Reviews For Gardian Angel
Name: kingofswitch (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 - 05:20 am · For: Dog Breath or Loud Mouth
this is really gd bt i hope you end it naruhina plz write more
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 - 09:11 am · For: Chapter 2
I really liked this chapter, and am glad you wrote more. I'm looking forward to the next one!
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 - 09:30 am · For: Dog Breath or Loud Mouth
I like your writing style, and the use of the date at the end was very effective. I like that all the background has been given, with the suggestion that most of the action is going to happen on this one day (I don't know if that's true?). But I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
Just one small thing - 'Guardian' from the title is spelt with a 'u'. I didn't notice any other mistakes, but it's a shame to lower the fic with a small mistake in such a visible place :).
Name: lovin_Garra36 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 - 08:54 pm · For: Dog Breath or Loud Mouth
Me like alot! Please update really soon!!