Reviews For Two for one
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 - 09:30 pm · For: New eye technique
sorry and please hurry
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-- sterlor007 : I got the next chapter up. and i got more than what i promised. it was over 2000 words long.
Name: Master_Jeriah_slayer (Signed) · Date: 29/06/07 - 08:19 am · For: New eye technique
niceness, from first to the seventh chap your writing became bearable but..... kyubigan .....you die NOW
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-- sterlor007 : why do people hate it so much?!?... maybe i should quit.
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 29/06/07 - 12:04 am · For: New eye technique
*Takes deep breath* I hate to say this, but it's always weird when people do stuff like Kyuubigan, Byakrigan (ByakuganXSharigan), and etc., but out side of that, it's okay.
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-- sterlor007 : its not really an eye technique, i wanted him to use kyuubi without hurting himself, thats all.
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 - 08:35 pm · For: New eye technique
still a good chapter and good plot twist
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-- sterlor007 : thanks
Name: sasuke kun (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 - 02:52 pm · For: Ino troubles
SUNDAY!!! WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!
JK I THINK IT'S COOL
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-- sterlor007 : ...sasuke doesn't cry... work on ur typing
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 26/06/07 - 07:44 am · For: Ino troubles
Great chapter (sucky cliff-hanger because it's timed perfect) Update soon!!!!
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-- sterlor007 : lol, yea i hate it when people end it up like that on me 2. but its great because its a cliff hanger. thanks for the review.and reading.
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 - 07:41 pm · For: Ino troubles
awesome
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-- sterlor007 : Thank you
Name: baxter54132 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 - 08:00 am · For: First date
very cute. I luv NaruSaku but whatever you decide is fine
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-- sterlor007 : thanks for reading.
Name: angelgirl555 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 - 12:36 pm · For: First date
That was soooo cute.
And Naruto haveing two girlfriends that is sooo cool.
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-- sterlor007 : thanks, and thanks for reading
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 22/06/07 - 04:32 pm · For: First date
Nice (& Funny) chapter, and I really like the NaruXInoXSaku pairing. Can't wait 4 the update!
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-- sterlor007 : thanks for reading!
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 - 03:26 pm · For: Team 7
im not that great of a writer either but you skip around to much ad to random i mean if you do it right it will make it great but our just rushing it up to much
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-- sterlor007 : i meant stop putting the same thing down, but i like the feedback. you put down the same thing 3 times. thats what i want you to stop, please continue with the feedback.:)
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 - 02:56 pm · For: First date
pretty good it seem somewhta life like
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-- sterlor007 : please stop now
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 - 02:17 pm · For: Team 7
im not that great of a writer either but you skip around to much ad to random i mean if you do it right it will make it great but our just rushing it up to much
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-- sterlor007 : lol you put this up 3 times
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 - 02:17 pm · For: Team 7
im not that great of a writer either but you skip around to much ad to random i mean if you do it right it will make it great but our just rushing it up to much
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-- sterlor007 : you used the wrong too, nice grammer...
Name: baxter54132 (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 - 04:22 pm · For: He's MINE!
YAY. THIS IS SO AWSOME. I know i said that before but is is.
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-- sterlor007 : got chapter 5 in now :)
Name: baxter54132 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 05:11 am · For: training time!
sweet this is awsome. NaruSaku all the way
Author's Response: i dont think it will be narusaku, or at least i dont think. anything could pop into my head tho. knowing me:)
Name: Okikuchan (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 02:00 am · For: training time!
I like it by adding Ino to the group gives it an interesting twist. :D keep the chapters coming
Author's Response: yea, already put in the next 2 chapters today! hope you like these chapters too.
Name: angelgirl555 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/07 - 11:13 pm · For: training time!
What is going to happen to Naruto? >_
Author's Response: idk, i haven't made up my mind yet. this is kind of touch and go. i plan on having the next chapter by saturday