Reviews For Invincible
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 - 11:10 am · For: Chapter Seven Part Three
Aw, it was short, but I don't mind. So get out of your corner and write some more chapters. ^^
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 - 03:22 am · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
UUUUUUUUUUUUUPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATEE!!!!Man, I love your story! >.
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 - 03:22 am · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
UUUUUUUUUUUUUPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATEE!!!!Man, I love your story! >.
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 - 03:22 am · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
UUUUUUUUUUUUUPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATEE!!!!Man, I love your story! >.
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 - 03:01 am · For: Chapter Six Part Three
Hmm...is Temari Gaaras sister in this story? Anyway- awesome chapter...
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 - 03:01 am · For: Chapter Six Part Three
Hmm...is Temari Gaaras sister in this story? Anyway- awesome chapter...
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 04/10/07 - 05:06 am · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
LOL Kakashi thought Naruto shot him! xD That would be funny.
Poor teenage girls, being suffered like that. I can't wait till the next chapter! I'm jumping in my seat already!!!
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 - 11:40 am · For: Chapter Seven Part One
Does this mean that Sasuke and Naruto are back together? YAY!!!! ^^ Awww, why can't Naruto come? It would be really cool if Naruto could help out with the murders and show off his hot stuff to Sasuke in front of Shikamaru! ^^
Name: narubaby (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 - 07:23 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part One
awsomeness and more awsomeness loves it alot
ur a really good writer i hope u get more stories otu there so i can read more
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 - 06:18 pm · For: Chapter Six Part Three
YAY! This made me giddy too! lol Naruto and Sasuke working together to find Gaara! HUZZA!!!! ^^ Also...HAHA Shikamaru! You little bastard, you! SasuNaru 4 eva! P.S. Love KIba's car! xD
Name: Otahri (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 - 11:15 am · For: Chapter One Part One
You know...this little baby of yours is starting to bear uncanny resemblance to...Death Note: The Last Name [second movie]. As in..Naruto is like the shinigami Ryuk. Not sure if you saw that movie, but Ryuk's eyes can basically see all the information about a person - name, cause of death, stuffs like that. Except that Naruto's sudden clairvoyance is in the form of dreams. Anyways, good chapter. Only one problem - how the hell did Sasuke know that Temari had blue eyes and pig tail? As far as I remember, you only mentioned Sasuke getting to the crime scene and catching a glimpse of blond hair before Naruto spoke to him over the phone. Nor did Shikamaru give Sasuke any description of how Temari looked like. But that was just something minor. Nothing much apart from that - you did quite a good job. By the way, congratulations on graduating. Must be cool to be schooled at home, huh?
Author's Response: No, I've never watched the movie. I've never heard of it, actually. Yeah, and the fact that Sasuke somehow knew how Temari looked like... a mistake, lol. I make lots of those because I don't really bother to extra check-over the things I write, and I forget the minor details I've written before. But thanks for the tip!rnrnAnd no... not really. I guess it could be cool getting homeschooled if I had different parents doing it, but my parents are really hard on me. They're always yelling at me to do things right, and they don't help me with the things I don't understand. But anyway, thank you for the congrats and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for taking your time to review! SbP
Name: narubaby (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 - 01:50 pm · For: Chapter Six Part Three
omg juicey lol i love it its realyl good i hope sasuek and naruto get back together i no sasuek was an asshole but come on liek its sasuek hear
Name: Momu (Anonymous) · Date: 25/09/07 - 10:47 am · For: Chapter One Part One
Nyeahhhh..For some reason it feels short,But i'm satisfyed with what happened in this part though.^___^ Finally the story is starting to go somewhere in a faster pace.Good job.^o^
Name: Satoyuki (Anonymous) · Date: 24/09/07 - 08:59 pm · For: Chapter Six Part Three
Damn..... This is so freakin' good, dude. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Name: RamenFox (Anonymous) · Date: 15/09/07 - 12:56 pm · For: Chapter Six Part Two
Awwww!!! Itachi got away. Yay! Kiba came to save the day! How did he get there though!? Oh man, I really hope Naruto still loves Sasuke. FEEL THE LOVE!
Name: Momu (Anonymous) · Date: 14/09/07 - 06:54 pm · For: Chapter Six Part Two
I'm really getting tired of the short chapters.=_= Its reminding me of the Shipuuden episodes.
Name: narubaby (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 - 04:57 pm · For: Chapter Six Part Two
sasuke ok hehehe oh and HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY :>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>:>
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 14/09/07 - 04:45 pm · For: Chapter Six Part Two
finally you asshole. damn right you love naruto!!!!!!stupid sasuke, he doesn't deserve naruto. KibaXNaru all the way!!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 14/09/07 - 01:29 pm · For: Chapter Six Part Two
love it, its really good
Name: RamenFox (Anonymous) · Date: 09/09/07 - 03:00 pm · For: Chapter Six Part One
OMG! WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED!!! DUDE! IS SASUKE OKAY!? LIKE OMG!!!! DAMN YOU WITH THE CLIFFY!!! AAAARRGH! >_< Damn that Itachi! What a bastard!
Name: RamenFox (Anonymous) · Date: 09/09/07 - 03:00 pm · For: Chapter Six Part One
OMG! WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED!!! DUDE! IS SASUKE OKAY!? LIKE OMG!!!! DAMN YOU WITH THE CLIFFY!!! AAAARRGH! >_< Damn that Itachi! What a bastard!
Name: Satoyuki (Anonymous) · Date: 08/09/07 - 11:40 pm · For: Chapter Six Part One
Sorry I haven't been reviewing for a while; I've been very busy. Now, great chapters. I, however, doubt that Sasu is dead yet; that would make you too many enemies from the reviewers.
Name: narubaby (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 - 08:49 pm · For: Chapter Six Part One
OMG SASUKE
sry i never reviewed alot i have leik soo much stuff to do but dont worry im gunan start again :>
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 08/09/07 - 05:30 pm · For: Chapter Six Part One
love it please update soon
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 - 03:05 am · For: Chapter Five Part Two
Next chapgter please! >.< Man this story is just so intense....