Reviews For Pictures of Home
Name: fanngirl_92 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 - 12:12 am · For: Chapter 10
awsome chapter. i jsut loved it. but poor sasuke. omg naruto is such a gent and ladies man. sooo OOOC. but cool!
Author's Response: Thank YOu *^^*
Name: spiritwolf30 (Anonymous) · Date: 03/11/07 - 11:30 pm · For: Chapter 1
HeyI was wodering are you even going to update your story anytime soon I am sorry to rush you but I just wanted to read your story and hope to see Naruto actually age alittle more anyways please update soon
Author's Response: Sorry!!!! I'm going to post right now! It's just that i'm really busy and never got to post! :(! Stuff at school got really annoying so I barely had ANY time to write...i'm sorry!
Name: Lanina (Anonymous) · Date: 26/10/07 - 11:08 pm · For: Chapter 9
Chapter 8 is missing
Otherwise, this is a very good story
Name: spiritwolf (Anonymous) · Date: 02/10/07 - 12:48 am · For: Chapter 9
I really like the story but there are some annoying things like instead letting ppl know of a flashback it just all of a sudden there in the past that confused me alot that and with this last chapter Rin goes to check out the house hell she didn`t even go inside you had her talking to I guess dragons and then all of a sudden she is walking some where else it is so confusing that is what is annoying oh yeah I hate to say it but the story just drags its good but kinda boring why I say that is it is taking forever for Naruto to grow up hell out of 9 chapters Naruto has only aged 2 times since leaving with Rin oh yeah what I rememberfrom reading Obito has been dead for 9 or 10 years not 7 at the beginning when he died I believe you said 2 or 3 years later te Kyuubi attacks and Naruto is 7 yrs old so do the math I am sorry to complain other than that I really like the story please update soon and please hurry up with Naruto growing update and not to drag it out forever and if you want to reply t ths my addy is SPIRIT_WOLF26@webtv.net
Author's Response: No, I am perfectly at fault here. I realized that my accuracy was completely off. But Obito had died when thirteen and that same year. I'm sorry. I'm actually been thinking of revising it for so long and I'm going to do so now and I will try to make it less confusing. Sorry!
Name: xxkakashi16xx (Signed) · Date: 15/09/07 - 05:39 pm · For: Chapter 1
I hate writer's blocks hope you get over it soon. I like this story. Good job.
Author's Response: I know...I hate writer's block too...it really sucks...anyway thank you for reading my story!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 14/09/07 - 08:40 pm · For: Chapter 8
i like this story, its very good. keep it up. i hope you get over your writer's block.
Author's Response: Thank you...hopefully the writer's block will leave soon enough...
Name: alex (Anonymous) · Date: 10/09/07 - 08:49 am · For: Chapter 7
dude.....your teacher must SUCK if she doesn't like your writing...i think its great!! i live in england i'm in year 9 i dunno what that is in your school system though...i'm 13 turning 14. oh by the way...i'm a girl not a boy..plz keep going with the story i can't wait to see what happens..oh by the way if your frinds beat you up they must be idiots
Author's Response: Well they don't beat me up literally just threaten me to update...yeah. And no one really likes my English teacher anyway. So yeah, hey thanks for reading and reviewing! I wish others would review too...oh well. Thanks!
Name: AnneLea (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 - 09:07 pm · For: Chapter 1
Actually, I meant odd in the same way you did, all those people reading and not giving reviews. Thanks for the welcome, too!
Author's Response: You're welcomernAnd I do find it strange that about 500 people are reading it yet I only have 8 reviews...strange, isn't it?
Name: AnneLea (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 - 09:49 pm · For: Chapter 6
Well, I find it odd, so I'm going to comment. Ahem..."comment."
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Odd, you say...so I see...Well thanks for reading anyway and Welcome to Tonfa.
Name: i like bacon (Signed) · Date: 26/08/07 - 05:38 am · For: Chapter 5
this is really good but you should bring in hinata or sakura or maybe even saskue
Author's Response: Don't worry...I will *^^* Thanks for reading!
Name: crazyfangirl (Anonymous) · Date: 25/08/07 - 06:31 am · For: Chapter 4
excellent story.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 - 08:22 pm · For: Chapter 3
Hmm... I wonder which book Jiraiya is working on (out of the series)?
A very nice writing style you have, I must say. I really like your way of describing things. Like Jiraiya is saying, Rin is a natural mother.
I'm glad I'm reading this, because I need a happy story or two (heck, who am I kidding... I need a lot of them) when life is threatening to tear the last vestiges of sanity (if I had any in the first place) away from me. Can't wait for the next update.
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Name: wannabewriter (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 - 05:54 pm · For: Chapter 3
This is reallywell written! I like it, seeing there has never been much info on rin...
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-- Ayama123 : Thank you!!!! Yeah, but her character really inspired me to write one about her...(^.-) Thanks for reviewing
Name: lordlamson (Anonymous) · Date: 06/08/07 - 11:16 pm · For: Chapter 1
i cant wait to see what else u have instore for this fanfic thank u for writeing it
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