Reviews For No More Pain
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 - 09:11 pm · For: Prologue
I can wait. Do what you need to do. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I appreciate it.
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 19/03/08 - 08:18 pm · For: Ch.1- Prelude
Ah Max Payne. I loved that game way back in the day when life was simpler. I love the film noir style, and you're pulling this off magnificently. Keep up the good work. I hope to read the next chapter soon. :)
Author's Response: Yeah... Max Payne is great. But as you say, life just isn't that simple anymore.
I'm glad you like the story, but I don't have the time to continue it right now. I play along as I write, to get the details and dialogue down- which makes this quite a time-consuming venture. I won't be getting back to work on this for at least a while, but I'm not abandoning it. If you would wait for a while, it will be great.
Name: rasengan_welch (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 - 06:47 pm · For: Ch.1- Prelude
mmm,max payne,a classic now.i loved this when it first came out.good job,100/10.make sure you read my new fic.it was gonna be named,'tayuya's in love' but it's now called,'sound's new shadow'
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll see what I can do... I'm going back to school tomorrow, and things are guaranteed to become hectic soon. I'll try my best to get to your story (and keep my stories up to date).
Name: NarutoandSakura4Eva (Anonymous) · Date: 22/08/07 - 11:08 am · For: Ch.1- Prelude
That was like s sad!! Update soo its pretty good even it sad!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll update as soon as I can (I got tons of other stuff in the works right now, so it might be a while).
Name: TTM (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 - 01:24 am · For: Ch.1- Prelude
Man, I used to LOVE Max Payne :)
Even though you've kept pretty much to the script thus far (not that there's much room to elaborate for the moment) I think you've done the story justice. Excellent work :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll be faithful to the original story since it's so good. As I said in the author's notes, I'm playing the game along (on Hard Boiled difficulty- I need to pause and save a lot, so I can't play on DOA difficulty) as I write this, so it'll take some time for the next few chapters. Besides, school's about to start for me, so it may be some time before I update again. I need some help on who should be who in the story, too... I'm kinda confused on who should be Jack Lupino and Vinnie Gognitti. Currently, it'll be Hidan and Kankuro in those roles respectively, but I'm not so sure about that. I'm also not sure about who should be Nicole Horne (only if they'll tell us what the name of that blue-haired woman is...), who should be the Finito brothers, who should be Rico Muerte (hmm... maybe Choji's a good idea?), who should be Candy Dawn (the hooker), and who should be Mona Sax (either Ino or Hinata- but I think Ino's better for the role). Right now, I got Kakashi down for Alfred Woden, Kabuto for B.B., Ibiki for Frankie "The Bat" Niagara, Kisame for Vladimir Lem, and Deidara for Boris Dime. If you have any suggestions about the cast, I'm more than willing to hear you out.