Reviews For Never Letting Go
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 - 05:42 pm · For: Chapter 8
Hmm...
No need to seek pardon. We all feel that way sometimes. Still, words do not seem the best medium for communicating ideas; however, a few more paltry jumbles for your thoughts:
What was once true always will be. What will be true was always true.
There are so many mysteries. Yet there are none.
"Humanity is but hunger and lust," someone once said. We are beasts- no more, no less.
Heaven and Hell are but constructs of one's mind; if one imagines Heaven, one is there; if one imagines Hell, one is there.
To weep, one looks down. How does it feel, then, to look up after shedding all of one's tears?
Now, I don't think I know you well enough to grasp an idea of what you've been through. On the contrary, you may or may not know what I've been through. But I don't place too much of an emphasis on our experiences, compared side-by-side; suffering is universal. Still, I'm curious... perhaps we can talk a bit more about this, though I don't think these reviews are the best places to talk about such things.
Author's Response: Words unfortunately are nothing but the inventions of humanity to express concepts that however evolve. Yet, people do not change the words as the humanity evolves, they add new ones but still old ones stay. Therefore, all the thoughts we want to express become shallow as the words we use. How can we judge what is truth, what has been truth? What is a mystery but the proof of the human laziness as the being prefers to leave that new concept unknown instead of trying to grasp it. Humanity is a beast, but it gives itself the right to impose its rules in the world. I find it unfair for more social communities such as lions, wolves and so on. Why wouldn't they be the ones to impose themselves? Because the human has weapons, that is all. Heaven and Hell on earth, in the imagination of the Human might be nothing but the illusion of ones mind, but I still believe that the good at the end are rewarded and the bad punished. Those last words you have said, how does it feel after having shed all the tears? I think it depends on the people. Whoever you ask you will receive a different answer from the previous one. I have not been through a lot. In eighteen years you dont go trhough enough things to be able to qualify it as 'having been trough' anything. What I call suffering cannot be compared to the children that die in South Africa from the AIDS, or from those that through the world see their loved ones die. I think that when talking to me you are expecting some horrible torture. I cannot offer you any of those tales to satisfy your curiosity, however if you wish to talk with me, the only possibility there is is instant messaging, and I would certainly enjoy such conversations with someone such as you are.
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 - 05:33 pm · For: Prologue
You're Under a Lavender Sky' sister? Awesome! I read the description on the recent page, and it reminded me of Blood Red Lavender... I really like her work.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading this story a lot, but won't have time for at least a month - so I thought since I'm favouriting it (so I can find it easily), I should give an explanation! And don't worry, I won't come to it with any preconceptions just because I've read your sister's work - I'm sure you write very differently.
I'll let you know when I start reading! Good luck.
Author's Response: Ehem ... To say the truth 'Under a lavender sky' and I are sisters alright ... just not blood linked. We have been raised together, we have been playing together forever, and now we are writing stories together. It's more than just a blood link, it is something far beyond family ... so in other unfortunate words, we are only sisters by heart and mind, but blood wisely ... no link whatsoever ... Urgh ... I am depressed now ... Oh BLS writes wonderfully and I doubt that my story will satisfy you if you like her works. I have always tried to be as wonderful as she is but never have succeeded. Especially now that she is starting the following part of BRL. I truly hope that when you will start reading it, it will be satisfying enough. Thank you very much for your nice review and have fun reading.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 26/04/08 - 02:23 pm · For: Chapter 8
No need to feel bad about that. I'll answer your questions... though I can't say I'll answer in a straightforward manner.
First, I do because I am.
There are a few people I can talk to... not exactly about the meaning of life, though. Because I find myself incapable of phrasing anything truly relevant to it. We just talk... about anything. Our views are quite similar on many subjects.
When I think about some things, I'm not quite lonely.
As I've said, there is but one truth. Differences between people mean little... we share more in common than what we have in differences; differences arise because of how we perceive truth. It's only human nature to hold on to those differences- nothing more, nothing less.
