Reviews For Invincible
Name: MidnightWolf (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 - 04:10 am · For: Chapter Thirteen Part One
WOOT! I LOVED IT! *dances around throwing cookies*
*people stare bewildered*
what?!
lol
Name: MidnightWolf (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 - 03:51 am · For: Chapter Twelve Part One
OMG POOR NARUTO & MOONLIGHT!!!!!!!
Name: MidnightWolf (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 - 03:21 am · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
stupid uchiha! NO ONE disses THE kakashi. cept naruto when kashi is being perverted.. XD
Name: MidnightWolf (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 - 03:06 am · For: Chapter Six Part Two
damn i was hoping itachi would kill the baka! :( i'm unhappy with sasuke!
Name: MidnightWolf (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 - 02:43 am · For: Chapter Four Part Two
stupid sasuke! what's he thinking? cheating on naruto! psssh the baka.
but i still love shika! i will always love shika!
Name: MidnightWolf (Signed) · Date: 13/07/08 - 02:31 am · For: Chapter Three Part Two
wow that really was fucked up.....
YAY FOR LEMON!!!
Name: hinata_darkmoon (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 - 02:10 pm · For: Chapter Thirteen Part One
great story, lol that was the best proposal ever!!!!
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 08:44 am · For: Chapter Thirteen Part One
omg happy ending! yays! and finally! gaaras dead! woot! i love the ending. it was so sweet and sentimental! ^-^ "This has to be the most fucked up proposal I have ever seen." totally agree! what kinda proposal was that?! and yet i loved it and laughed out loud! what else would we expect? certainly not a fancy dinner and romantic night at the beach! XD and the scene at the very end.....hilarious! i could picture that so well...and i was laughing so hard that i was crying. well trying to hold in my laughter at least. perfect ending! i couldn't imagine a better ending to such a marvelous fic! and yet im sad that its over T^T epilogue maybe? please...? oh well! its up to you! and i love it and cant wait to go and read the next chapter to "Escape"! in fact i will go read it right now! so ja ne till later i guess! *loves* ♥
~lemon
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 - 03:44 am · For: Chapter Thirteen Part One
OMG! I squealed at the proposal part and I squealed even louder when Sasuke said, "Mrs. Uchiha." lol that was funny and cute. xD I'm sad you won't make a third story. SasuNaru fans will have to admit, Machination and Invincible are really good stories to read when you want to hear a love, tragic, adventure fanfic with SasuNaru. ^^
Name: narubaby (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 - 03:36 pm · For: Chapter Thirteen Part One
OMG THAT WAS SOOO FREAKING GOOD
i love ur stories there awsome i liek cried at the end of this story :'(
Name: electrictoaster (Anonymous) · Date: 25/01/08 - 05:48 pm · For: Chapter Thirteen Part One
Amazing ending.
Made me laugh out loud at some parts.
I'm sort of sad that it's over.
But I still have Escape to look forward to right?
Name: Kuryu (Anonymous) · Date: 25/01/08 - 03:56 pm · For: Chapter Thirteen Part One
Yay! It's over and everybody is happy and they're going to get married and Gaara is dead and... wait... GAARA IS DEAD!?!?!? Nuuuuu! TT^TT Why does he always have to die? Is there going to be another story... nah, I guess not. This was a fantastic ending! Thank-you so much for writing it and posting it and stuffs! I look forward to any other stories you have in the genious head of yours! X3
-Kuryu
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 - 05:31 am · For: Chapter Twelve Part One
Narutooooooo!!!
Name: hinata_darkmoon (Signed) · Date: 22/01/08 - 12:39 pm · For: Chapter Twelve Part Two
YAY THEY'RE OK!!!! WOOT! can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 - 05:07 pm · For: Chapter Twelve Part Two
YAAAAAYYYYY!!! Naruto is still alive!? I'm so happy! and they defeated Itachi and Gaara! Sasori being a detective undercover was a big surprise! I'm so happy it was though! xD Everything turned out wonderful. I wish there wasn't just one more chapter. Are you going to write a third one? ^_^
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 - 12:20 pm · For: Chapter Twelve Part Two
WOOOOOoooooT! go you! awesome chapter! yay! naru-chans not dead! and itachi and gaara are gone! i really hope that gaara doesn't come back from the dead again. because that would seriously freak me out...O.O but i love this story! and im so sorry for not reviewing on the other chapters! but im glad to say that i loved them all! very well written and creative! ^-^ i hope that you will continue to grace us with wonderful fanfics! cant wait till ya update again! *loves*
~lemon
Name: Kuryu (Anonymous) · Date: 19/01/08 - 07:46 am · For: Chapter Twelve Part Two
Well, I guess it was inevitable... Good guys always win, eh? Too bad. I was hoping Gaara would escape. Oh well... Good chapter! More lemons please! ^^
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 - 08:59 pm · For: Chapter Twelve Part One
Wh-what? WHAT!? What do you mean Naruto was dead!!!? >_< WHY!? *cries* POOR NARUTO!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!! DAMN YOU ITACHI!!! DAMN YOU TO FUCKING HELL!!! CHAAAARRRRRHHHHAAJAJSHSD NKL! ...and you too Gaara!!! I HATE YOU BOTH! What are you going to do Sasuke? What will happen next SBP? O_o
Name: Kuryu (Anonymous) · Date: 04/01/08 - 01:57 pm · For: Chapter Twelve Part One
Omg! He can't die! Great part! Btw, if Naruto lives or whatever, I think Gaara and Naruto need some... "fun time." U know? Lemonzzz.... Anyway, man Gaara will be freaking PISSED! Can't wait!
Name: hinata_darkmoon (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 - 08:28 pm · For: Chapter Twelve Part One
OMG NARUTO!!!! omg please let him be ok!!! update soon!!!!!!!!
Name: narubaby (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 - 07:57 pm · For: Chapter Twelve Part One
NARUTO DIES update nooooooooooooowwwwwww
Name: myneighborsunshine (Anonymous) · Date: 30/12/07 - 04:16 pm · For: Chapter Eleven Part Three
Fuckkk how could you end it like that? UPDATE.
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 - 12:09 am · For: Chapter Eleven Part Three
OMG WHAT HAPPENED!!!! DID HE SHOOT SASUKE!? I think he didn't. I think he shot Hinata but I may be wrong. He could have killed Sasuke! Or maybe ITACHI! O_o Maybe he betrayed Itachi and killed him instead!!! ...Nahhhh.... Or wait! What if Sasuke pulled a gun out and shot Gaara!!!!? Or Kiba came and shot Gaara! I'm going crazy!!! I wanna know what happened! >_<
Name: Kuryu (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 - 09:34 pm · For: Chapter Ten Part One
Hmmm... I wonder what Kakashi is going to do with this... Can't wait! xD
Name: Kuryu (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 - 09:32 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part One
O! do they get out? they better. I LOVE THIS STORY!