Reviews For Sleep Deprivation
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 - 11:22 am · For: Sleep Deprivation
Holy fuck.
Name: Azu-chan (Anonymous) · Date: 14/10/07 - 06:12 am · For: Sleep Deprivation
this is my favourite story on tonfa hands down. ive read it over so many times. i just love it!
Name: Lamerstu (Signed) · Date: 29/07/07 - 01:51 am · For: Sleep Deprivation
Ohh! Hawtness! Loved Tobi and Kisame's reactions! LOL ^_^
Name: Hatake Kyuuki (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 02:46 pm · For: Sleep Deprivation
O.O That was hot! I was peeking through my fingers to read the story most of the time, I was like OMG (but in a good way)! So good! Chu! I glomps you in congrats!
Name: angelgirl555 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 - 04:35 am · For: Sleep Deprivation
OMG! First Itachi is all sweet, but then he is cruel to poor Deidara. I feel sorry for him.
Name: ShadesofDeath (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 06:48 pm · For: Sleep Deprivation
I like it, it's going on my favorites!
luvd it
bye
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 04:06 pm · For: Sleep Deprivation
*nosebleed* Omg that was just awsome! I loved it! Deidara wasjust to amusing and Kisa and TObi were all o.o heheh I loved it! *faves*
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 08:11 am · For: Sleep Deprivation
So hot...*drools and gets some tissues* I so loved it! Even if it ended there I loved it! Deidara and Itachi are so hot together! Once again proving that Uchiha gay boys can't help but love blonds! *giggles* Wonderful job! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 02:40 am · For: Sleep Deprivation
Yay! ItaDei! It's about time someone wrote more of this pairing! *huggles and cookies for you, yeah* I like the story a lot- a nice balance of humor and hotness, and it's nice to see Itachi lose his cool, no?
Constructively, I would say that paragraphing would make it a lot easier to read, but it's great!
Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review ! It made my day. I agree there's too little ItaDei around, which is the reason why I wrote this story. I appreciate your constructive criticism, and we'll see what I can do about the paragraphing. Other suggestions are welcome, too. English is only my third language and I might make many, many stupid mistakes. =) I should probably find a patient beta-reader somewhere. *shrugs* But it's difficult since I only write when I have the time. (Like when suffering from sleep deprivation...) I checked your profile and we seem to share many things in common, even besides ItaDei fandom. I am a dreamer, too, and nealry always lost in my own thoughts. ;-) I also find Shikamaru hot, I read some Sasuke/Itachi, and I abhor Sakura/Sasuke or Sakura/Naruto just like you. Heh... what a long response to your review! I hope I didn't scare you away. -Maria Lances
Author's Response: PS I just now realised this SITE has messed up with the paragraphing! You can find the story also in ff.net, where nothing's messed up. *going to fix the problem*