In some ways, I can see myself reflected in you; you remind me of who I was, who I am, and who I will be.
I remember a story, too... someone once said: "I once saw trees as trees, then I saw trees not as trees, but now I see trees as trees once more."
Lastly, a question, though you needn't answer it: why do we seek what we already have?
Author's Response: To share in common? What do we share in common? The little of the world I have seen makes me think that the human being is some kind of an animal whose most disgusting behaviours have been programmed in its instincts. I see us humans and the only thing that I perceive the same in each one of us is the greediness, the hate, the desire, the violence. But when it comes to other characteristics, such as love and compassion, I cannot find them in all the indivuals, only few truly can affirm to be blessed with those abilities. You might be right when you say that there is more we share in common than there are differences, however I personnaly think that it is because of those things we share that we build walls of differences. All the ugliness we see in others makes us very attached to the little facts that in our opinion make us different from those we despise, such as the color of the skin, the religion, the habits, while we forget to look at ourselves. And as well, I think human actings cannot be forgiven with the words "human nature". That creature known as the Homo Sapiens sapiens has chosen to erect itself above the animals, cutting at the same time all the links it had with nature, trying to dominate and controle it. Therefore, I just think that it is only another characteristic of that being to shove away from itself the responsibility of its endeavours, excusing it with the human nature. It is known that in the animal kingdom sometimes females are taken by strength during mating seasons, so can we excuse rape by saying it is in the nature of the animal called human? Can we excuse the murders because it is in the nature of humans to use violence? If we cannot forgive those things how can we accept the fact that we base all our views of the world on the differences there are between us and those people that live accross the Atlantic Ocean, or the Pacific one? I see the words "human nature" as only an excuse the human being gives itself to keep on perpetrating acts, would it only be judging one or killing him. But maybe am I expecting too much of my specie or I might be judging it with cruel severity, when I am against the concept of judging. I am very flattered that you make a link between you and me, even if what you maybe mean is that all the humans are one and that in each one of the members of our community there is a piece of ourselves, but please, you better not see any reflection of who you will be in me, some paths are better not taken and some things are better left unseen. As for that story, it makes me abandon the little hope I every had in our specie. It only makes me think that all the education, all the means given to the human being to enlighten some more the mysteries hidden behind his Id, his Ego and his Superego, are nothing but vain. The human perceives something, judges it, starts digging further to answer the interrogations and to deepen its judgmenet, gives up because of his laziness and goes back to his first judgement, which most probably is shallow and wrong. Truly sad. It makes me think of one thing Sergej Jesenjin, a Russian poet I loved before I read the following, once said, and that is according to me the proof of how sad all this is. He said:" All women are whores, however my mother is a woman." Is it to think that there is no further possibilites? That once a reality is perceived, there is no other that can stand? As for your question, I cannot give you a complete answer because I am a human and my laziness is hindering any further researches, nevertheless I will try to expose to you my meagre thoughts on the subjects. We seek for what we already have because very little of us realize that it is already in our possession, but we still have eyes to notice it in the possession of others. The human greediness once aroused is difficult to smother. For what we see in the possession of others we will run through deserts and fight the monsters that inhabit our mind, bearing what we desire so much without even perceiving it on our backs during that quest and finally we will die unsatisfied, trying to persuade us that without what we have tried so desperately to conquer our life was worhtless. Pardon me for this reply, that was nothing but the rant of a disappointed soul that is fighting against the flaws of others but that seems to be oblivious to its owns. Thank you very much, once again, for your interesting words.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 - 05:42 pm · For: Chapter 8
The path seeks balance. When the balance is lost, no power can avert the consequences.
Illusion... Maya is as fake as it is real. There is but one truth; Maya, the pastiche of how men experience it. We share union in truth; Maya is falsehood only by the virtue of how it creates a barrier of differences one could easily break, but seems so hard to breach.
