Reviews For Techronicles
Name: OnYeen (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 - 05:55 am · For: 1. Senses
Great plot. Please update soon. I've been waiting for four days for the next part to come out. This is number three on my personal favorites.
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-- Artemiy : Thanks a lot for the review! And... anoo... I've only started the story two days ago... Will be updating today, by the way ^^
Name: KyuubiXNarutoRULES (Anonymous) · Date: 19/06/07 - 04:21 pm · For: 1. Senses
Oh good chapter! *claps* I am excited for the next chapter.
*giggles* sneaky rats!
xDDDDD Gai's smile does shine no matter the weather ^_^.
They can fool Shino's bugs? Poor poor shino what ever will he do now?
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-- Artemiy : Thanks for the response! ^^ Well, Shino's not that easy to beat, too. I'm still concerned if I may give him a new technique, though...
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-- Artemiy : P.S. Eh, he didn't get a chance to use it t is time...
Name: KyuubiXNarutoRULES (Anonymous) · Date: 18/06/07 - 04:27 pm · For: 0. Intro
Not a bad start. I like the use of details and such.
It would be nicer if you broke the paragraphs up more...at least you break up the parts where people talk ^_^ some people forget to do that -.-"
You dont know English too well? What language do you speak?
Yeah good luck with next chapter and Later!
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-- Artemiy : Thank you very much for the response ^^' Okay, I'll try breaking the paragraphs more, thanks, it's my lack of experience... My native language is Russian, hence I live in Moscow ^.^