Reviews For Foreign lands
Name: KKEYA2008 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/08 - 08:55 pm · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease write more!
I love it so far!!!!! Its awesome!!!!!
Name: Shmoobunny182 (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 - 05:32 pm · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
i love it!
Name: jojo661538 (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 - 06:54 pm · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
hahahha wow keep up the good work ^_^
Name: emeraldspirit (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 - 09:57 pm · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
updateeeeeee'ttebayo. please?
Author's Response: ok ok, I will!!!! just give me this weekend, its in my head this chap, but I should write a plan, and yes, I'm sorry it's been awhile since i have updated.
Name: emeraldspirit (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 10:23 am · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
this story deserves more reviews, i really like it. the writings really good, and i like how the characters stay in character. there are a few grammer mistakes, but other than that, it's great! update sooon!
Name: Tarkemelhion (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 - 04:07 am · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
omg tack its a good story, but it isnt really my type (no offense) i mean its really well written and its got a good plot, but it just doesnt tickle my fancy
i'll keep reading though :D
Name: Snirp (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 - 09:57 am · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
Aw! its over already?? LOL i loved this chapter poor Naruto his luck really sux. Aniwho keep up the great work and i hope you update soon!
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-- Alice Nine : arhhh how do you know it's over, theres situations.. that could change things very quickly... lol you just have to keep reading, im happy you love it. An next chap will be up, latest day is monday.
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 - 03:05 am · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
This was interesting and the chapter length is perfect.Keep up the good work and update soon.
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-- Alice Nine : thankyou! So you don't think i should make them longer then this? Because I was going to lol
Name: Shadow_Daemon (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 - 12:29 am · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
wow! very interesting XD poor Naruto, I've been over there so I know what its like. I'll be waiting for next chapter *hugs*
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-- Alice Nine : Hey I'm glad you like it, ohh and it would be great to read this story if you know what it's like to be in that situation! *huggles* Well I'm finishing a short story fro school, about vampires! But I have next chapter planned out should be up soon.
Name: vivpiv (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 - 12:30 pm · For: Chapter 1
This looks interesting.There were some spelling mistakes but nothing serious.I like it.
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-- Alice Nine : ekk i know.... sorry about that. I try harder to reread next chap
Name: MurderScene__ (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 - 11:52 pm · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
.-. Gaara is uber cool. Great chapter! The plot thickens, can't wait to read the next chapter!
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-- Alice Nine : I know I love how i protray him XD oh the plot does thicken... Next chap will be bonding//
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 - 12:52 pm · For: Chapter 5: : Jealousy?
YAY! Gaara got Sasuke to talk in english! And he's helping Naruto with his homework. YES! SASUNARU!!! xDDD
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-- Alice Nine : haha Gaara can make Sasuke do alot of things,, ne, haha, i wont give anything away. But yes look forward to Sasunaru
Name: emeraldspirit (Signed) · Date: 13/07/07 - 09:31 am · For: Chapter 4: The red head, The Obsession, The Cabinet
this fic doesnt have nearly enough reviews. i really like it a whole lot. updateee!!! :] please?
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-- Alice Nine : haha well i just updated XD Thankyou for the kind words, lord it's good to know that you really like it, hope you like next chap
Name: emeraldspirit (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 - 05:04 pm · For: Chapter 4: The red head, The Obsession, The Cabinet
oh, i absolutely love it! if comments keep you going i times this by 1,000. keep it up! :]
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-- Alice Nine : kyaa thankyouu!!!! It's good to know you love it, that will keep me going!
Name: firefang13 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 - 07:43 am · For: Chapter 4: The red head, The Obsession, The Cabinet
lol on “Am I make you hard dobe?”
line from sasuke ^_^
plz write more T_T
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-- Alice Nine : haha theres a stroy behind that! It was actaully a mistake by me, but i didnt see it untill i posted the story up, but i think its cute and funny, i mean his japanese he isnt going to be the best at englinsh. Yeah ohh I have some good ideas for next chap
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 01:16 pm · For: Chapter 4: The red head, The Obsession, The Cabinet
I like Gaara, even though he seems like a perv Gaara seems to be more nicer than Sasuke. God I hate Sasuke so much in this fic. That bastard. Neji, Neji is talkative. xD Hope Naruto survives. ^_^
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-- Alice Nine : Yeah I guess it's my goal to make Gaara likable, we will soon find out why. Aw just because Sasuke dosnt like westerners and confuses the hell out of NAruto, yeha I agree he is being a real teme
Name: Sky_blue (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 06:31 am · For: Chapter 4: The red head, The Obsession, The Cabinet
So awesome. Keep it up.
For the record, I hate Ino!
Lin
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-- Alice Nine : I'm glad you like it Lin! and I more then agree about teh Ino comment I like Naruto just want to wring her little neck. but it all adds to the story!