Power. To what end, power? Perhaps we will not seek it if we knew what power we already held.
Destruction. What does it mean to destroy, to annihilate?
... Just some food for your thoughts.
Nice to see you back. Thing've been pretty slow recently. New management is in; changes will be made sooner or later.
Still the usual slew of grammar mistakes, but easily overlooked in the face of the story's quality. Nonetheless, developing some of the lesser characters a bit more shouldn't hurt. Though I wouldn't agree with it, I like how you characterized Konan; toughened by the years, but with a lingering humanity hidden beneath layers and layers of pain, loss, and resentment.
Hinata, too... though her condition seems bleak, and beyond salvage. Oh well... change comes, whether you like it or not. The question, then, is: can she adapt well enough?
Naruto... I can say this much: what we seek to flee, we must embrace; what we try to keep, we must let go, in turn.
I assume this story's undergone some significant plot changes since you were last writing. I'm quite interested as to how things would develop...
Farewell, and good luck writing.
Author's Response: What is balance? Balance is nothing but a word invented by the human being to caracterize a reality it has grazed with its mind. Behind what the human sees there is more. Balance? Void. Only nothingness could be qualified as balance. There are no changes, no evolution in balance. Maya is pain and suffering. And yet, everything is Maya. Maya is the reality of the human being, because he judges only with his senses that can so easily mistake. Maya are those wonderful animals we humans destroy, those trees that try desperately to touch the sky. Your words are Maya, as much as the fingers that type this response are. Truth is Maya as well because there is no universal truth, one shared by all the creatures. You who make me think and cry because of how vain my life is are Maya because you cannot prove your existence as being a truth, you only are perceived by the senses of others. I am Maya just as much, because the pain my mother has undergone while giving birth to me is an illusion of her mind. Nothing is true, everything is false. Our eyes, our touch, everything lies. Feelings are Maya, love is, hate is. Power. Power is what all seek because they have no goal in life. We all seek power. In every one of our endeavours, there is that thirst for power that can be read. We do not understand it but we think that with it we could change the world. I want power, because with power I could help the ones that deserve it and punish the evil. But with power comes judgement. Who are those that have power over others to judge who is worthy or not to be tortured or who deserves to be saved? Power is a trap for the fools. And we all are fools. No human being understands nor grasps. Some only graze like you do the surface of what this world is, of what the human is, and others, as I, only think, only speculate, still leaving those disgusting characteristics we all share in their behaviour, rooted in the essence of their soul. Destruction. The only thing the human knows he can do without failing because it is the easiest of things to do. It is so easy to destroy but so difficult to build. Giving birth, would it be to the leaving or to the inanimate, is the most difficult project one can have. Destroying or killing, even those with frail hands that are meant only to write the stories of tormented souls can do. Thank you very much for having ‘fed my thoughts’. It is wonderful to see that there still are humans that can make one think, cry and attempt. Your help throughout this story has been vital and I hope, without wanting to impose myself, that you will keep on reviewing this little piece of writing and that you will keep on exposing your visions that enlighten so well my interrogations about life. New management? Oh dear … the word ‘changes’ unfortunately does not encourage me on keeping on with writing. I am not known for being an amazing adapter. I am asking for forgiveness concerning those mistakes you have found. I have no beta-reader because very little people appreciate my style of writing and even less of them esteem this story they appear to have difficulty to understand. Therefore, I am left alone when it is up to grammar and I unfortunately have never had grammar classes in High School, only conversation. As for the secondary characters, I have been desperately trying to develop them, and yet it is difficult when one is not able to unveil their motivations, their dreams, their necessities. I am not a genius, as much as I regret it, I do not have the talent of decently inventing certain features to individuals I have not created by myself. Thank you for appreciating my poor attempt on seizing who Konan is. I as a woman myself think that with a life such as hers there is no possibility of staying undamaged and sweet as in childhood. Children