Reviews For "The Worst Book Ever Written"
Name: kl (Anonymous) · Date: 11/04/14 - 09:55 pm · For: Chapter 4:Dreams and Problems
hate it
why with the useles whore and not whit better girl like ino or other girl
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 10:09 pm · For: Sakurako and Tanjiro: Chapter 2
I have to say, rereading this story, my choice of words were slightly harsh. I still believe that there is potiental here, all you need is a little work and a beta reader. A beta reader can help you bounce ideas and make your good ideas be great ones. I like the idea of Jiraya making a book based off of the little genin he's observed. Its an interesting idea. The problem I still have is that you seem to rush it and you are only making a skeleton of what the chapters, the story could be. Don't be afraid of putting more details in it, have at it just make seem more flowing like. Read aloud to see what I mean on the flowing and skeleton part. Can you see how you could add so much more to make this an even better fiction? I hope so, if you want help finding a beta reader just bing it, you'll find some sites that are for the cause of finding beta readersor if you just want some advice, ping me. I would love to see your story blossom from here on then.
a sincere reader,
CKL
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 13/07/10 - 04:20 pm · For: The Book Begins: Chapter1- Naru/Hina Part1
Well first off; I get your trying to be funny and comical with the fanfiction, bravo for trying.
But, I must disagree to seeing this to be a real hoot. It feels rushed and hole ridden. I feel more could've been added to this as in contents of where the team was; what they were doing before hand; and for them sound more like themselves in a way that is amusing, serious, etc.
The chapter just wasn't as good as I thought it would be. On a brighter note I do like the fluff attack on Naruto; it's cute to see him react in those manners of his. Mah, just keep trying; you'll get it right.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 12/10/09 - 10:43 pm · For: Your vote
A or B is fine
Name: Star Princess (Signed) · Date: 20/03/09 - 11:55 am · For: Sakurako and Tanjiro: Chapter 2
This is too funny! I really hope you finish it or at least start another chapter soon. I am on the edge of my seat here. the dialong cracks me up and thank you for clearing on what Tanjiro means, I had no clue. Keep it up!
Name: Star Princess (Signed) · Date: 20/03/09 - 11:50 am · For: Sakurako and Tanjiro: Chapter 2
This is too funny! I really hope you finish it or at least start another chapter soon. I am on the edge of my seat here. the dialong cracks me up and thank you for clearing on what Tanjiro means, I had no clue. Keep it up!
Name: snakebite3 (Signed) · Date: 08/02/09 - 04:37 pm · For: The Book Begins: Chapter1- Naru/Hina Part1
O_x...
damn thats funny!!
Name: snakebite3 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 - 05:23 pm · For: Sakurako and Tanjiro: Chapter 2
DONT STOP DAMNIT OR ILL GET ORO ALL UP IN UR ROOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (door locked!)
Name: snakebite3 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 - 05:22 pm · For: Sakurako and Tanjiro: Chapter 2
DONT STOP DAMNIT OR ILL GET ORO ALL UP IN UR ROOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (door locked!)
Name: snakebite3 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 - 06:51 pm · For: Chapter 4:Dreams and Problems
keep going! this is funny!
Name: snakebite3 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 - 06:48 pm · For: The Book Begins: Chapter1- Naru/Hina Part1
DOT DOT DOT...
Name: Master_Jeriah_slayer (Signed) · Date: 14/04/08 - 12:59 pm · For: Sakurako and Tanjiro: Chapter 2
Wow, this is an awesome story, please update
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 29/03/08 - 11:56 pm · For: Sakurako and Tanjiro: Chapter 2
hey? hey! HEY! ur a good writer WRITE MORE plz thanks
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 28/03/08 - 06:45 am · For: Sakurako and Tanjiro: Chapter 2
MAKE MORE this is soooo interesting mann and the Naru/Hina is hottness
Name: byakuganangel (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 - 04:00 pm · For: Sakurako and Tanjiro: Chapter 2
nice, sasuke blushing, extra fummy
Name: byakuganangel (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 - 03:58 pm · For: Chapter 7:Delayed Training
oh shame naruto
Name: byakuganangel (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 - 03:56 pm · For: Chapter 6
oh, so cute
Name: byakuganangel (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 - 03:54 pm · For: Reviews?????
right. you know you shouldnt use threats when asking for reviews. it makes you sound like a jerk and its more likely people wont review any more. im not meaning to lecture, i just thought you should know
Name: byakuganangel (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 - 03:52 pm · For: Chapter 4:Dreams and Problems
nice work adding kyuubi in as his alter ego. funny
Name: byakuganangel (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 - 03:50 pm · For: Fantasies
nice *smirk* narutos a terrible liar
Name: byakuganangel (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 - 03:49 pm · For: Your vote
B
Name: byakuganangel (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 - 03:49 pm · For: The Book Begins: Chapter1- Naru/Hina Part1
okay, im cracking up here. awesome
Name: Cherished (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 - 11:56 pm · For: Your vote
hm....i go with E: ABSOLUTELY MUST HAVE LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: genderconfusion (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 - 07:38 pm · For: The Book Begins: Chapter1- Naru/Hina Part1
oh my, such a lovely idea. I enjoy seeing something in which the characters find themselves in situations in which they had not thought of. Wonderful, please continue.
Name: Sushix (Anonymous) · Date: 23/12/07 - 05:32 pm · For: Chapter 7:Delayed Training
this is a review worth 400 WORDS!
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