gonna freak out and wonder what's wrong, haha... crap, how can I laugh after reading that?
You're too cruel for writing that. It was horrible and beautiful and amazing and so incredibly sad.
Such an original peace with brilliant style, plot, full to the brim with emotion... one of your best works yet, albeit one of your saddest/angsty-est.
Actually, I was reading the reviews first, and I got kinda nervous, cause I cry easily when it comes to stories, and since it's you, I thought I was gonna be bawling the whole way through; then I started and I'm thinking "Okay, this is good, same old brumal..." and then near the end I'm sniffling and wiping my eyes thinking "No! How could you! Whhy!?!"
But it couldn't have worked out any other way. (I've finally stopped crying ^^) Anyway, um... right, it couldn't have worked out any other way, not only then would it not be brumal, it just wouldn't be nearly as moving and memorable.
Bottom line is, this was... heart-wrenching and sad and I loved it. Really, great job doesn't even cover it.
But I have to wonder, did you cry when you wrote this?
Author's Response: Well, to be perfectly honest with you, whenever I write my fics, I'm completely dead-panned. If you happened to pass by me when I'm writing a story, you wouldn't even know it half the times. That's why I'm always surprised when people tell me, "I cried during this!" or "I laughed so hard!" because, as the writer, I am completely immune to anything I write. XD Trufax. Kind of sad at the same time, but yeah.rnrnSo to answer your question, nope! I did NOT cry when I wrote this! (Not to sound completely DEAD and uncaring or anything, but....)rnrnActually, you wouldn't believe the amount of unoriginality this piece has! My beta-reader told me that it reminded her of a play called "Pygmalion" (which I had never heard of or seen before writing this) so I was kind of surprised. I can't remember how I got the idea for Irrelevancy anymore, but I'm glad that it's still good.rnrnSmart of you to read the reviews first, but spoilers ahoy! I never read reviews first for stories. XD I hate getting spoiled. rnrnHm, now that you mention it, I wonder if I have any ANGSTIER fics in the works at the moment. I have too many MCs that I'm not done with and I'm not willing to post up unfinished MCs anymore. That's probably why I haven't been active for almost a year... Beh.rnrnAnyway, anyway, sorry for making you cry. I hope you don't get caught with puffy eyes. I really do hate making people cry, but I can't write happy stories well. SasuNaruSasu =/= happy endings for me most the times. XD They're just too angsty to begin with. LOLrnrnOkay, I'd better stop typing. This response is going to end up longer than my fic if I keep going. XDrnrnBUT THANK YOU AGAIN! I hope you're enjoying yourself!
Name: Fri (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/08 - 09:27 pm · For: Irrelevancy
I don't really know what to say right now, as I am extremely sad, but I did like the story in some way. It was well written, had a great plot and background, the sequencing was nice, but baaaaad ending Xp Only 'cause it wasn't a happy one-I can't handle these sad stories! I wished it was happy because it was a great story and I really feel crappy right now 'cause I think about it and start crying, and I'm not much of a cryer so...Well done on the story.
I'm going to go look at your other ones, hopefully I'll find a happier one to cheer me up-crying is lame!! :D
Author's Response: Oops, I'm afraid that you won't find many fics of mine that'll cheer you up--I'm quite known for my angsty and dark fics. I abhor fluff and sappy things that connect with SasuNaru. Ask my beta-reader--I tried giving this story a happy ending. It didn't work out at ALL. XDrnrnSorry that this story's ending sucked. I know it. I haaate this story with a vengeance now. But I can't do anything about it now! Or at least I'm way too lazy to fix it up. Bah, whatever. It's such a disaster anyways. XDDDrnrnThank you so much for sticking with this monstrosity and taking the time to review though! I appreciate it very much.
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 02:38 pm · For: Irrelevancy
*horrified look* no....NO!!! omg that was so sad! so painful to read too! but i loved it! i love it when i read something so emotional! and the way it was written...so original and creative! i would have never of thought of something like this! and pulled it off too! why would they do that to him?! and it made me so happy ad yet sad when i realized that he was human! well was once human. society is messed up! to heck with them! they dont have the right to do that to someone! T^T and yet they can! i feel so depressed right now....but in a good way. i think i would feel even more depressed if i never read it in the first place! such an amazing story deserves much more credit than this! i wish i could bake! because if i could i would make you the BEST cherry pie in the world! considering i dont eat it all before i give it to you XD but yes the angst and the detail are simply wonderful! i dont think anyone could have made it better! i really dont know what to say....im at a loss for words! i wish there were such things as digital cookies!.....the ending...so sad...it makes it so very very sad that sasuke had to lose him twice...he had to feel that pain again. BRAVO!! excellent one shot! *standing ovation* THANK YOU SOOOO VERY MUCH!!! ♥ *loves*
~lemon
Author's Response: Oya, but there are such things as digital cookies! *takes out cookies and eats them* Ugh, but they don't taste all that great though... *clears cookies* There you go. XD By the way, I think I'll prefer an apple pie, actually.... Not that I'm being picky or something. Hahaha.rnrnI wonder if you're feeling that wonderful, bitter sadness that I frequently feel when I read a particularly well-written and sad SasuNaru story? It's a terrible and beautiful feeling, don't you think? That's why I love SasuNaru so much... :sighs: Well!rnrnThanks very much! I feel lame for running out of things to saaaay!
Name: Snirp (Anonymous) · Date: 14/10/07 - 06:53 pm · For: Irrelevancy
That was awesome. So well written and totally into the emotional essence. I truly love this fic. You did a great job. I'll be looking forward to reading more work like this from you.
Author's Response: Why thank you! I'm quite flattered by that!rnrnThank you for reading and reviewing, and I'll await your future reviews as well!
Name: Miyomiyo (Anonymous) · Date: 13/10/07 - 11:48 am · For: Irrelevancy
Wow. Very powerful. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you liked this! Thank you for reviewing!
Name: Ryoki-chan (Anonymous) · Date: 12/10/07 - 02:17 pm · For: Irrelevancy
ow man...
that was an amazing story!!! it brought me crying.
i really hate that feeling...of having someone you love losing in front of you, you can't do anything to stop that, you want to be with that person...but its just that fate is so cruel...
well...that makes the story beautiful...
so far this is one of the best fanfics i have ever read...keep up!
Author's Response: Oh goodness, I appear to be making so many people cry with this! Irony--for I have written this for Naruto's birthday! How morbid of me! XD I apologize for making you so sad!rnrnI would not have much of an idea of how terrible that would feel since I have not experienced such a thing. I really went out on a limb for this story, but I'm glad that you liked it so very much.rnrnThank you for reading, reviewing, and wishing the best for me! Rest assure that it is very much appreciated!rnrnAnd sorry for the bizarre writing context. I am strangely compelled to reply to this with a very formal note.
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 - 04:59 am · For: Irrelevancy
That was so sad! Poor Naruto. *sniff* T^T Stupid Scientists! How can Sasuke let them do this? The ending made me cry.
Author's Response: Oh, well Sasuke really didn't have a choice now did he?rnrnSorry for making you cry over this! But thank you for reading and leaving a review for me!