are like sponges. They suck in all the pain, the injustice and transform it into resentment, stubbornness, cruelty, and other negative feelings. She most probably had to undergo hell all her life long, not only like an orphan but as well as a woman without protection other than her two friends and lacking education, apart the few things Jiraya taught her. As for Hinata, she gives the impression of having entered some kind of blank period in her life where she only thinks when she is told to, acts without reflecting on the consequences and tries to shield herself from the presence of other hurt beings. She is back in the early years of one’s adolescence, when she is the only victim, when she is the only one to suffer, ignoring those other souls that keep travelling the world, they heads bowed, eyes filled with tears. Change is the best thing that could happen to her, it might make her think by herself, however would you consider a being such as her mentally sane enough to be released in this world without a leash? Naruto, in his case, is being tormented to an unimaginable level by a being his body is attempting to eject. But I think Naruto is doing fairly well. He is trying to hinder that thing that is eating him from the inside in harming those humans he keeps on loving even if they hate him. This story has indeed undergone a lot of changes, sad changes. Sorrow and suffering had been added into this story and I fear that I will lose the interest of my readers; however I cannot hold back that need I have to exhibit everything there is about the anguish of people that have not chosen their destinies. Thank you very much for your review. I have missed receiving the thoughts of those that truly pay attention to the humble messages I attempt to send through my writing. Pardon me of asking the following questions, but I am very curious about you. You are the first person in my short life I have come in contact with that contemplates existence the way you do. There is no person of w. I am very curious on knowing why you do so? Of course, I would understand if you prefer not to tell a person you know nothing about it. As well, you must be quite lonesome. There must be so little people with whom you can discuss from equal to equal. You are a very philosophical person and there are so little people that can understand those that have visions that do not conform.rnI am sorry if I am being indiscreet here. Thank you once again for the interest you take in this story, hoping I won’t disappoint you with the upcoming chapters.rn
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 - 05:40 pm · For: Chapter 6
Wow. Hinata's really damaged, isn't she? Naruto's more of a fool than I thought.
This is a bit sad... will they find their happiness?
Sorry for disappearing off the map for so long. Your work is still magnificent. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Oh thank you for the review! You are so sweet! I am the one that should excuse herself. I should get a new chapter soon but I am in a real lack of inspiration. And yeah, Hinata is really damaged but just wait for the next chapter. Naruto is ... Naruto with his naive self. You are so nice, I feel really bad I am not writing fast enough!
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 - 12:25 am · For: Prologue
*FLASH UPDATE*
Did you get the info on the blue-haired member's name? If not, her name is Konan.
Also, when are you updating this again? I hope it's soon. I'll try my best to be patient, because I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Yes, yes, yes! The day after I updated the story, I read chapter 369 and bam! Her name is Konan and she has the most stupid attack I have ever seen! What the heck does she want to do with paper?! Cut her enemies to death?! I would love to update faster ... but my mom is totally harassing me to study more and to become a successful person and to have plenty of money and all that shit! ;.; Even my teachers don’t let me write during their classes (I have the luck not to be obliged to listen to understand all their crap). I got a 3 hours detention tomorrow ‘cause they caught me desperately trying to maybe compose a paragraph for my fic … Man are they bitches! I hope my next chapter won’t disappoint you … The only thing I can say about it is that it will be weird … Thank you for the review! You are the best reviewer an author might wish for ... I am so lucky to have you to help me out!
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 - 07:49 pm · For: Chapter 5
Damn. This is depressing.
One thing that's for sure, though... even a rabbit will bite ya if you got it cornered.
Who did Madara kill to get the mask, if I may ask? And what the hell is he doing to Hinata? (I really don't think I want to know the answer to the second one.)
I'm not surprised Naruto didn't recognize Hinata. Can't blame him for being dense.
Nice work, as always. Can't wait for more.
