Reviews For More Than A Summer Trip
Name: nejiluver (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 - 07:31 pm · For: Chapter Five: The Gang Parties
liked the chapter! update soon!
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-- TemariSandyFan : Thank you!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 - 02:08 pm · For: Chapter One: The Story Begins
lmao, the lee bit made me laugh so much! this story seems good, i'm guna carry on reading!
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-- TemariSandyFan : Aw, thank you! I'm glad you like it! I'll update soon!
Name: Silent Witness (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 - 11:39 am · For: Chapter Two: The Plot Unfolds
Since I have yet to post fanfiction, It would not be proper for me to critique your writing style or story arc. But, I will say this: please, work on format and readability. Use the HTML script to break up paragraphs. It will make your work easier and more enjoyable to read.
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-- TemariSandyFan : thanks for the advice and once mi computer lets me figure out the stupid codes, ill fix it! srry if its caused u ne trouble
Name: Ninaiso (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 - 03:25 am · For: Chapter Four: The Pairings Reveal
Ohhh I luv the couples you gotts keep it up oh and in my fanfic I kinda used the name konoha bay but had no idea you were usin it do you want me to give you credit?
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-- TemariSandyFan : oh, no, plz use it! since its purely unintentional, plz use it!
Name: nejiluver (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 - 08:03 pm · For: Chapter Four: The Pairings Reveal
hehehe.....I like the story so far. You gotta update soon! =)
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-- TemariSandyFan : thank you!