Reviews For It's Goodbye Time
Name: Stéphanie (Anonymous) · Date: 14/12/07 - 09:27 pm · For: It's Goodbye Time
Fuck! you fucking made me cry, man! What a sad, sad story... beautifully written and especially touching... (still cant believe you made me cry! arr! lol!)
Name: A Fan (Anonymous) · Date: 21/11/07 - 11:33 pm · For: It's Goodbye Time
I am overwhelmed by the beauty of your writing> I don't enjoy reading death fic=When done as sensitively as yours it makes me cry. And yours made me cry alot. I would have liked an alternate ending-like in the dvds of movies-they sometimes let you watch all the alternate endings they filmed. So not to change your story; just to add to it a happy ending(without taking away the ending you orirginally wrote)- if people wanted to read it; they could. What I envisioned was the point of the cremation. I'd start the alternate ending there. The fire would purify and transform. After Sasuke and Kakashi did the fire jutsu; the fire would grow and burn brighter than it should. The fire is slowly shaped into that of the 9 tailed fox demon. The cool wind causes the fire to go away and the smoke left is also the shape of the demon- but the wind disperses it-so essentially it was the demon that was cremated. And a Naruto with a flawless body and bright eyes and tan skin; would be left lying on the ground. The seal of the fox demon gone. Naruto gets a chance to live-free of the demon. Sasuke is on his knees next to Naruto; covers him with his coat and pulls him into his arms. Naruto tells Sasuke that he did hear him tell him that he loved him-and they live happily ever after. Or maybe instead of no seal; the seal is transformed to that of a pheonix- a spirit that is revered by the community. Out of the ashes he was reborn-to live a life filled with belonging, respect and love. Maybe it was Sasuke's love for Naruto that was in his fire jutsu-and that helped to enable the transfiguration.
This in no way takes away from how much I LOVED your story(and your writing talent)..It has everything to do with me always wanting for Naruto and Sasuke to beat impossible odds and live on together in love.
Name: Hannah (Anonymous) · Date: 05/11/07 - 04:11 am · For: It's Goodbye Time
I am crying so hard, starting with when kakashi said goodbye.
Name: Onyx (Anonymous) · Date: 30/10/07 - 12:01 pm · For: It's Goodbye Time
It's hard to make me cry, yet here I am, finishing off a box of tissues.
I absolutely loved this story. It was very well written and the emotion you fed into your writing blew my mind. Excellent job !!! I look forward to reading more of your work - Onyx
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 - 06:45 am · For: It's Goodbye Time
This is so sad, so full with emotions. It made me cry until the end.
Name: TheFallenAngel67 (Anonymous) · Date: 10/09/07 - 08:53 pm · For: It's Goodbye Time
Well, I usually don´t cry for something, even if it is so f**king sad,...*choke* but...this...
Jesus, Maria, Jose, this was...i don´t have words for this...
Naruto *choke*, is my favorite character you know, I may be a fucking dark and gothic *sniff* girl...wth all of my problems, and I don´t know it's just...he is my light, even if he is just a anime character, but somewhere...in the world, will be someone who is like him, I my self have a person like him, and I thought about him, imagining how it woild be if that happens to my precious people...so sad and *sniff* wonderfully written.
But well, I was wondering if I could traslate this fic, I'm mexican so, a lot of people in my comunnity (fanfiction in spanish) would be soooo happy and sad if they read this :)
Obviously you would have all the credit, me mencioning you great imagination and way of write, so I would be glad if you give me permission.
So please my e-mail es fercitacruz@hotmail.com (yeah weird rite? XD, but remember that I'm mexican heh heh)
At least tell me you answer, if i´t's no, well i would be kinda sad you know, bu i won't do anything and try to steal this, i mean, one is almost suffering wirtting something, and some other atupid person stealing your work.
If you said yes, then I would get to work, and obviously i would mention that you originally made it, and i just traleted it :)
Name: Ilkar (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 - 02:14 pm · For: It's Goodbye Time
Wow. I loved it. I'm sad that they didn't get to tell each other that they loved each other but I'm happy beacuse of how good the story was. The characters responded to Naruto's death exactly how I imagined they would (I'm currently writing a story with character death so I've thought about it alot).
So yeah, well done. I thought it was simply amazing, sad but amazing xxx
Name: Sammychan (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 - 11:19 am · For: It's Goodbye Time
Dude! That was awesome! I can hardly type because of the tears in my eyes! -sigh- That was really good :)
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 - 03:50 am · For: It's Goodbye Time
This is the first fanfic that has ever made me cry. No matter how sad they were, none ever made me cry. But this.. I don't know. It's really sad, and you've written it so well that I can imagine it happening.. I think that's why it made me cry. I can picture it all happening. Ugh, *glares* you made me cry. Aha. This is wonderful! If I didn't have to go in a few minutes I would read it again. This is going on my favorites.
Name: fanngirl_92 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 - 02:13 am · For: It's Goodbye Time
that was soo good and soo sad. i was crying as i read it. you just ruined my day, lol. im soo sad now, i cant get over it. *sniff*