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-- Tanegawari : It is so freaking depressing, I've got the impression my sister is starting to influence my writing style ... No good! For the rabbit stuff: lmfao. You know when I was writing this chapter I was thinking about that adorable mean bunny that says stuff like: 'It is unfair to you that I am so cool.' or 'It is sad your own mom dresses like that.' I just totally love that bunny! He is so funny. I have no idea who Madara killed to get the mask ... Well, a Oinin for sure, but not one I know ... I don't know one ... It is not Kiba ... even if that could be interesting ... But no ... Madara is using his Sharingan abilities, supposing he has a mangekyô on Hina, Tsukuyomi or something like that ... As for Naruto, what a dumbass! I mean come on! It was almost too obvious that the new chick was Hinata. SOS flushing patrol! Did you get the hint on what Hina and Naru's relationship is gonna be based on? Thank you for the review, and me as well I cannot wait for more XD
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 - 11:55 pm · For: Chapter 4
Well, one thing's for sure. When a man breaks under pressure, it won't be a pretty sight.
Tactically speaking, stealing those documents weren't a good idea. It would've been better if Naruto copied them in some way (spycams and such) instead of stole them. But, then again, it's a necessary plot device, so I won't complain about that.
Hehehe... Zetsu pollinating... I've seen a picture where there were flowers on his venus flytrap head, with Itachi in the background saying to Deidara: "Dude, if we're his most feared enemies, Naruto must really suck." Lol.
Very nice work so far. What exactly does Tobi's mangekyo sharingan do, though? I'm not so certain. Also, from what you told me in the last review reply, the implication is that Tobi will totally kick Madara out of his persona. Can't wait until that happens. Madara is creepy. Anyways, update soon plz!
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-- Tanegawari : The guy that breaks under pressure is Pein or Neji here? Well they both are quite pathetic in this chapter ... They should get together in a bar and talk about their personal problems. And yes, I realize that stealing those papers is not the most intelligent thing, only if Madara, Zetsu and Pein are right when thinking that somebody wants information about the recruiting of members. However, what if the person that steals those documents is very well aware of what they imply and wants to make sure that nobody else discovers it ... for example the Otokage or Danzô's Root ANBU that are starting to get too interested ... I am giving you too many hints. As for that pic with Zetsu's head covered in flowers, it must be so hilarious! I don't know where I got the idea from but it sure is funny to see almighty Zetsu covered in multicoloured blooms. Perhaps the flower X has in the hair is one of Zetsu's? You can never be sure. I have no damned idea what Madara's sharingan does, that is why I don't make him use it yet. I will wait for the next chapter patiently, hoping that maybe this time my computer won't bug twenty times in a row (what is sad is that I am not exaggerating). As for Tobi kicking Madara out, I am not sure it is possible, but there always are ways to get rid of a disturbing part of your soul. And yes Madara is creepy, I completely agree with you. Thank you for the review, it always makes me so happy!
Name: i_lurve_pocky (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 12:35 am · For: Chapter 3
wow i really like this story its preety Amazing :]]
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-- Tanegawari : Thank you! You're so nice!
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 - 10:10 pm · For: Chapter 3
Nice take on Tobi/Madara.
Madara: "World Domination, biotch!! Muahahahahaha!"
Tobi: "I'm with Hina-hime!! YAY!"
I'd still like to see more of the nice Tobi, though. Besides, I think their personalities are completely separated.
I got a suggestion, too- maybe you could make Madara learn a lesson by the time the story ends? Or have you planned everything out already? Either case, do whatever you like. It's your story, after all.
One thing I don't agree with, though, is how you portrayed Neji's personality. He's stoic, but I don't think he's that cold-hearted. That's just my opinion.
I think you are a writer with a style very similar to that of your sister's. It's a brilliant darkness you paint with such a style. But, another thing I do know, is that I've a small stomach for tragedies. I hope this thing has a happy ending. However, if you make it sad, I'll understand. Anyways, good going so far. Keep it up.