Name: AllieChan (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 - 04:29 am · For: Chapter 4: The red head, The Obsession, The Cabinet
Ahahahaha! You dont know how cute you are Natasha, but I just love the way you write the way you make everthing funny and cute! Some of the situations are so believable yet so hileriously funny at the same time. I must say I feel so bad for Naruto.
Having a crush on someone can be heartbreaking as well as frustrating until they love you back. Lets hope Sasuke snaps out of it and loves Naruto back.
Hahaha I like the throwing chairs comment, yep tash you just took that right out of my life didnt you? I dont know if I should be happy or not that you are modeling Naruto after you and me...are we that much like the stupid dobe? Ok stupid question WE ARE
I also like the fight between Gaara and Sasuke lol I think I hint some jealiously hehe, Kabaneto! Kabaneto! that cracked me up so badly! I love saying japanaese words in katakana!! Homurando! :P bijiniti ahahaha :P
Also that last bit was just priceless 'Am I make you hard dobe?' his english wasnt even perfect but just the fact that Sasuke said 'hard' and 'dobe' in the same sentance was enough *excited* its ok Naruto baby you will make the anti-social-fuckable-hothead hard yourself soon enough! In the mean while there is always masterbation! MASTERBATION! gods gift to the lonely ones lol.
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-- Alice Nine : MASTERBATION, oh yeha alex you would know more then enough about taht wouldnt you? Ok don't answer that I do not wnat to know! I already do! haha. Yeah I know alex, it's hard for me to make my writings sound serious, i should probably set that goal for myself, but i like humor, and it comes to easyily. hahahah dont steal my bijiniti commet!! haha, yeah I loved the writing Gaara and Sasuke fighting, those two cuties! Love ya al!
Name: emeraldspirit (Signed) · Date: 04/07/07 - 12:33 pm · For: Chapter 3: learning a new language
it wasnt too fluffy at all!! shaping up to be a very good fanfic - i like the way you portray the characters - it's very in character, which is something i always like to see in a fanfic. i like that you have gaara lusting after naruto too, stirring up things. very interesting. keep writing!
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-- Alice Nine : haha expect to see alot more Gaara, his like my middle man and he plays a big part in this fic. Thankyou, I really like hearing taht teh chars are in charchter because i reall do tr in that respect~!
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 - 04:46 pm · For: Chapter 3: learning a new language
I wanna know what Gaara and Sasuke were talking about in the car!!! I bet it was something perverted. xD I like everything and dislike nothing.
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-- Alice Nine : wow airgatou!! haha, well next chapter I will do alot of it from Sasuke's POV so that we all now whats actualy going on! I'm glad that you like it all!
Name: Sky_blue (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 - 09:04 am · For: Chapter 3: learning a new language
I liked it. Very good. Though I hope Naruto leaves the full japanese language soon to show Sasuke hes not stupid.
Lin
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-- Alice Nine : I'm so glad you liked it, but in away I love Naruto being so ignorant haha, Maybe I'm just to evil to him
Name: Snirp (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 - 08:35 pm · For: Chapter 2: Koon
lol i've felt that way too...many times i've wanted to shout that i should have been born japanese *sighs* aniwho good story you have going on i'm really interested. i think naruto should have a crush that has potential of being obsession?? aniwho do what you feel is best and i'll be looking forward to your next chapter
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-- Alice Nine : haha yes I have the smae feelings as Naruto to. Yeah I think I will have fun with forming a crush/obbsession, I'll just see where it goes. Thanx for commenting, and I'll be posting again soon
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 10:33 pm · For: Chapter 2: Koon
Yes, please translate. Naruto sounds REALLY gay. Like...hm....like one of those gay guys that check any guy out and wear heavy make up and tries to be a transvestite. But thank god Naruto is not that. Naruto shouldn't be THAT obsessed with Sasuke. ^_^ A little tiny crush would be cute for him though.
Author's Response: I have to think about the translation thing, because on one hand I think it would be good for the reader to be feeling the wya Naruto is feeling. But maybe in scenes were Naruto isnt in it, I will write the sentencees in engliah. AN about Naruto being so gay, I think I will mellow that down then, I don't want him seeming like a transvestite as you say haha. Yeah crushes are cute XD Thankyou for you're advise.
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 02:07 pm · For: Chapter 1
^_^ Sasuke seems like an ass. Poor Naruto must suffer from this. But anyway this story is awesome I love it.
Author's Response: i agree that Sasuke is an ass, Sasuke wa okiinoteme desune? I love writing Naruto in this case though, the story will just get heaps better from here. Thankyou for you're comment! I'll update soon.
Name: Sky_blue (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 01:29 pm · For: Chapter 1
So cute. I hope Naruto knows how to insul them back in Japanese. lol
I love it. Keep it going.
Lin
Author's Response: Thankyou you're nice comment is such a push for me to keep going, it's good to know you love it XD I'll write another chap today