Reviews For DON’T GO IN THE BAYOU
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 - 12:22 pm · For: Chapter 3
Woot! Sasuke can sure slap. I wonder what happened to him...
And what will happen to Naruto?
Name: KitsuneFun (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 - 09:59 am · For: Chapter 3
Great chapter... I can't wait to see what happens between Sasuke and Naruto
Name: kisa (Anonymous) · Date: 09/10/07 - 02:15 am · For: Chapter 1
you forget one more important thing the back of sasuke head also look like the back of a duck butt.
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 - 05:18 am · For: Chapter 2
YAAAAAAYYYYYY!!!! *takes breath* YAAAAAAAAYYYYYY! I love this! ^^
Name: Cypress (Anonymous) · Date: 23/09/07 - 11:01 pm · For: prolog
You could get a proof reader, and basically have them go through in fix your grammatical/spelling errors. I see many stories start with having some similar problems, but in later chapters said problems vanish once a proof reader is mentioned. This story is nice so far and I hope to see more in the future.
Name: arion360 (Anonymous) · Date: 23/09/07 - 10:45 am · For: prolog
wow! I hope Tara gets away, but is Sasuke really a monster? o___O can't wait to find out what happens next! ^^
Name: Ryoki-chan (Anonymous) · Date: 22/09/07 - 02:55 pm · For: Chapter 1
yes...there are some bad grammar and wrong spelling...
though what's important is i understand the sense...
well for your problem...you should seek some friend's help and have them edit it (beta?)
well...intriguing...i'll keep up...
hope you finish your resource classes
Name: jojo661538 (Anonymous) · Date: 21/09/07 - 09:09 pm · For: Chapter 1
you know its really not bad or maybe its me when i want to see the errors i see then but when im intrested in the story i dont pay too much attention to them i also add some things in my head to make it right so i could understand so keep up the good work that is a good plot ^_^
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 - 06:29 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hey, is Naruto 11 now? He was 5 in the prologue and then it said 6 years later. So 5 + 6 = 11 right? Well of course I'm right! This is kindergarten math for crying out loud! Honestly I feel like I'm as stupid as Naruto.
-__-; Well anyway...POR QUE!!!!? (WHY!?) WHY DID YOU PUT A CLIFFY! I HATE YOU!!! (Not really ^^) I HATE YOU FOR STOPPING THE CHAPTER THERE! I WILL NEVER TALK TO YOU AGAIN! (Heres my phone #. LOL JK) But PLEASE continue this! I will die if you don't. DIE! O_O I mean it! *points gun at head* I'LL DO IT!
Nah, nah just kidding.
NO REALLY! I'LL DO IT!
Nah I won't I'm not like that.
BUT THEN AGAIN I WILL DO IT!!!
"OMG! Will you shut the f*** up!" *gets shot*
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I so stole that from a comic I just read. Well anyway CONTINUE THIS! ^^ Heh...SasuNaru.
Author's Response: lol wtf...ph and i love that comic
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 21/09/07 - 05:13 pm · For: Chapter 1
coooooooooooool this is gettin interesting
write more write more yaaaaaay
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 21/09/07 - 02:31 pm · For: prolog
love it can't wait of ryou to update