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-- Tanegawari : Yeah, I love nice Tobi too, and don't worry, I think Madara is going to get his a-- kicked by his own self ... Well, as for Neji, I never said he was cold-hearted ... just wait and you will understand. I mean what he says is one thing, what he does is another. You know my sis'? Woah! That's nice, and me neither, I don't like tragedies, that's my sis's stuff. In her case, it is truly disgusting. Here goes a hint you might understand for the one that gets killed: 'We look and are strong as steel, but come from the depths' Maybe will you guess this one. The big thing is really stee. Concentrate yourself on what we can do with steel, and it's going to burst into your face.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 - 12:50 am · For: Prologue
Well... I'm not that well-informed myself. I just check things up in Wikipedia once in a while. I'll try my best to keep you informed.
Madara and Tobi are the same person. However, I think Tobi's adorable (more or less), childlike personality dominates, and he only switches into Madara's personality when he's giving orders to Pein. And he only does that when nobody else is around. Madara's a pretty evil guy- the Kyuubi says the guy's chakra is much more evil in essence than its own, so he must be really evil. When Tobi is speaking to Pein as Madara, he practically treats Pein the way Pein treats the rest of Akatsuki (including Tobi when he's not Madara). I think some of these facts and conjectures are subject to later change as the story goes along, though. In any case, Tobi has the sharingan. I don't know how advanced it is, though. Considering the fact that even Pein, the Akatsuki leader, has to obey him, Tobi probably has his own version of the mangekyo sharingan, but I doubt he uses it much when he's in his usual persona.
I don't think you need to re-write Ch.3. I mean, Tobi's usually a nice guy, after all. I think he's the arch-villain only when he's having Pein report to him privately so he can plan things and give Pein orders. Besides, I like his nice persona. (I also like the concept of him having a dual personality, though.)
As for the name of Miss X (the blue-haired woman with the white ring), I have no clue. I'll try to keep you updated on this.
With the current developments, you can go with either action/adventure or romance. It's really up to you. I really like the way it's going so far, so my suggestion is to just keep doing what you're doing.
Lastly, I'm sort of confused about your hint. The 'same hue as steel' part- what kind of hue do you mean? The dull, grayish-silver hue, or the darker, grayish-blue hue? Once again, if you don't like to spoil your story, you don't need to answer this question.
Anyways, good luck on writing this story! Update soon plz!
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-- Tanegawari : I really don't know how to thank you for what you did. You maybe don't realize it, but with the information you have sent me, you have concluded my story! Oh my god, I love the Tobi-Madara stuff! It is going to be great material to work with! As for rewritting chapter 3, I have to because I said Miss X was a Mister X and I doubt she appreciates -_- ... I think the story will be more Action-Adventure, it's for sure because Naru is an ANBU and Hina a Akatsuki pupil, yet I am going to do my best to squeeze sommething more romantic than blood sheds. For the hint, here goes another of my very philosophic thoughts (yeah right, me, a philosopher!). Think about this, each piece of steel is different from the others, there aren't two swords that are made from the same steel, therefore the colour of steel cannot be named, as it always will be different from sword to sword. If I would be you I would concentrate myself on 'Demon and god', and then once you will understand that 'Demons and gods shine in the SAME hue as steel' then you will understand the steel part. (Think about the four elemental gods). I am so grateful for your help, I really don't know how to thank you, but if you ever need some help just ask!
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 31/07/07 - 12:25 am · For: Prologue
I've heard of the Tobito hypothesis, but canonically it seems it's incorrect. Tobi seems to be the alter ego of Uchiha Madara, who is the one who gives all the orders to Pein, the Akatsuki leader. Madara's evil, but Tobi's good (to a very large extent). So, Tobi's like Dr.Jekyll to Madara's Mr.Hyde. But then again, this is fanfiction... canon facts can be altered for the sake of a good story. And your story, by the way, has the potential to become a magnificent one.
By the way, since it seems no one is reviewing this, I'll let you know my guesses as to who'll be killed off- is it Sakura, or is it Neji? You don't have to answer that question if you don't want to spoil the story. I might be way off on this guess, though.
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-- Tanegawari : Okay, I am really sorry of asking this, but do you think you could get me all the information about Tobi and Madara (and the name of Miss X), please *doing my puppy eyes here*? My computer is always bugging when I am trying to go to Google and I am not able to remember the site where all the newest chapter releases are. I really want to have all the facts, it is more challenging! If I understand well, Tobi and Madara are stuck in a same body and they interchange personality? Or are they in two different bodies? And thank you for your compliment, however if what you are saying is right, there will be more action than romance, yet it could help me for the Tobi-Hina relationship (by the way completly un-romantic). -_- Seems like I am gonna have to rewrite chapter 3. But I will understand if you do not have any time to help me and will absolutely not hold a grudge, regading the fact that your reviews already help me by cheering me up. I am sorry to say this, but yeah you did not really guess right, however as you are mentioning the killer of the person that dies, you are quite near. I will give you a hint. 'Demons and gods shine in the same hue as steel.' I am sure that now you know who is going to get killed!
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 30/07/07 - 07:03 pm · For: Chapter 2
Aww. Tobi is so nice. (He should give Hinata a hug.)
The rest of Akatsuki don't seem too bad. Kisame can be a nice guy once in a while (well, he is the best-mannered guy in Akatsuki). Sakura is really superficial, but I can handle that. Can't wait until Naruto and Hinata get together or something.
I think I have a good idea who'll get killed, but I won't spoil it just in case I guess right. Either way, good job. Waiting patiently for an update!
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-- Tanegawari : Tobi is nice, huh? Heheh! Ever hear about the Tobito hypothesis? *Hint* Yeah, Kisame is pretty much the best-mannered guy in the Akatsuki and he seems to be the most loyal one as well. Sakura is bitch, and in my case, I cannot handle it, but well that's my opinion. Yeah me too I can't wait till Naruto messes the situation even more up. Heh, he's such a fool, but he's still cool. And I think that you are thinking right if what I think is what you think about the one that will be dying. But careful not to think that the one that seems to give the impression of being the most attached to her is going to get killed, because he wants everybdy to think that he is attached to her but in fact isn't and might use the death for his own purposes. Thank you for your review, you truly always make my day. You're great!
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 29/07/07 - 09:46 pm · For: Chapter 1
Kisame did a good job teaching Hinata. She's way tougher now. When'll she be a full member? Is she going to steal Orochimaru's ring or something? When'll she come face to face with Naruto? Oh man, I can't wait for an update!
By the way, will this have a happy ending? I hope it will. I can understand if you have to kill off a few characters to get there, but try to keep death to a minimum please? ... Maybe I'm asking too much. It's your story, so do what you want to do. Keep up the good work.
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-- Tanegawari : Oh my gosh, I knew you were a psychic. Yes, yes, yes she will steal Oro's Kûchin. As for Hina being tougher, well she is but doesn't seem so, 'cause she's still the sweet little girl that was afraid of her father's despise. In the beginning she will be Tobi's subordinate, and as she is a woman, the other members, minus Tobi will not want her to become a full member, but then she will steal the ring against the orders and they're kinda gonna be obliged to accept her as an equal. She should come face to face with Naruto in the chapter after the next one. I think only one death will occur, however it will break her, becase the person that dies is somebody very important to her and the person that kills him is very important to her as well. Woah, your review was great! Thank you so much, and I really hope the next chapters will satisfy you.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 28/07/07 - 01:01 pm · For: Prologue
Ahh... very intriguing developments so far. It'll be interesting to see Hinata in the Akatsuki. Who'll she be paired with? Tobi? That'll be nice. Waiting patiently for update.
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-- Tanegawari : Are you reading in my mind? She is paired with Tobi, uh, will be! Woah, you're a psychic! Thank you for your review. I am really happy! You made my day!